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Posted: 8 years ago
#51
Lovely update ⭐️
So both Veer n Sanjana are happy but Raghav and Naina not look happy..
songs are b'ful ..
waiting for next Jas.
thanks for pm.😃
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Posted: 8 years ago
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it's really beautiful, lovely couple😛 Well done👏
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Hum Dil De Chuke Sanam ( I Have Given My Heart Away Darling) Part4

This FS is ending here.I thank each of u for commenting n supporting.


I dedicate this to Riana who gave jodi names to Veer Naina(She called them VeeNa though till now others called Veer Sanjana with this name) and Raghav Sanjana(SanGhav)



Naina cried in her room.
Naina:I can't see Raghav with Sanjana.I feel bad.But why?
She remembered her moments with Raghav.
Naina burst into tears again:Because I love Raghav.I love you Raghav.When I wanted Amit in my life he left me.When i was ready to be Veer's wife he left me.Now when my heart is craving for Raghav he can't be mine.What a fate!


Ira got married in a month.

After a week ...

Raghav Sanjana Veer Naina's wedding was going to take place.

Naina got dressed up a bride.She could'nt smile.Her eyes were full of tears.



Hum dil de chuke sanam
Tere ho gaye hain hum, teree kasam
Oh ho ho hum dil de chuke sanam
Tere ho gaye hain hum, teree kasam

Yeh duneeya kare sitam tujhpe mitnege hum, teree kasam

Oh hum dil de chuke sanam, tere ho gaye hain hum
Teree kasam - (2)

Naina:Raghav...I am sorry..I have given my heart to you,but you did'nt see it.But i won't force you to look at my heart as you can't accept my love..your love is for some one else.
Umide tumhee se hain mere sanam
Thama hai tumhara hee yeh daman
Ho bhulenge kabhee naa abb tumhe hum - (2)
Oh hum dil de chuke sanam
Tere ho gaye hain hum, teree kasam, teree kasam






Raghav wept: I Have Given My Heart Away my Naina.My heart is only for you.But
I am a jinx who can't get love.So I don't need my heart now.
Teree yado ke saye me gujregee yeh jindagee
Us khuda ke bad toh puja hogee bas teree
Chahe jo manglo sab tumhara hai - (2)
Ho ham dil de chuke sanam
Tere ho gaye hain ham, teree kasam

Raghav Naina moved out of their room painfully to reach the wedding place.They were numb.


Ho ham dil de chuke sanam
Tere ho gaye hain ham, teree kasam, teree kasam




Raghav's face was veiled.He tied mangalsuthra around the neck of Sanjana whose face was
veiled.


Sudha thought:Now my Veer is going to wed that stupid Naina.I don't know how
Naina brainwashed my Veer.
Sudha:Where are Veer Naina?Next is their wedding.


Suddenly they heard a voice from behind:No need of that mom.

They saw Veer.
Sanjana came from behind.
They were shocked.
Pam:Sanjana!If Sanjana is here then whom did Raghav marry?
What is this Sudha bhabhi?
Sudha:I can't understand anything.
Raghav who was shocked unveiled his face.His bride too unveiled her face with a shock.
It was Naina.Raghav Naina were shocked to see each other.
All were shocked.
Pam:Raghav Naina only married.
Raghav:Trust me.I did'nt know that it was Naina.
Naina:Even I did'nt know that it was Raghav.
Indumati smiled:But can you both deny that you both wished to marry each other?
Raghav Naina were stunned.They were embarrassed too.

Veer:What did you both think of us?That we can't understand your feelings?
Raghav Naina were confused.
Ragh:What are you saying Veer?
Veer looked at them:Naina...now I love you.So I understand your feelings.I realized that
you don't love me like I love you.I saw love in your eyes.But it was not for me.
Naina was upset:i am sorry Veer.
V:No need of sorry Naina.You have full right to reject me and marry the person you love as
I am not worth enough for you.

Naina became emotional.
Sanjana:I too understood that you don't love me the way you used to love me long ago.
I felt sad.But i realized that I don't deserve your love as I myself rejected it once.
Raghav felt sad:Sanjana...
Sanj:No need of any explanation Raghav as it's not your fault.




Indumati:You both were fools to not understand each other's love.But i understood it.
Raghav Naina were shocked.
Veer:Sanjana and I realized that you both were disturbed during the engagement party.
We noticed that you both were looking at each other secretly.We realized your
love for each other.We shared our pain with each other and of course we were sad.
But as we both love you both we wanted both of you to be happy.We decided to unite you
guys.So we discussed it with Dadi.
Indu:I too had noticed the hidden love in both of you after the marriage got
fixed with Veer and Sanjana.So when Veer Sanjana talked to me about uniting you both
I too supported them and thus we got both of you married in a unique way.
Raghav Naina could'nt believe it.
Naina:Dadi..you too?

Raghav:Thank you so much dadi.You are the best.

He hugged Indu.She smiled.
Veer:Naina...you are with the person you love.Raghav.Raghav..you deserve a gem
like Naina.
Naina:Thank you Veer for understanding me.

Veer smiled.
Raghav:I have no words to thank you.
He hugged Veer.
Raghav looked at Sanjana:Sanjana...I..
Sanj:It's ok Raghav.You are written in Naina's destiny..not mine.I understand it.
All the best for the married life.
Raghav smiled emotionally.


Raghav Naina got blessed by all.
Indumati :You both are a pair made in heaven.
Naina's mother hugged her:Finally you got the best husband in this world as I wished.
I really wanted you to be with Raghav and it happened.

Naina was surprised.



Raghav Naina in their room...


R:I can't believe that we got married even without knowing each other's love.It's dream come
true.
N:You are right Raghav.I still can't believe it.But now we know that we love each other.

Ragh:Yes...but still we need to confess our love.Right?
Naina blushed looking at him.

N:Raghav..this wedding attire is very heavy.Let me change and come.

Ragh:You are right.Wear what makes you comfortable.
Naina went and wore a night suit.Then she came back.
Raghav smiled at her.
He looked at her deeply.

She blushed:Why are you looking at me like this?

Ragh:Naina...after realizing my love for you only
I understood that what is true love.You are my only love Naina.My true love.
Naina felt heavenly.
N:I thought I knew what love is from Amit.But from you I realized what true love is
and how to love unconditionally.I love you Raghav and I belong to you completely.
They shared a romantic eye lock.
Suddenly they noticed moon in the dark sky.
Ragh:You look so beautiful that even the beauty of moon is nothing in front of your beauty.
She blushed.




Chand chupa badal me sharma ke meree jana
Sine se lag ja too balkhake meree jana





Naina tried to move away shyly.Raghav pulled her closer.
She rested her head on his shoulder blushing.

Gumsum sa hai gupchup sa hai, madhosh hai khamosh hai
Han yeh sama, han yeh sama kuchh aur hai
Han han han chand chupa...



He removed her earrings.

Then he went closer to her ears
whispering romantically:I love you my darling Naina.
She blushed.

Najdikiya badh jane de, arre nahee baba nahee, abhee nahee nahee nahee
Dur se hee tum jee bhar ke dekho, tum hee kaho kaise dur se dekhu
Chand ko jaise dekhta chakor hai



Raghav removed her necklace and caressed her neck sensually.Naina
closer her eyes feeling his touch.

Aye gumsum sa hai, yeh sama kuchh aur hai
Ho ho ho chand chupa badal me...



Raghav blew air at her face making her eyes open.She became shy
seeing his romantic naughty smile on his face and closed her face
with her palm.

Aaja re aaja re chanda kee jab tak too naa aayega
Sajana ke chere toh dekhne yeh man tarsa jayega





Raghav touched her palm with his lips.Feeling him on her palm
she removed her palm from his face.

Naa naa chanda too nahee aana too jo aaya toh
Sanam sharma ke kahee chala jaye naa



They shared a passionate eye lock.

Aaja re aaja re chanda too lakh duwaye payega



They held each other tightly.


Naa naa chanda too nahee aana too jo aaya toh




He caressed her face.



She blushed.


Sanam sharma ke kahee chala jaye naa


She too started caressing her face.
Aaja re aaja re chanda too lakh duwaye payega




Raghav embraced her passionately.Naina felt nice.
Naa naa chanda too nahee aana, varna sanam chala jayega


They came more closer to each other and danced romantically.
Aanchal me too chup jane de, arre nahee baba nahee,
abhee nahee nahee nahee
Julfo me tum kho jane do, arre nahee baba nahee, abhee nahee nahee nahee



Naina sat on Raghav's lap.

Raghav moved towards her lips sensually.
Naina closed her eyes receiving his love.
Pyar toh nam hai sabra kaa humdam, woh bhala bolo kaise kare ham

Raghav switched off the light and romanced her without knowing that the shameless moon was watching their passionate romance.
Sawan kee rah jaise dekhe mor hai, he rehne bhee

The end

Edited by jasminerahul - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
#54
First..me..😃
Wow b'ful update n b'ful ending ..👏
Jas..loved it ..⭐️
Dadi..Veer n Sanjana helped Raina to understand their love more..❤️
Raina moments so cute n lovely ..songs..lovely too..⭐️
Thanks for this story ..keep writing.👍🏼


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Posted: 8 years ago
#55
Raina wedding took place in a unique way. Raghav put mangalsutra in Naina's neck thinking she was Sanjana but surprisingly when Sanjana was not at the mandap Raghave realized that it was Naina. Raina's dialogues with Veer & Indumati was very much emotional. The title song & chand chupa badal main suited these occasions well. I thought you would also unite Veer & Sanjana.
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Posted: 8 years ago
#56
thanks 4 a fab SS! lovely update! Raghav n Naina married! this was planned by dadi, Veer n Sanjana! nice end, well written
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Posted: 8 years ago
#57
Nice update dear
Loved it!!
Naina realized her love for Raghav but couldn't confess it
Both Raghav and Naina kept their feelings to their heart and decided to get married to their respective fiance .
Loved the twist !!
Naina and Raghav are married and they were United by veer, Sanjana and dadi
Raghav and Naina were thankful to veer and Sanjana
Lovely ending dear !!
Nice song

Thanks for the pm dear
:)

Loved the twist in the story most
The scene were Raghav realises his love for Naina was most lovely scene !!

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Posted: 8 years ago
#58
Naina realizes she loves Raghav but she and Raghav
have not confessed their feelings and had to get married
with their chosen partners but wow its turned out that
Naina and Raghav did marry each other that was
an awesome turn of event
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Posted: 8 years ago
#59
wow wonderful update and ending loved it thank you for pm.
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Posted: 8 years ago
#60
Awww what a sweet ending 😳 i really loved the way Raina got together, how different 😉
Raina approached the mandap sadly, but they got the best surprise of their lives ⭐️
Raina's suhaag raat was romantic ❤️ ❤️ ❤️ this scene should have been in the actual show!
Now coming to my most loved bit, the sweetness of Veer and Sanjana! 😳 I've to say, the two of them really stood out in this episode 👏 their actions were heartwarming 👏 they truly proved their sincerity 👍🏼
Simply put, your ending is truly a happy ending with all characters being their best 😳 very very sweet indeed ❤️

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