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Posted: 3 years ago
#11

Oh my god it was damn relaxing........

Finally shiva made raavi hus priority.....

After watching today's episode i was literally feeling like puking.....

But reading this made me a little better😇

Hope so ij the show to shiva makes raavi his priority and for god sake give his bhabhi only tag of bhabhi not tag of maa and all and make her stick with them......

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Posted: 3 years ago
#12

Beautiful os

Dil ko itni sukoon mila hai isse padhkar ab kya batau

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Posted: 3 years ago
#13

Sham, You are finally here with your most beautiful ideas🤗

Pehchana iss baadal ko jo kabhi nhi barasti😆 . Ok now jokes apart

Just gonna give you dher saari pappis for your first & oh so beautiful OS❤️


I love your poetic influences, as I already said it but your way of writing for the show touched my soul


Now coming to the OS. I have a different style of commenting by quoting lines so lets start:


Tera Amitabh Bachchan, SRK banne ki koshish kar rha tha aur tune...tune kya kiya Aruna Irani ban kar uski saari mehnat par Paani phek diya!!!


Do you know what kind of maniac laughter I gave for this line. Hats off🤣


This was Shiva, 22 years old Shiva Pandya raised by Dhara, who had been , unknowingly implanting these words in his mind since he was 12. "Itne saalo tak tujhe apni bache ki tarah pala hai" were her constant words. She had been feeding this program in his little CPU for the past 10 years. No wonder why he placed her next to God. He was made to think of her as a God. He was literally indebted to her for his upbringing.


Finally, Uff Finally I hereby declare this particular paragraphs as the best-est one I ever read. Someone told how manipulative is Bhabhi Mahan!!! Everyone can blame Shiva for his andh bhabhi bhakti but the psychological reason behind it is something which can be understood by those who well know what is meant by MANIPULATION. Thanks a lot for pinning this😭


"Sorry bhabhi , par vo ..vo main aapke saath nhi rook paaunga. Aapke saath to yahan sab hai na , mera Raavi ke saath jaana zyada important hai. Ye Gadheri jab poori fit rehti hai to yahan wahan geerti rehti hai, aisi haalat mein main koi risk nhi le sakta. BIWI HAI MERI USKA KHAYAL RAKHNA MERI ZIMMEDARI HAI."


Ek hi toh dil hai apne paas?? Kitne baar jeetogi Surmayi❤️. The Raavi Pandya Ka Pati SHIVA PANDYA version is something I adore, cherish & love the most till date. If bhabhi ki beizzati gave my burning jalta hua dil ko thandi sukoon then this line gave me goosebumbps. Sacchi!!


All over this OS is mera favorite list mein now❤️.

Also Now it's a tradition from my side....


Baadal baras gya shaam ki thandak se

Do write more & let me read all your beautiful words

Baadal loves you😳

Edited by Shru_thebaadal - 3 years ago
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Posted: 3 years ago
#14

Originally posted by: Shru_thebaadal

Sham, You are finally here with your most beautiful ideas🤗

Pehchana iss baadal ko jo kabhi nhi barasti😆 . Ok now jokes apart

Just gonna give you dher saari pappis for your first & oh so beautiful OS❤️


I love your poetic influences, as I already said it but your way of writing for the show touched my soul


Now coming to the OS. I have a different style of commenting by quoting lines so lets start:


Tera Amitabh Bachchan, SRK banne ki koshish kar rha tha aur tune...tune kya kiya Aruna Irani ban kar uski saari mehnat par Paani phek diya!!!


Do you know what kind of maniac laughter I gave for this line. Hats off🤣


This was Shiva, 22 years old Shiva Pandya raised by Dhara, who had been , unknowingly implanting these words in his mind since he was 12. "Itne saalo tak tujhe apni bache ki tarah pala hai" were her constant words. She had been feeding this program in his little CPU for the past 10 years. No wonder why he placed her next to God. He was made to think of her as a God. He was literally indebted to her for his upbringing.


Finally, Uff Finally I hereby declare this particular paragraphs as the best-est one I ever read. Someone told how manipulative is Bhabhi Mahan!!! Everyone can blame Shiva for his andh bhabhi bhakti but the psychological reason behind it is something which can be understood by those who well know what is meant by MANIPULATION. Thanks a lot for pinning this😭


"Sorry bhabhi , par vo ..vo main aapke saath nhi rook paaunga. Aapke saath to yahan sab hai na , mera Raavi ke saath jaana zyada important hai. Ye Gadheri jab poori fit rehti hai to yahan wahan geerti rehti hai, aisi haalat mein main koi risk nhi le sakta. BIWI HAI MERI USKA KHAYAL RAKHNA MERI ZIMMEDARI HAI."


Ek hi toh dil hai apne paas?? Kitne baar jeetogi Surmayi❤️. The Raavi Pandya Ka Pati SHIVA PANDYA version is something I adore, cherish & love the most till date. If bhabhi ki beizzati gave my burning jalta hua dil ko thandi sukoon then this line gave me goosebumbps. Sacchi!!


All over this OS is mera favorite list mein now❤️.

Also Now it's a tradition from my side....


Baadal baras gya shaam ki thandak se

Do write more & let me read all your beautiful words

Baadal loves you😳

Shruuuu❤️

More pappies back to you. Thank you for this lovely lovely review. The way you got the gist of all and noticed all the efforts I took is just so overwhelming.

I am so glad You liked this one. Surely gone write more very soon. 🤗

Also, let this baadal barsing always. Itni jaldi don't stop😭

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Posted: 3 years ago
#15

What a gadheri I am 😂

What a reality check to dharaa

I always wanted shiva to realize his priorities



We have seen shiva ki halat when his dhara bhabhi was in hospital but I really wanted to see his condition when same happens with his raavi and how beautifully you explained and wrote his feelings

I agree!!! Dhara has feed these words into shiva's CPU

Shiva ki alter egoo 🥺😂

Both of his alter ego were so good explaining the title 😉

The last part OMG I loved itttt dhara's sugar coated wordsss 🤭😂😂



I loved this os I loved every bit of this os

You write beautifully do write more

Idk how many times I have wrote beautiful but this is such a nice os. 💗

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Posted: 3 years ago
#16

Originally posted by: Masakalii

What a gadheri I am 😂

What a reality check to dharaa

I always wanted shiva to realize his priorities



We have seen shiva ki halat when his dhara bhabhi was in hospital but I really wanted to see his condition when same happens with his raavi and how beautifully you explained and wrote his feelings

I agree!!! Dhara has feed these words into shiva's CPU

Shiva ki alter egoo 🥺😂

Both of his alter ego were so good explaining the title 😉

The last part OMG I loved itttt dhara's sugar coated wordsss 🤭😂😂



I loved this os I loved every bit of this os

You write beautifully do write more

Idk how many times I have wrote beautiful but this is such a nice os. 💗

Pihuuu❤️

Thank you so muchhhh🤗

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Posted: 3 years ago
#17

Brilliant, sad Raavi had to endure so much, how it must have been to see shiva save Dhara first.

Glad he changed his priorities at the end

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Posted: 3 years ago
#18

Yeh parh ke aisa lag raha hai ke meri dil ki saari tamanna, farmahishein gin gin ke poori ki gayi ho.


Shiva finding the decorations and heart shaped card ...and it's impact on Shiva .. how beautifully you've articulated it 😚


Shiva ko Raavi ka darje ka ehsaas hona .. the fact that wife should take precedence over Bhabi .. how I longed to watch this... wish the show had HALF the storytelling skills you do.


What a lovely piece Shampoo .. mann bhar aya parhke .. bohot bohot pyara likha🤗

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Posted: 3 years ago
#19

Beautiful!!❤️❤️


Haha with your warning, I got super excited to see more bashing of Dora by Shiva. There should be a part 2 of this where there's similar crossroads again and Shiva chooses Raavi over Dora. Mainly to.see that even when there's no tlother family member, whom will Shiva save. That will be the full circle.


But my heart went out for Raavi when Shiva chose Dhara over her. Great OS!

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Posted: 3 years ago
#20

Originally posted by: barkhaa_tpm

Yeh parh ke aisa lag raha hai ke meri dil ki saari tamanna, farmahishein gin gin ke poori ki gayi ho.


Shiva finding the decorations and heart shaped card ...and it's impact on Shiva .. how beautifully you've articulated it 😚


Shiva ko Raavi ka darje ka ehsaas hona .. the fact that wife should take precedence over Bhabi .. how I longed to watch this... wish the show had HALF the storytelling skills you do.


What a lovely piece Shampoo .. mann bhar aya parhke .. bohot bohot pyara likha🤗

Barkhaa😚❤️

I am sooo happy you liked this one!

Raavi should have always preceded Dhara. How I wished this to happen in the show. Nevertheless, I tried my best to justify the reason behind Shiva 's blind love for bhabhi--- years and years of manipulation 😭

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