Rishton ka pinjra ft. shivi ff part 1 updated

Introduction

hello everyone reema this side i am back with the another story so this story have totally different plot from the show

Shiva Pandya son of darshan Pandya and suman Pandya ; the famous business tycoon love his family a lot specially children he gain all the success , respect and love due to his hard work he is short temper boy he hate those people who takes wrong path for gaining success.. he is the dream boy of all the girls..

Raavi shah daughter of Jagat and Prafulla... married to the devil at very young age only due to her mother greed... she is not at all happy with her marriage as his husband use to beat her in small small mistake OR you can say he do domestic violence on her... the only one reason that why she was living with him was her son Rudra.. Aakash her husband give him warning that if she will leave him then her son will be no more.. and as a mother no mother will want that her child die in front of her eyes....

the cutest boy Rudra.. OR you can say our Puchku and ladla of her mother.. naughtiest boy.. he is just 1 year old... listen to his mother only

Aakash Roy
husband of Raavi.. he is just a devil he choose wrong path to gain success but didn't succeed so he is using raavi for it... he use to threat raavi that if she will do police complain or will leave him then he will not spear Rudra

( rest all the character are same like the show )

the one and only mistake which raavi does to trust him and she got pregnant and her biggest weakness was her child which Aakash knows

( here shiva and raavi didn't know each other and their family also have no relationship)

ab kya raavi nikal payegi iss rishton kai pinjre sai

so this is for the introduction part hope you all like it

comment your reaction in the comment box miltai hai apne next part mai tab tak kai liye god bye and Take care

THANK YOU

REEMA

Part 1

so hello everyone here is part 1 of RISHTON KA PINJRA hope you all like it so without wasting much time lets get started.....

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in a room

girl :- plz... aaahhh ...... plz...mu...mujhe....jane ...do....aaaahhhh... mai...aa..age..sa....sai koi....aahhh...galti..nhi karogi plz mujhe chod do ( she was shouting in pain and pleading him n sobbing )

a boy is beating the girl with the belt

boy :- teri himat kaise hui mere sai zaban ladane ki huh ? aaj mai tujhe chodunga nhi dekh tu mai kya karta hun ( while beating her very hard )

girl :- aa.. aage sai aa...apsai kuch ...nhi kahungi... lekin plz mujhai ab..abhi chod dijiye plz...

boy stop hitting and hold her hair

girl :- aaaahhhhh ( shouts + sob )

boy :- kya hua baby girl toh tu itne mai hi dar gyi tujhe pasand nhi aaya kya mera pyaar

girl :- mujhe jane do

boy :- oh ho jane dun kya mai apne baby doll ko aise kaise abhi toh maine shuru kia hai aur tumhai yaad hai na agar tum saza nhi bhukto gi to tumhare ladle ko voh saza bhugatni padegi

girl :- nhi please rudra ko kuch mat karna jo tum bologe mai voh karungi per plz rudra ko kuch mat kehna

Aakash :- ohhh tumhe apne bete ki chinta ho rhi hai.. koi baat nhi toh tum hi bhugat lo saza.. aur vese bhi meri pyaari raavi toh apne bete kai liye kuch bhi kar sakti hai na ( he roam his second hand over her face but she turn her face )

then he again started beating raavi from the belt and she was only pleading him to leave her

on other side

saibaj :-sir aaj aapki 2 appointment hai ek toh mr khurana kai saath aur dusri miss rathore kai saath

boy :- ok great aur aaj ka schedule mujhe mere cabin mai bhej do baki ka mai vahi dekh lunga

saibaj :- ok sir

boy leave

suhana :- oh my god koi itna acha kaise ho sakta hai.. shiva sir ka nature kitna acha hai.. aur voh kitne hot hai... mai toh insai aaj hi bhaag kar shaadi kar lun

saibaj :-oh hello madam khyalo ki duniya sai bahar aa aur koi acha sa ladka dhund kar shaadi kar le kyunki shiva sir kai liye toh koi pari hi aayegi

suhana :- ho tum kehna kya chahte ho pari nhi hun

saibaj :- lagti toh nhi

suhana :- tumhari toh mai

on the other hand

Aakash get a phone call so he leave from from their and raavi was keep lying on the floor unconscious the blood is coming from her mouth and the the marks are clearly visible of the belt on her body and here rudra comes while crawling he comes to raavi and start patting on her cheeks

rudra :- ma...ma.....ma ( he was trying to make raavi conscious ) ma..ma...ma ( he started crying )

on which raavi slowly slowly open her eyes and saw rudra

raavi :- pu.. puchku

rudra :- ma...ma..ma ( while crying )

raavi :- haan mumma yhi hai aapkai pass puchku sshhh ( she tries to get up but her body was paining like hell ) aahhh

rudra start crying louder seeing the state of raavi

raavi :- puchku nhi beta mumma thik hai esse rote nhi hai... tu toh mumma ka god boy hai na ab jaldi sai chup ho ja aur aa mumma pass

rudra was now silent and goes to raavi he by mistake put his hand on raavi wound

raavi :- aahhh

rudra again start crying

raavi :- nhi puchku aapne kuch nhi kiya hai aap kyu ro rahe ho ssshh beta.. chal mai tujhe khichdi khila deti hun tune kuch nhi khaya hoga..

where rudra got happy

raavi pov :- bhagwan ji aur kitna sehna padega mujhe ab aur nhi saha ja rha thak chuki mai essi jindagi sai aakash mujhe choti choti galtion per martai hai.. nhi chahiye tha mujhe essa pati lekin maa unhe toh sirf paisa dikhta hai.. paiso ko dekh ker voh itni lalchi ho gyi ki unhone mujhe ek rakshas kai saath band dia kyu maa kya galti thi meri.. lekin chahe kuch bhi ho jaye mai apne bete per ek bhi kharoch aane nhi dungi uskai liye chahe mujhe kuch bhi karna pade..

rudra :- ma..ma..ma

raavi trace broken as rudra call her

rudra start roaming his hand on stomach.. raavi giggle seeing rudra cute antics

raavi :- aarre mere puchku ko bhuki lagi hai aja chl kar kuch khila deti hun

then raavi pick rudra in her arms although her body was paining due to marks which her husband have given to her but she know her son loves to be in her arms.. then she took rudra to other room to feed him khichdi

other hand

rishita and dhara were working in the kitchen

rishita :- bhabhi khana toh ban gya hai ab aap jao yeh kitchen mai saaf kar deti hun

dhara :- arre koi baat nhi yeh kaam toh mai kar leti hun tu jake shiva , dev , krish ko utha de

rishita :- arre dhara bhabhi shiva toh subh subh nikal gya tha voh aaj uski important meeting thi na

dhara :- acha.. fir tu un dono ko utha de

rishita :- thik hai bhabhi

then rishita leaves

dhara pov :- hayye somnath mere iss kheltai pariwar ko kisi ki nazar na lage.. aur aapka bahut bahut thank you shiva ko itni bada aadmi banane kai liye aur vese aap banate kaise nhi mere bache nai din raat ek kar diye thai jab jake isse yeh mukam mila hai mujhe pata hai kaise raat raat bhar jak isne kitni mehnat ki hai.. bas ab aap usko ek essi jeewan saathi de do jo har sukh dukh mai uska saath de uski dhal bankar khadi rahe...

her trace broke when gombi call her

dhara :- ji gombi

gombi :- dhara jaldi nashta de fir kaam per bhi jana hai

dhara :- ji gombi lai..

in the hall

dhara :- gombi le lo.. aur haan aine na lunch pack kar dia hai yeh shiva ko de dena usse kitni baar bola hai subh bhukh nhi jaya kare per voh sunta hi nhi aur usse bahar ka bilkul khane mat dena aapko pata hai na usse bahar kai khane se allergy hai

gombi smiles

gombi :- acha meri maa mai bol dunga usse aur yeh lunch bhi de dunga... ab khush

dhara :- haan

gombi :- acha ab mai bhi jata hun

dhara :- thik che

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so guys aaj kailiye bas itna hi... miltai hai apne next part mai tab tak kai liye tak care and bye

sorry for the error in above text

Thank you

REEMA

Looking forward to read how raavi will meet shiva and their dynamics