Shivi TS: Sab khatam ho gaya? Last Part updated!! pg 12 - Page 6

AHHHHH

SUKOON, THATS WHAT THIS GAVE ME

SHIVA KO DO CHAAR THAPAD BHI PADNE THE

YAYAYYYYY

RAAVI MAAMI KE GHAR NAHI GAYII

THIS WAS JUST PERFECT JAAN

IM GLAD KI AAJ BHI WE THINK THE SAME WHEN IT COMES TO STORY LINES😭😭

NOW PLS DONT DISAPPEAR AGAIN AND READ MY CHOTU MOTU SE STORIES THAT I HAVE WRITTEN

So Good..

Shiva blasting Disha, then getting blasted by Dhara…

all very much needed Conversations, we never got to see👏

I hope everyone gets crazy looking for Raavi and she stays away for a bit…

She really needs a break

Oh How I've cried after reading this piece!

Howwwwww...

I couldn't stop myself. This was supremely emotional. I personally love gut wrenching pieces and this was one of those!

A big thanks for writing this because I have been wanting Raavi's reality-check/breakdown since Disha entered the show. Always a treat to read. Always.

It was good that he gave back to Disha but at the same time my mind kept chanting 'too little too late buddy'. Sigh.

What plethora of hurt she is feeling!

Cannot wait for the next one AT ALL!!!

Like seriously...can't wait.

Do update soon bub.

PS : I am so glad you're back because now I can comment on your stories first hand...been perusing through some of your old works and have been in absolute awe. ❤️

This is soooo goooooodddddd!!! How I love this.. and the reality check was just *chef’s kiss*

Please continue soon!

👏What a fabulous update, finally Shiva getting a reality wake up call, so glad Dhara spoke up, and Suman kept her mouth shut. Can’t wait for your next update

Finally someone to give a reality check to Shiva!!

Loved the update 😍❤❤

Loved it….

Update soon

Both the update were really great.

Can't wait for the next update

Okay... So here after wiping my tears.😭

You just have terrific skills at writing.. Kudos❤️❤️

Uffff.... This held soooo much intensity. Shiva's dhakka to disha would have held soo much impact if he had done that immediately or earlier when disha made her first entry... Now whats the use shiva.

Raaavii... My heart literally breaks for that pure hearted girl who has always loved selflessly..she is one who always goes out of her way to make life beautiful for others.

What did she get in return... Abuses and cruel behaviour from her so called mother figures and so called love.

What shiva is now getting is his karma... What they did to raavi deserves severe punishment and repentence.

I liked how dhara showed him the mirror👍🏼

Would be waiting for next part with me tissue box ready.

Pls pls post the next part…