Shivi os- kuch kisso ke hisso mai part 1 updated pg 3 - Page 2

Touched my heart♥️

My Raavi💔 My Shiva😒

Bass happy ending dena pls 😇

Loved it 🤗

Continue phastum phaastttt🥳

This is so good.. Please continue 🥺

Kya yaar rula hi dia. Bechare. .😭

Originally posted by: EuphoricDamsel.

Ayee ye kya bhasad hai?

Pura karo isko?

Hainnnnnnnnnnnnnnn//

Hayyiiilllloooo//

Ma'am wut-

Huhn?

Ek tho mujhe ye gaana bht pasand hai.

Bht jyaada hi...

Aur upr se angst laga di aur tu isme...

Ab mereko rona tho ayega hi na...💔

Ye aayega na age?

Bhasad kr ke chhod tho nhi di tune???! 🤔

I am on it.pura karungi hopefully 😆

Hey Pixie 🤗

This is absolutely beautiful ❤️ I am a fan of your writing in EDT especially how you describe Raavi which as a viewer I understand and feel for her.

I am so glad Raavi didn’t go back to her Maasima’s house as I always wanted Raavi to get away and find a friend who helps her.

Are we going to see guilty Shiva? Oh I cannot wait for the next part.

I am hoping I remember to come back and read when you post your next part as I am only active on EDT and sometimes DT.

Glad Raavi left and Shiva seems to miss her.

interesting and exciting.continue soon pls.

I so so so sooo loved it. ⭐️..super awesome pixie..beautiful

Ravis hurt is expressed very beautifully and portrayed so aptly..usually one remembers mother the most while hurting..no matter how old they r..I loved that u began with the diary of her mom❤️..it felt like I was living in ravis heart. And the positivity. A good friend..atlast. ❤️..and finally the small but very impactful part of what shivas life has become into..💔..perfection that was..all that I wanted to see..him repenting..❤️

I know it's an os...but please try to continue the story and make a way for them to meet and mend slowly..

I love ur writing..u emphasise the right amount of emotions with precision..I want to see how they deal with each other once they meet after this..

PS. If u get time..and if u r in the mood to write, please continue this story...I am sure it will be the prefect au from what will be shown by chobeys..and it's also OK if u dnt want..no matter ..this one felt blissful to read..❤️

This part contains more family scenes as it was important for the build up. There is no divorce drama here. Raavi left as noone trusted her and she was asked to prove her innocence.next part will have shivi. Do let me know how you guys feel.

Part- 1

Shiva made the hisaab of the day and arranged the goods before putting the shutter down. He immersed himself in work because that was the best way to stop her memories from coming rushing to her. Was it working? How he wished it would.the last time she had left the house, he missed her. But this time, its something else. Even breathing seems heavy and like a task.

After raavi left, he felt uneasy. Deep down he knew that she couldn't do something like this. He decided to get to the bottom of the matter for his own sanity.

Flashback

1 month earlier

" Shiva. Yeh tum kya keh rahe ho? Dekho, tumhare ghar mai patta bhi hilta hai to mere papa par chale jaate ho. Aur jab usse Mann nahi bhara, to meri bua ko beech mai le aao. Would you ever let them leave in peace? " Rishita shouted

" Dekho bhabi.mai kisi par koi ilzaam nahi laga Raha. Mujhe sach janna hai " he showed rishita his phone.

" Mujhe ek unknown number se yeh video aata hai jahaan raavi aur apki bua gale mil rahe hai. Phir maa unhe anita ke saath hospital Mai dekhti hai.yeh ek co incidence to nahi ho sakta " he said

" Par... Woh Aisa kyu karegi? Dhara bhabi ka baccha ho ya na ho, inse unhe kya fark padta hai. She is concerned with me shiva." Rishita argued

" Wohi to pata lagana hai. Woh wahaan kya kar rahi thi? Woh raavi ke saath kya baat kar rahi thi? Mere liye yeh janna bahut zaroori hai. Aur iske liye mujhe aapki madad chahiye. Please bhabi " shiva said

Rishita sighed. She also wanted raavi to be proven innocent. Though she didn't like the idea of her family being dragged into it, but atleast this would clear their name.

" Thik hai " she said

The next few days went by with shiva and rishita asking the hospital staff several questions. They even consulted a private investigator to help them.

After lots of efforts finally they discovered the truth.anita wanted to get closer to gombi. Motiben helped her and planned out the whole thing.a police complain was made with all the necessary proofs. The news was full of her misdeeds.the police was taking her away and all the pandyas were standing outside the janaradan house.

Gautam and dhara was happy. They got justice. Someone so cruel deserved to be in jail.

" Mujhe pata tha shiva. Tu zaroor unhe saza dilwayega. Mujhe pata tha " dhara cried mumbling to herself.

Gombi hugged her and shiva simply nodded with tears.this was the first time his bhabi was speaking after that incident. She had went into shock and was not talking with anyone.the moment she knew the whole truth she wanted to see her perpetrators punished with her own eyes.

" Mai yeh rishita bhabi ke help ke bina nahi kar pata" He said

Rishita stood there numb seeing her family stoop this low. She knew they hated the pandyas.but to this level?

" Kyu kiya aapne Aisa bua? " She asked

" Barbaad karna chahti thi mai pandyas Ko. Har beizzati ka badla lena chahti thi. " She roared

" Le jaiye inhe inspector " rishita said turning her head away.

" Ruk " shiva shouted

" Bas ek sawaal. Meri raavi ko inn sab Mai kyu phasaya " Shiva asked with rage in his eyes.

" Iska jawaab mai de chuki hu. Mai barbaad karna chahti thi tumhare har khushi ko. Aur raavi to tumhari khusiyo ka hissa hai na? Cheen liya maine use.ab woh kabhi wapas nahi aayegi tum logo ke paas. Kabhi nahi " she laughed like a maniac

Suman looked on guiltily. She trusted anita like her own daughter, treated raavi so badly. She had warned them of her intentions but she didn't listen.and she blamed her for all the mess. Her son's home is broken.

" Anita bhi arrest ho gayi " dev cut the call and informed everyone.

" Maine ek dost se baat kar li hai. Woh lawyer hai.woh yeh case sambhalega.fraud, damage to public property, putting patient's life at risk. Aise bahut se accusations lagenge unpar. Par mai yeh dekh raha hu ki attempt to murder ka case ban sakta hai ya nahi. Afterall they started a fire. Agar yeh case ban gaya to woh dono lamba jail jayenge " dev explained to everyone

Rishita nodded with her head down. Dev held her hand and cupped her face.

" Ek baat jaan lo rishita. Jo bhi hua usme tumhari koi galti nahi hai. You don't need to feel guilty. Samjhi? " He said as rishita hugged her broke down crying.

Gautam and dhara joined the hug with Krish and suman.

Shiva stood there looking at them.

" Kuch adhoora sa hai shiva " dhara said

He nodded

" Jaanta hu bhabi.sab kuch adhoora hai " he said

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They ate silently. Ever since raavi was gone, the house seemed cold.

" Tu le aana use. Kya shubh muhrat ka intezaar kar raha hai? " Suman shouted at shiva as they were having dinner.

" Woh khush hai maa. Apni ek nayi zindagi bana rahi hai.aise logo ke beech hai jo uski parwaah karte hai " shiva said as he started eating

" Hann. Usne to tujhe likhkar diya hai ki woh bahut khush hai. Hai na? " Rishita said

Shiva had enquired about raavi and got to know that she is doing a job in Ahmedabad. She had refused to stay with maami after knowing the truth.he just wanted to see her once.

He went to Ahmedabad after finding out the address of the school.

Flashback

She looked like a dream with the white full sleeves salwar and the blue dupatta tied around her waist. She was twirling.

" Aree, bacche aise nahi. Haath ko aise rakho.han.sabaash " she said as she taught a kid the step.

A smile crept on his face. She looked like a dream.when did she did not? He saw her for 2 hours. She was teaching the kids dancing. Talking with them and giggling during the breaks.playing games with them. Her every gesture, her every move. He looked at her.drinking in the sight.

" Humein pata hai shiva. Tu kitni baar Ahmedabad jaa chuka hai. Khudo aur use itni takleef mat de. Le aa use ghar wapas " dev said

" Par hum shiva ka intezaar kyu kar rahe hai? Hum khud use le aate hai.chalo na gombi " dhara insisted getting restless

" Nahi. Iss baar shiva aur raavi apni zindagi ka faisla khud lenge. Koi bhi, meri baat kaan kholkar sun lo. Khaskar ki tu. Unke beech koi nahi aayega" suman said pointing a finger

" Par maa... " Dhara was interrupted by gombi

" Maa sahi keh rahi hai.jab tu mujhse naraaz hokar maayke chali gayi thi ek baar, tab mai khud tujhe lene aaya tha.shiva ko bhi apni patni ko manakar wapas laana hoga " gombi said

Dhara sighed.

" Kis muh se wapas lau use gombi? Kis haq se? Kaise nazrein milau usse? " Shiva said as everyone looked on.

" Uske pati hone ke haq se. Aur kis haq se? Galti sabse hoti hai shiva. Iska matlab yeh nahi ki rishte tod do. Tu ek baar usse baat to kar, i am sure woh tujhe maaf kar degi " rishita said

" jaanta hu.Phir kya? Mai dobara aisa kuch karunga aur usse aur takleef hogi. Woh mujhse dur hi thik hai bhabi " shiva said as she got up to leave while the family looked on.

Ahhhhh this is so so exciting 😍😍😍😍😍

I always loved your post on edt and always wanted u to write something sensible on current track thankyou for writing this 🙏🙏💜💗

Jst one suggestion i want everyone specially suman to apologize to raavi plsss🥱

Eagerly waiting for next part🙆🙆