Phela pyaar, phela nasha...Drabble.

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Hey beautiful people,

I hope you are doing welll...hush i' m here after so long as always..with a new drabble.

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Happy reading.

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Shiva and Raavi misunderstanding has been cleared now, they know what their heart want, they know their souls wnt to be unite.

The journey is indeed magical from teekhi-meethi friendship to- haters to- lovers.


Shiva was working in store and was about to shut the shutter down because it's 10pm already. Just as he is about to do this, someone called his name, he turned and find his mandali standing there with a bright smile.

They asked him to spend some hours with them because it has been ages since they gather together and gossip like pados wali aunties.


Shiva want to go but also feels hesitate because he know that his chipkali is quite stubborn, she must be waiting for him by roaming here and there in room to aangan like chudail.

He took his phone and messaged her but unfortunately the message haven't been send. And he headed towards the hill side of city, arranged the bonfire with chilled bottles to relaxed and enjoy.


It's 12a.m already and shiva is nowhere to be seen. Raavi's body is already heated up like the lava of the volcano, she can burst out any moment.

"Yeh bhootnath hai iska matlab yeh thodi na hai ki puri raat bahar rahega, maasimaa na bilkul sahi pisaach bolti hai, ittu sa bhi khayal nahi aaya mera" she pouted and after a pause of min she continued

"aane do uss bhootnath ko 1 hafte tak baingan na khilaya na toh mera naam bhi raavi shiva pandya nahi"


A thud voice jerk raavi from sleepy eyes and she noticed shiva standing in front of gate with hand tighting the hold on the door, his legs were dancing in abnormal manner, messy hair coming on his forehead covering some eyelashes and a little pout with closed eyes.

He looks so cute that raavi couldn't resist but said this, he step forward and tripped down, raavi rush towards him and hold both of his heavy arms and made him stand.


He move his palm over her tiny waist and grab it , leaving raavi in gasp at sudden proximity. Him leaning fully on her, her arms wraps around his neck, pulling her closer leaving no space in between inhaling the scent of jasmine. It felt like that the heart will jump out any moment, his face was just inch part frm her, just a move from side and their lips will brush.


Leaning in moment, shiva lose his balance and they both fall, burst in laugh.

Raavi is happy to see this side of shiva where he acting and chuckling like a kiddo, but somewhere her heart is clutching like a fist, she reminds the day when shiva got high and after that the misunderstanding created between was so difficult to untied.


She takes him in room, made him sit on bed carefully and asked "shiva tu sharab peekar aaya hai..??"


He didn't reply but saw the concern in her deep hazel eyes. He shifted and ask her to sit beside her, he hold her hands and take it close to his heart. She again asked the same.

"Voh..mere dost hai na pandyastore aaye the or fr mai chala gaya"


"Gadedha bas boldiya toh chala gaya atleast muje inform toh kardeta pata hai mai kitna preshan thi"


"Pann...meine btaya.."


She cut him in between and said "chup kar tu, or bata yeh sharab kyu peekar aaya hai vapis kahi firse tera dimag m kuch ulta toh nahi chal raha na"


Shiva sush her by placing his finger on her pale pink lips "shhh..!! Kitna bolti hai tu chup..chip..chipkali. Ab bas mai bolunga or tu sunegi"


Raavi nodded in yes like an obedient student.


"Tujhe pata hai raavi aaj mere dosto ne mujhse pucha ki mai padhai m acha hone ke bd bhi aage kyu ni padha"

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Raavi blinked her eyes twice, even she want to know this since ages, she know that shiva leave his study in mid but what's the reason behind it and no on in his family ever insist him.

Raavi look at him with questioning eye, waiting for his response.


"Tu...tujhe pta hai ek din jab hum sab school ja rahe the na toh meine gaumbi ko dekha akele boriya utate hue, yeh jo mera dil haina ( pointed the tip of his finger towards heart) bhaut dukha, voh isliye ki gaumbi ko sab sambhalna padh raha hai akele, koi bhi nahi tha unke sath unki madad karne ke liye isliye meine yeh faisla kiya ki mai school na jakar gaumbi ki help karunga pandya store ko sambhalunga..haan mushkile aayi zaroor hai log muje unpadh gawar bolte hai par mujhe in sabke farak nahi padta..mai badalunga nahi" he completed the sentence and smile in his own world.


Raavi felt her heart clutch, how could a 12 year old boy think this much for his family, the age where children demand uncountable things, he was sacrificing all of it.


"Shiva chal sojate hai" raavi said breaking the silence but shiva hold her wrist and said


"tujhe meri baatein sunni padegi chipkali"

Raavi can't refuse the request of such a cute kiddo.


"Meine na unko humare bachpan ka kissa sunaya"


"Konsa kisaa shiva"


"Vahi jiski wajah mai tujhe chipkali bulata hu"


It was the time of uttrayan, shiva and raavi were friends not like tu mera chaddi buddy hai, they still fight though but don't have grudge towards each other.

Shiva was waiting for raavi outside mami's house since 20min "where the heck is the gadedhi" losing the patience he made his towards her room window and found her screaming and dancing on bed.

"Aey gadedhi kaan fad kar kanpur banayegi kya, ek patang laane bheja tha voh bhi nahi la payi"


"Haan toh kaise lau voh dekh vaha chipkali hai voh bhi deewar par, agar mai vaha se aayi or usne mujhe kha liya toh"


"Aeyy..voh tujhe khakr apna pet nhi kharab karegi, ab aa jldi"


"Nahi mai nahi aaungi tu andar aa or usko bhaga...shiva please please"


"Iska kuch nahi ho sakta" he said and jump in room scratching his elbow in result, raavi rush and check him. He hold his hand and drag her towards the door but she stick to his back


"aey gadedhi mai koi deewar hu kya jo mujhse chipakli ki tarah chipak rahi hai"


"Shiva mujhe is chipkali se bacha le mai tujhse nahi chipkungi promise"


He smirk, move towards the window and went down, asked her to climb up on the window and she did, she waited for him and they both jumped together"


"Aey chipkali, dekh chipkali" shiva scream


Raavi jumped on the bed, screaming on the high tone, hands covering the body from the nazar of chipakali.

Seeing raavi like this shiva chuckled hard, he lay down on the bed and laugh his heart out holding the stomach. Closed eyes and wrinkles on his face out of joy, raavi mesmerized the most beautiful view in front of her eyes. Where the heck is this shiva why he kept hiding this side of himself.


"Aey chipkali, tu khud chipkali hai dar kyu rahi hai"

Raavi came in senses and huffed in anger, how dare he to do this..!!


Raavi hold his arms to made him sit but he grab her waist and pull her closer "oh lord why this man do this all with me" he started making small circles and lines on her waist to create his own masterpiece like it's his canvas.

Raavi tried hard to control but couldn't and "shiva" escaped from her mouth, that was a melody for his ears.


"Mere dosto ne pucha tu mujhe kesi lagti hai"


"Toh tune kya bola"

Shiva tugged the strands of her hair which are coming on her pretty face blocking the view for him. He looked into her deep brown eyes and said-


"Tu safed maide se mulayam halwa

Mai nariyal sa tujhme ghulta

Tu gulkand imam ka meetha paan

Mai teri pasand ka shahi pakwaan"


"Waah shiva waah...tujhe kavita bhi aa rahi hai, he paused and patted own cheeks, aey gadedhe kavita nahi sirf raavi...haan sirf raavi"


Raavi smiled at his antics, a tear of droplet starting escaping from eyes, maybe just because she got the hint of his answer but still she wanted to hear that from him. She asked him again


"Shiva bata na tune unse kya...kaha"


"Nafrat karta tha tujhse pan aaj hum yaha ek chaat ke neeche hain, mami ki behen ki beti bolta tha pan ab sirf raavi bolne ka dil karta hai...kyu..??"


"kyu shiva" she asked with clutching her hand on his vest tightly.


"Kyuki mai..mai tujhe.. pasand karta hu raavi" he stretched the word pasand so that she can hear it clear.


Raavi is on ninth cloud, her bhootnath likes her, yes he do..!! She couldn't be more happy, finally he got someone who likes her with all heart, love has overcome bachpan ki nafrat.


He wipes out the tear which came out from her eyes, he pull her close to face, an inch apart..the air in surrounding giving them hint to lean ahead. Shiva ruffles her hair, tilted his head and swiftly plant a kiss on her chubby cheek, he stay in the position wanting time to stop here forever, eyes closed, smile crept on face, blood rushing in blood, the moonlight enhancing the beauty of moment.


He moved back looked at her all red blushed face, "tamatar lag rahi hai" he murmured.


She chuckled and place her head on his chest and listened to the rythm..she loved to listen that..she loved him..yes she do..raavi you dobi...just confess it..she said to herself.

After some moments when she gathered all her courage to finally confess it she found him fall asleep peacefully.


"Gadedha kahika" she said and kissed his forehead.



So yeah this is it.

I read og synopsis of particular ep < coz hotstar doesn't give subtitles🥲> and also some from our PS..i knw khichdi bn gyi hai.. but rotten tomatoes not allowed


Nikkiii thankyou for the title..❤️


I hope you like it..!!!

See yaa

Love,

Sakku.❤️


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Posted: 3 years ago
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Ayy Sakku!! This was lovelyyy!! Iss baar Sakku ne baha diyaaa!!

It was so cute how you brought in the way him calling her chipkali started, and tying it up to the recent FB we got! Also I have always heard people talk about this scene from OG of drunk Shiva. confessing his feelings.. and was intrigued and enthralled by it praying and manifesting for us to get it! So, thank you so much for writing it! Loved, loved, loved it!!

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Hehhh fattuuu shechuuuu darpokkk gadhediiiii itnaaaaa pyaaraaaa hai but likhti nahi thi dobiiiii garden poolllll!!!!



This is cutesttttt,innaaa pyaaraaaa,the Shahi pakwan had me in splits and that kavita nahi sirf raavi lmfaoooo



This is sooo kyoootttt, lovedddd




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Posted: 3 years ago
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Cuteness overloaded 😘🥰😍

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Sakku this was so pyaara ❤️ Haaye drunk Shiva coming and telling Raavi he likes her has me


The moment I saw Shiva going with his friends, I knew this was the OG scene, and this is really nice sakku, dil le mera 😳❤️

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It's so cute and beautiful 💞

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Awwdoraaableee😍😍😍

This is sooo beautiful♥️

Loved it dear🤗

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Such a cute one 😍

Loved it ❤️

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Sakkuuuuu this was so pyaara 🥺❤️

Loved it❤️

Also i loved your version of Shiva's shayari more🥺❤️🤏🏻

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I think ps k kisi ek version me ye scene hai jisme shiva scnd time drink karke aata hai or fir apne dil ki baat confess karta hai agr aisa makers ne kuch dikhaya toh scene bilkul aisa chahti hu 💗💗💗

It is too good💖

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