Have my heart (OS mostly18+, pg5 21/01/22) - Page 8

Originally posted by: Pottermeow

Akka, both the caps mention of conversation in the disclaimer, and marking the beginning and end with ****, was just for you😳! Did you read the second half of the conversation and flashback at the end? I'm glad you loved what you did read of it though! 😆❤️

Loved all the conversation part and his apology as well , no second thoughts/ doubt about it.❤️

Freaking hot!!! Sathiyaa

The conversation

The smut☺️(I need to put holy water😊)

Lastly, the entry of Suman is making me love her again.

P.S.: This was not how I thought it to be reading the prologue.

Originally posted by: mpks1

Loved all the conversation part and his apology as well , no second thoughts/ doubt about it.❤️

Now I'm happy!!!!! 🥳🥳🥳

Originally posted by: Pritha_31

This is so good, so intense🔥

Thank you, glad you liked it!

Originally posted by: Kfof

Saathya, it was awesome

Starting from their conversation to the last bit of making food - was perfectly described ❤❤

Loved it ❤❤

Kshama! Glad you loved it!!! ❤️

Originally posted by: Shruti_kashyap

I wish the Kaawad yatra actually

Ended like this🤧

A proper convo between them + Raavi bubs giving the befitting reply to her snake friends 👏

+ Shiva getting all his turmoil ended and guess

What the end and I'm like Lord save me 🙈🔥🥵

I am behaving like the ultimate horny simp☺

Its that much good🤌❤

Wishful thinking gets to all of us, dear. Glad you loved it! 😊

For once suman was of good use to shivi.loved it.chudelon ki maharani dailogue was nice too.Always a hungry shiva.😂

Originally posted by: lourel24

For once suman was of good use to shivi.loved it.chudelon ki maharani dailogue was nice too.Always a hungry shiva.😂

True that! Shiva's always hungry😆! I actually loved Suman right up to the point she scolded Shiva for publicly questioning Raavi's character. She was too strict at times, and definitely set in her ways, but she was mostly fair and SAW things, you know?

Originally posted by: Pottermeow

Unreswa? 🥺🥺🥺

Originally posted by: blissfulcanyon

Sathi, main pehli baar padh ke behosh hogayi 🤣

Now that I've regained my consciousness, let me comment 😛

Okay, firstly, I love that there was no public spectacle involved!

And I love love love that it was Raavi who denied her friends and went ahead with Shiva.

I think that really helped to calm him at least a little. He was all set out on a path of destruction, but a little conversation goes a long way, and it really helped them!

The conversation flowed so smoothly and I'm glad Shiva apologized right then and there, leading up to the moment of *ahem ahem* ☺️

Ab smut ke baare mein kya hi bolun? 😳 It was hot, super hot, I might've reread (but don't tell anyone 🤣)

I love that when Raavi felt bad about the pill thing, she vocalized her feelings right then and there, and the situation was resolved within seconds.❤️

And ofccc, lastly, Suman telling Dhara off was an absolute favorite! I whooped and cheered 🤪

This was 7.2k words of absolute magic! Thank you for writing 🤗

Shynaaaaa🤗!!!! Behosh? Really? 🤣

I think it HAD to be Raavi diffusing the situation, really. Because she'd given him these tiny wounds unintentionally, and they'd festered so much. It had to go from the root, or it was never going to go, you know?

Re read the smut as many times as you feel like it... Glad to have been of service there! ☺️🤣

And yes, conversing and immediately letting things out is a bit of a must for them. And unlike Shiva, Raavi's a natural at it, so i figured the first step coming from her would be more logical. Also, Raavi's insecurities have been left completely unacknowledged on the show, and the pill thing seemed to be a good entry point for that.

You're welcome😳!!!! Now, I think only the FF's first chapter is left for you. And I have to comment on one OS and the last part of your latest TS. The tally's decent, don't you think? 😆