Have my heart (OS mostly18+, pg5 21/01/22) - Page 7

Sathi, main pehli baar padh ke behosh hogayi 🤣

Now that I've regained my consciousness, let me comment 😛

Okay, firstly, I love that there was no public spectacle involved!

And I love love love that it was Raavi who denied her friends and went ahead with Shiva.

I think that really helped to calm him at least a little. He was all set out on a path of destruction, but a little conversation goes a long way, and it really helped them!

The conversation flowed so smoothly and I'm glad Shiva apologized right then and there, leading up to the moment of *ahem ahem* ☺️

Ab smut ke baare mein kya hi bolun? 😳 It was hot, super hot, I might've reread (but don't tell anyone 🤣)

I love that when Raavi felt bad about the pill thing, she vocalized her feelings right then and there, and the situation was resolved within seconds.❤️

And ofccc, lastly, Suman telling Dhara off was an absolute favorite! I whooped and cheered 🤪

This was 7.2k words of absolute magic! Thank you for writing 🤗

This is so good, so intense🔥

Naha ke Unres krti hun...tb tk IG texts check kr le 🤪

Saathya, it was awesome

Starting from their conversation to the last bit of making food - was perfectly described ❤❤

Loved it ❤❤

Originally posted by: sillysatchel

Reading this early in the morning is a crime. I'm in heaven. Mera dimaag has no words BECAUSE WHAT IN THE HOLY HELL IS THIS?! 🥵

Me brain no werk, I need energy juice but DAMN SATHYA THIS WAS DAMN STEAMY

It's holy hell? Glad you loved it Megs! Get that brain restarted would you? 😆

Originally posted by: mpks1

Sathya, what do I write? 😆 Though I liked they started with a conversation after the Temple confrontation to sort out the issue but didn't expect what happened after that and smut all it is😆

Anyway happy with the conversation part which is the most important part of a sound and a successful marriage❤️

Akka, both the caps mention of conversation in the disclaimer, and marking the beginning and end with ****, was just for you😳! Did you read the second half of the conversation and flashback at the end? I'm glad you loved what you did read of it though! 😆❤️

I wish the Kaawad yatra actually

Ended like this🤧

A proper convo between them + Raavi bubs giving the befitting reply to her snake friends 👏

+ Shiva getting all his turmoil ended and guess

What the end and I'm like Lord save me 🙈🔥🥵

I am behaving like the ultimate horny simp☺

Its that much good🤌❤

Bht jyada hi lamba comment has entered the chat

Sathya😍😍😍

Just loved this OS

Hawwwwtttt🔥☺️

Shiva has always been a very passionate guy and this is how, i believe, he wud express his ardour for Raavi♥️ the character Shiva has sooo much potential and that is seen here in your OS😘i soo loved how you addressed the insecurity of Shiva👍🏼This is how ShiVi wud be or rather they shud be...they are passion...they are love...they are ardour...they are perfectly imperfect😳

Loved it🤗

Hayye behen what waas this!! I'm speechless! first of all, 7.2k words??!! how??!!

Second of all you took up the feelings of those scenes up till of canon and have written amazingly! the smut was ohh soo hot! The way Shiva was ready to let her go and yet Raavi made him realise she wanted to stay oof! The best has to be Suman kaki's entry though! hahahaha

Another lovely piece!!