Shivi OS // Phir Le Aaya Dil // - Page 5

someone had to take a lead....he did....good....

one sensible conversation......just one and everything would be sorted

lovely story

💕🥰Beautiful written OS👏……wish something like would happen in the show🥺

Love that Raavi finally opened up😍💕💗

Inny❤️❤️❤️❤️

You ended up writing this drabble even before I gave the prompt. I was so craving to read something about continuation nof the scene from where it ended. Though slightly different, this is love❤️❤️. Loved how gentle he was with her and opened up about his side of things too. Aah, this has all of my heart! ❤️

Loved this dialogue, "Agar tu mere laayak nahi toh main iss duniya ki laayak nahi, tere bina reh nahi sakoongi, dukh dard se ubarna seekh gayi par tumhare bina jeena nahi seekh paaungi, toot jaaungi main”❤️❤️

It conveys everything and more!

This is sooo beautiful ❤️

Their conversation is everything I want to see on the show.

The dlgs are so welll written.

Thank you so much for writing this ❤️

This is so beautiful Innuu!! ❤❤😘😘😘

Jaan hai tu meri... ❤️when will

Show Shiva say this😭

It was great :)

CHNNI SERVING PG CONTENT AND HOW!

I LOVE LOVE LOVE THIS.

The mush, the dialouges, the comfort, the concern, i love it all!

Keep writing for akka! k bye.

Originally posted by: Pottermeow

You know what, your presence seems to have been a muse in itself... I've got a decent idea, but i'll PM you if I need help....

Till then, catch up on the actual OS if you have time!!!

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/pandya-store/5257102/journey-to-the-centre-of-my-earth-shivi-ts-partly-18-pg7-29-11

Originally posted by: Suparna2210

Kash scene aise hi Gaya hota!🥲🥲

So beautifully written Inaayaa!❤️‍🔥❤️‍🔥

I know na! I wish he hadn’t lost his cool like that 😭!
Thank you so much 🥺

Originally posted by: lourel24

Super beautiful

Thank you so much!