ShiVi Drabble // Alegdonic // - Page 6

Originally posted by: Anu_V

INNY CHINNI THIS IS BEAUTIFUL AND HEARTBREAKING!

SO SO WELL WRITTEN

I WANT RAAVI TO DO THIS! BUT ALAS

THANKS FOR THIS!

AKKAAA, I AM SO SO HAPPY YOU LIKED THIS ONE!

I know I want Raavi to do the same, but makers are 🤪 so I wrote it myself hehe!

Originally posted by: Roohani27

Oh had enough crying already why you make me cry more inni😭 but I want this, everything that has happened in the past to her still couldn't be more humiliating than THIS, losing him in front of entire somnath.💔 ahh the heartbreaks.. I hope you'll update this one.. Will be waiting and yeah arcane too🙄

Aiyooo, Soulie don't cry at all! Inny will make this a happy ending! I agree if this happens in the show I swear I will stab the Chaubey's. Arcane ka I don't even know what is going on!

Originally posted by: IshqKaRang

Innu… as heartbreaking as this one is, it’s realistic and probably what should happen. Raavi has already compromised so much of her self respect, I honestly feel that it’s time Shiva steps up his game and does something for her. I want him to woo her, go all out, do things she’d dreamed and hoped for in her fairytale dreams.. just for her.. to win her back. I’d give anything to see that happen.

Neetz! Shiva will work, I will make him, they both need to work towards each other, but its a tedious journey and they both need some rest, especially after their family drama! He will win her back! for sure!

Originally posted by: Mountains_Lakes

Inny!! 💔💔💔💔💔

"Shiva had comeback home, cold dread settled into his being as he saw faint marks of blood leading up to her room, their room."

That was 😭😭 It was so heartbreaking. And I don't know if this will make sense, but I don't know how to feel either. Part of me is happy that Raavi is standing up for herself and a part of me is completely broken at the way this ended. (Why you Su had to bring your partner Su in between my Shivi).

Thanks for explaining the title. Pain is obvious, but is pleasure imploed at Raavi standing up for herself and Shiva realizing his mistakes?

But Inny, this cannot be the end. I refuse to believe in anything but happy ending. If you don't plan on continuing this, then in my head Shiva proves himself worthy of Raavi and how much he wants to be with her to MausaPa. He finally gets Raavi's whereabouts and is off to woo Raavi to get back with her. Raavi's condition for forgiving him is her wanting to be respected by everyone and wanting her own space for them. Only the two of them having a say in their relationships and no family's interference. She also apologizes to him for slapping him and not making him feel secured. For their future they both actually end up living in Ahmedabad for the new store branch and away from PS madhouse. (Inspired from Meghna).

Sorry Inny, your ending is just no for my Dil. Durdasha can't have her road cleared to get Shiva. She can have SuSu andand madhouse all to herself. But Shiva is not attainable. Physically or emotionally. SuSu needs a lesson of losing her son for being so freaking controlling.

My Chattan 🤗

The pleasure is implied at Raavi standing up for herself and for Shiva too, but more than his realisation it is the fact that he is finally honest with himself, he does understand he made mistakes but he never really understood the magnitude of them, probably because of the way he was raised and in a way sheltered by the dominant figures in his life.

Don't say sorry for this, I will of course continue this Drabble! Another 2 parts headed your way! Stay tuned for it. I don't like sad endings but I am a sucker for angst+happy endings hence this Drabble! ❤️

Originally posted by: Luvs_SanIsh

Heartbreakingly Beautiful 💔💔💔

Oh love the title of this story, but question is Shiva Raavi’s alegdonic, or are both for each other?

Can’t wait for your next update 🥰💕

Thank you so much! them both and their journey towards each other is Alegdonic! Will update this one soon!

Originally posted by: Inaayaa_sidiqui

Hehe! So sorry for the abrupt going off! but I am back with a bang, and thank you so much for liking this one so much! I agree with you on the limits thing!

When you will update cross my heart sequel as you said you have already written it n will be publishing you know when😁

Originally posted by: lourel24

When you will update cross my heart sequel as you said you have already written it n will be publishing you know when😁

Still going through editing it, will update soon!

This is beautiful ❤️..

Inny...I had tears while reading..it's Heartbreaking but beautiful ❤️❤️❤️

That blood stains and them not valuing her sindoor and mangalsutra🥺

I'm happy she took a stand for herself but the way they parted🥺😭

Innaya I have so many of your works to catch up..don't mind of I bombard your notifications with comments

First of all Congrats on your engagement...wish you a very happy life ahead❤️

I read this after reading Burgeon...omg this was super emotional. I was close to crying reading this. Raavi's pain...she is completely shattered...but I know this pain will make her more stronger. This was so well written ❤️

Loved it so much ❤️