Take my breath away: ShiVi FF - Page 20

Originally posted by: LizzieBennet

This comment made me laugh.

Shiva tortured by Raavi. Hmm..I don’t know. I have something in mind for the next one. Perhaps they will just torture each other! 😆 Who’s keeping score? 😈

Thats even better

I am looooooving this torture game Riya

You have a way with words ..your every writing leaves me craving for more and more and more

I hope you continue this and we get to know what happens next...you can't leave us parched like raavi😆

I am kinda more than Ok with Mrs. S barging in..I want more torture for them😆🤣

Waiting for next one and thanks for the tag🤗

Originally posted by: blissfulcanyon

Omg I loved reading this as usual

So glad you continued...will there be another part?! Because I want more torture muahaha 🤣

I felt Raavi's frustration ngl - I was just reading words and felt all hot and bothered, damn you, Shiva ☺️

Shiva's wishlist was very intriguing, I'm so invested ❤️

Would love to read more on this if you choose to continue, if not, do write more on ShiVi in general! I adore your writing!🤗

Thank you for the tag ❤️

Thank you! ❤️

Everybody wants more 'torture'! 😆

I will continue, but may or may not revisit what has happened so far. See, I meant for this series to be all one-shots, but so far it's turning out to be more like an FF with the chapters being all inter-connected. I want to make it such that they could be read individually as well without the need for going back and reading each one, but so far I haven't been very successful! 😆

Anyways, this is the end of their sojourn so the next one will be a bit disconnected from these events. As usual, I have no idea where it's going to go. I always plan my writing in a certain way, having the theme mapped out. But it ends up going in a different direction altogether! Jaate the Japan, pahunch gaye Cheen! 😆

Thanks for detailing what you enjoyed about the story! I always love reading what appealed to people about an update!

Originally posted by: Coleus

I am looooooving this torture game Riya

You have a way with words ..your every writing leaves me craving for more and more and more

I hope you continue this and we get to know what happens next...you can't leave us parched like raavi😆

I am kinda more than Ok with Mrs. S barging in..I want more torture for them😆🤣

Waiting for next one and thanks for the tag🤗

Ahh, thank you Alisha! 🤗

So you're another one of the 'torture' enthusiasts! 😆

I will do my best to get the next update out soon!

Thanks for reading and you're welcome for the tag! 😳

will you hit me if I request you to continue....this time too much raavi torture happened....I don't mind on the contrary I loved it.....BUT 😳☺️ baat aage kaise badhe😉

this was pure torture....seduction at its best....I didn't like him saying, he had flings and I was 😲 but den maybe he was just messing with her....

Mrs S aa gai....Early morning muh dikhai ke liye....if she had just waited for few more mins

can't thank you enough for this torturous update 😆 s.x.lly frustrated log shiva and raavi and the readers be like ☺️ kya kare kahan jaye

loving it so much....dono ek dusre ko frustrate kare and fir ☺️blast ho jaye sab....passion possession hotness 🔥 😍 wow....have started dreaming about it....

thanks once again for such an outstanding update....sorry for being late

Originally posted by: maanmeet1

will you hit me if I request you to continue....this time too much raavi torture happened....I don't mind on the contrary I loved it.....BUT 😳☺️ baat aage kaise badhe😉

this was pure torture....seduction at its best....I didn't like him saying, he had flings and I was 😲 but den maybe he was just messing with her....

Mrs S aa gai....Early morning muh dikhai ke liye....if she had just waited for few more mins

can't thank you enough for this torturous update 😆 s.x.lly frustrated log shiva and raavi and the readers be like ☺️ kya kare kahan jaye

loving it so much....dono ek dusre ko frustrate kare and fir ☺️blast ho jaye sab....passion possession hotness 🔥 😍 wow....have started dreaming about it....

thanks once again for such an outstanding update....sorry for being late

Arre itne lambe comment ke baad sorry kyon bol rahe ho yaar! Sab khata maaf hai!! 😆

You didn’t like Shiva being a player? 😆 I don’t know, I leave it up to you guys. I don’t mind him being a Casanova myself! Ek ko toh thoda experience hona chahiye 😆!

Sexually frustrated toh hain dono. Baat aage kaise badhe? Aur kaun pehla kadam uthayega? Janne ke liye aage padhiye .. 😆

Originally posted by: LizzieBennet

Arre itne lambe comment ke baad sorry kyon bol rahe ho yaar! Sab khata maaf hai!! 😆

You didn’t like Shiva being a player? 😆 I don’t know, I leave it up to you guys. I don’t mind him being a Casanova myself! Ek ko toh thoda experience hona chahiye 😆!

Sexually frustrated toh hain dono. Baat aage kaise badhe? Aur kaun pehla kadam uthayega? Janne ke liye aage padhiye .. 😆

and your reply brought a smile on my face .........

who would take 1st step..........raavi? shiva? raavi? shiva? raavi..........🤣

Heylo people!

The next one is almost done! 😊
This one not only continues from where I left off last time (with a little bit of a time lag) but is also a kind of fulfilment of a prompt by evilxbalaa. She asked for a Truth or Dare game with ShiVi. I changed that a bit and wrote in a game of Never have I Ever instead. I hope that’s okay, Hinna! 😳

Will post soon.

Another warning: this one is kinda long!

Deepest thanks again to you all for supporting my fics! 🤗

Originally posted by: LizzieBennet

Heylo people!

The next one is almost done! 😊
This one not only continues from where I left off last time (with a little bit of a time lag) but is also a kind of fulfilment of a prompt by evilxbalaa. She asked for a Truth or Dare game with ShiVi. I changed that a bit and wrote in a game of Never have I Ever instead. I hope that’s okay, Hinna! 😳

Will post soon.

Another warning: this one is kinda long!

Deepest thanks again to you all for supporting my fics! 🤗

Can’t wait, post it soon🥳