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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: hapakalanoodles



“Kaise kahoon usse ki mein sirf uska hoon aur mein uspe bharosa karta hoon.” He looked at the sky and screamed.


I love this teaser😍😍🥳



BUT my caffein high mind just can't help but type this,

Whenever Shiva thinks on those lines ... I really wanna reply that.

"Easy shiva , make a Aah/Ooh / open Ur mouth wideee ......and - Bol De Gadheda🤦🏻‍♀️😂😂😂''

🤣🤣

Waiting for ur update 😍

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Posted: 3 years ago
#12

Yess! Pls do tag me this sounds interesting🤗❤️

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Posted: 3 years ago
#13

I want moreeee!!!🤩🤩

Update soon love

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Posted: 3 years ago
#14

Really nice

Continue soon

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Posted: 3 years ago
#15

Chapter 1



Day of Divorce


Both were standing outside the court, restlessness settling in.


“Shiva kya tu-”


“Haan , lekin tujhe kya chahiye?” he asked with hope


“Khatam kar lete hai yeh rishta.” she said


His heart broke into million pieces


Raavi slowly looks at Shiva and her heart pierced with the look on his face


“Bas kuch din aur bhootnaath, phir tu mujhe khud apne paas bulayega” she thought


Flashback


Shiva was in the terrace marching around tensely. Today Raavi had “accused” Anita for having feelings for Gaumbi and the entire family was against her.


“Mujhe pata hai ki woh chipkali joot nahi bolegi” he said


“Kyu bhagwaan , Kyu ! Na mein uska saath de sakta hoon aur nahi usse aise bezzat hothe dekh sakta hoon.


Kyun nahi banaya apne mujhe uske layak.


Kyun uss chipkali ko mere dil mein jagah basane di. “


“Kaise kahoon usse ki mein sirf uska hoon aur mein uspe bharosa karta hoon.” He looked at the sky and screamed.


Raavi who for the first time felt like an actual orphan ran up to the terrace to hide from the world. She saw Shiva pace around the terrace like a mad man, the first thing she wanted to do was run up to him and ask him why he didn't trust her until she heard him speak.


Shock was an understatement, The Shiva Pandya liked her ? Her husband liked her!! just the thought made her heart do a summersault.


What was stopping him from giving her the comfort he wanted to give ?


Why is he holding himself back ?


What did he mean when he said he wasn't worthy of her ?


All sorts of questions clouded her mind , she decided to leave before he saw her.


She walked far away from Pandya Niwas , aimlessly walking until she reached a quiet , secluded and calm stream of water. The view in front of her was surreal.


The moon shining bright at her , the sound of the water flowing , the wind blowing against her face .


Everything seemed perfect , she sat near the stream to think about what a mess her life had become. She sent a quick text to krish saying that she would be home tomorrow and that she needs some time alone.


There she sat , analyzing the situation. From the very beginning to now.


The past 3 months flashed in front of her.


They were actually progressing in their relationship until …

Sneha , the reason behind her life becoming such a mess


“Lekin sneha ke wajah se usse bura kyun lagega ? jab bhi koi usse taana martha hai woh usse kabhi apne dil pe nahi leta” she thought


“Tu toh khud ko somnath ki sabse khubsurat lakdi samjti hai na ? toh phir aaj us disha ko dekh ke tujhe bura kyun laga? Somnath ki sabse khubsurat ladki ke samne woh kya cheez hai ?” spoke her soul


“Haan lekin phir bhi bura lagta hai mujhe , mein bhi insaan hoon” she retorted


“Toh woh bhi toh insaan hi hai na , usse bura kyu nahi lag sakta? Agar log usse yeh kahenge ki uske wajah se teri zindagi barbaad ho gayi toh bura toh lagega na. “ her soul calmly replied


“Ussne mujhe kuch kyu nahi bataya phir , maine kitni koshish ki usse baat karne ki. Maine kaha bhi ki mujhe iss rishte ko mauka dena hai” she sulked


“Its not what you but how you say it , you used the words compromise , adjustment etc. Kya tu inn shadbon se apne dil ko mana legi ?” her soul tried to make sense


And it finally clicked her! What a dobi she was.


Yes she did try to make Shiva understand but the way of making him understand was faltered


Now that she knows her Shiva loves her , she wont let any Disha Wisha come next to come.


"uss disha ki puri disha badal dungi mein agar woh mere shiva ke paas aane ki koshish ki toh" she muttered with a her nose flared up in anger

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I know this was a short one , i promise the next will be longer <3

Thank you for all the love you guys have showered on the teaser

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Posted: 3 years ago
#16

tagging few more

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Posted: 3 years ago
#17

Loved the realisation part❤❤

Cant wait to see what Raavi is upto😍❤

Loved it🔥❤

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Posted: 3 years ago
#18

Lovely update!!

Argh I loved Raavi’s realisation ❤️
now I just want to watch how you’ll tadapoyfy Shiva for Raavi 😆😆

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Posted: 3 years ago
#19

I'm here!!!

Edit:

Taani, this story keeps getting more and more interesting... I love that Raavi realised her mistakes and understood Shiva.....

Edited by Pottermeow - 3 years ago
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Posted: 3 years ago
#20

Taani ❤️Dobi Raavi got some sense 👍🏼

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