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Posted: 3 years ago
#41

Hello beautiful people

Apologies for not posting any updates on this one

But I'm back now with posting small updates every now and then

I have a lot planned for this one but not sure on what you guys would like to read

So after every update it would be appreciated if you would let me know how you would want the next one to be

<3

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Posted: 3 years ago
#42

Originally posted by: VaishnaviG

Baby ❤️this was so good,I am happy that Raavi is not dobi here.

Waiting for next update

thank you so much

im glad you liked it

haha yes Raavi is not dobi here

I love watching Raavi take control over things 🤣

updating in a bit love

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Posted: 3 years ago
#43

Originally posted by: SlytherInMe.

yes yes yes - raavi you go girl and bring your shiva back on line tadpao this starplus bahu even more, please and thank you 🤣

and jealous and possessive shiva ☺️ yes please, I WANT I WANT IT SO BAD

please tag me too hehehehe

thank you much love

im glad you liked it

updating in a bit

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Posted: 3 years ago
#44

Originally posted by: ItsmePriya

Noodles baby...thanks for the tag🤗

This was too good. Am so happy Raavi is not a dobi here and she has taken things in her hand. I like the challenge...I am excited to know what Shiva will do now. This is going to be super interesting❤️

Waiting for your update. Please update soonish❤️🤗

haha yes i love watching raavi take control

i hope you like how this goes

updating in a while jaan

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Posted: 3 years ago
#45

Originally posted by: Pottermeow

I. Did. Not. See. That. Coming. At all.

But things are getting interesting Noodles!!! Keep it coming, keep it coming, Taani.... ❤️

thank you jaan

im updating abhi <3

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Posted: 3 years ago
#46

Originally posted by: sillysatchel

Yesss gimme gimme more

You demand and i offer love 🤣

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Posted: 3 years ago
#47

Originally posted by: Kfof

Love love loved it.....💕💕I want to see something like this...😍It was perfect❤❤❤

updating in a while <3

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Posted: 3 years ago
#48

“Shiva pandya, kya aapko ye sharth manzur hai?” asked the judge


“Main-”


“Usse manzur kyun nahi hoga, woh toh mujh se peecha chudana chahta hai” said raavi while sarcastically laughing


“The court is adjourned” said the judge while coming to the conclusion of agreeing to Raavi’s condition



Outside the court


“Yeh andar tu kya bakwaas bak rahi thi?” shiva asked while seething with anger


“Kya kiya maine? Jab tu dusri shaadi kar sakta hai toh main kyu nahi?” she asked casually


“Toh kar tu shaadi, kisne roka hai. Mujhe kyun dulha dhundne ko keh rahi hai”


“Tune hi kaha tha na, ki tujhe meri zindagi “barbaad” karke sharam aa rahi hai, toh main tujhe apne iss guilt ko kam karne ka mauka de rahi hoon” she added with a smile


“Teekh hai! Karke dikhaunga mein teri shaadi.” he added


She smiled thinking about how her plan was working

“Maan ja na bhoothnaat” she thought


“Chal tujhe ghar chod tha hun” shiva said while starting his bike


“Nahi tu ja, ab hamara talak ho gaya hai. Main khud chali jaungi” she said on purpose


“Chup chap peeche bait Raavi” he said assertively


“Nahi shiva, Isski zarurat nahi hai. Main chali jaungi. Tu jaake celebrate kar, finally mera picha chud gaya tere sar se” she added with a smile


“Kyun kar rahi hai tu aisa” he thought


Raavi called for an auto and left to her Maasi’s house



Narayan house


“Ayy Raavi, bol na court mein kya bola.”


“Talak hogaya maasi-”


“Hayye mare bhogilaal la lakh lakh shukar hai” she started


“Alimony mein kitna manga bol na” prafulla asked excitedly


“Maine paise nahi mange Maasi, maine yeh kaha ki jis din shiva aur disha ki shaadi hogi ussi din meri bhi shaadi hogi. Aur mera dhula shiva dhund layega”


Prafulla was angry that Raavi didnt ask for any money but what she asked was better than money. She would give up on her life to get a chance to insult the pandya family. Nothing better than shoving a brand new groom for her raavi up her face


“Meri bacchi kitni samajdaar hai, koi acha sa ladka dhund ke ayega Shiva”


Prafulla started while Raavi made her way to her room. She had a long way to go for her plan to succeed. But cheers to the beginning


The beginning of realization she thought


Shiva rode straight to his tree, what the hell was this chipkali up to he thought


“Tu toh yahi chahta tha na”

said a figure standing in front of her, who looked exactly like him. But this version looked calm and serene rather more clear of what he wants . While taking a place near him, he started to speak


“Tune hi chaha tha ki raavi tujhe divorce dede

Tune hi chaha tha ki raavi ko koi aisa ladka mile jo usse deserve karta ho”


“Haan chahta tha, lekin uska matlab yeh nahi hai ki woh mujhe hi dhunde ne ko kahe” he tried to justify


“Tujhe nahi kehti to kya , uski woh maasi se kehti” his figure asked


The thought of maami finding a groom for raavi feared him. That woman would only look for money. She won't be able to find a worthy man for raavi.

“Main dhoond ke laonga Raavi ke liye ladka.” he said with determination

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Posted: 3 years ago
#49

Oh Taani guru, kya karun tere saath main😆? Shiva is underestimating his own possessiveness over Raavi... He can't bear it if someone other than himself makes her cry, and now he's going to watch some guy make her laugh and do things with her, really🤔? His stupidity is going to come back to bite him in the bum is what's happening! 🤣

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Posted: 3 years ago
#50

I was waitin for this update.🤗 This is getting so interesting. I really love this Raavi.😆

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