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Posted: 3 years ago

Somehow these past few eps. have led to me being Soo Unbothered abt their Divorce that I've started to humour myself with the Chaos the makers r making🤭🤭


So urs was a perfect update, n d I enjoyed it

*Insert evil laugh for shiva

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Nd the one line that probably everyone cracked up on😍🤭


Tere Aate, he Divorce

Raavi to Shiva internally :

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Love it, nd still can't stop laughing (sorry😅)

Waiting for ur next update

N thanks for the tag💃🏻

Edited by sapphir - 3 years ago
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Posted: 3 years ago

heyllooo noodlyy doodlyyy!!!

I read this, OMG this is what i expected when the third angle was introduced, only if makers showed it this way-it would've been so si much of fun!!!


Also, small but heartfelt, loved this!

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Posted: 3 years ago

Jelly Shiva is a treat to watch.😆I absolutely loved this❤️ Waitin 4 the next update.👍🏼

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Posted: 3 years ago

CHAPTER 6


“Aunty khane mein kya hai” ritwik asked while tapping his plate


“Sab tere pasand ke hai beta, Aloo gobi, paneer tikka aur roti” prafulla said with a huge smile


“Uska bass chale toh mere khane mein zeher mila degi yeh maami aur iss ritwik ke liye tarah tarah ke khana banake paros rahi hai” shiva thought, annoyance evident on his face


Everybody had their dinner. Krish senses Shiva’s jealousy towards Ritwik and tries to make the best out of it


“Ritwik bhai, aapne aur Raavi ne same color ke kapde pehne hai dekho” krish said while laughing


“Raavi Bhabhi bol” shiva screams


“Kahan ki bhabhi shiva, tune toh rishta tod diya na” krish said nonchalantly


“Arrey haan, hum dono ne same color pehna hai. Dekh rahi hai Raavi, hum dono ki kitni gazab jamti hai” Ritwik added while side hugging Raavi


And there it snapped, Shiva’s self control flew out of the window. This man was testing his patience, he had the audacity to flirt with his wife in front of him. Without wasting a second Shiva grabs Raavi's elbow and takes her out

“Ahhh shiva kya kar raha hai” Raavi asked while being dragged out


“Tu kya kar rahi hai, Tujhe dikh ta nahi hai kya? Ritwik tere saat flirt kar raha tha” he responded angrily


“Haan toh tu nahi karta, iska matlab yeh nahi hai ki koi bhi nahi karega” Raavi said boldly


“Tujhe mera tere kareeb aane se koi problem nahi hai?” shiva asked with a challenging look while stepping towards her


“Maine kabhi bhi tujhe khud se dur nahi kiya shiva. Har baar tune hi muh moda hai. Yeh talaaq bhi tere wajah se hua. Tune bhi sab ke tarah mujhse bina puche mere liye decisions li.” she paused, Raavi knew that Shiva understood what she meant


“Khair ab jo hogya woh hogya. Hum apne kal ko nahi badal sakte” saying which she leaves back inside.


Shiva stood there trying to understand what she meant? Maine uske liye decision kaise liya? Woh toh khush nahi thi na iss rishte se? He thought to himself when yet again he saw an image of himself


“Tu ghadheda hai ya ghadheda?” the figure asked


“Huh?” responded a perplexed shiva


“Bhagwaan iska main kya karun! Abhi abhi woh bol ke gayi ki tune usse bina puche uske liya socha, aur tu yahan wapas baitke assume kar raha hai ki uska kya matlab hoga. Tera muh toh 24/7 bewajah chalta hai, jab raavi samne aati hai toh kahan chala jata hai tera zubaan”


“Kya usse yeh zabardasti ki shaadi nahi lagi?” Shiva asked in return


“Ayy akal ke dushman, mujhse kya puch raha hai. Usse jaake puch na. Beta apni galti sudhar le isse pehle ke woh Ritwik teri waali ko leke bhaag jaye”


“Aise kaise leke bhaag jayega meri raavi ko leke” he argued back


“Main nahi jaane dunga usse kahin” he decided

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Posted: 3 years ago

Insaaniyat spot😉

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Apniwaali ko 🤣

Masst tha yeh , thank god Shiva ne ab decide kar liya .

I liked Raavi’s boldness 😎

Edited by VaishnaviG - 3 years ago
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Posted: 3 years ago

Dekh jis minute tune post kiya mein aay gayi 😳

Isko bolte hai kismat 😎

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Posted: 3 years ago

Mera spot

UNRES


Aurr choota karti jaa har chapter ko 😡

Koi nahi acha tha ye waala

Kheench ke le gaya na usko?

Sukkoooooooooooonnnnnnnnnnnn☺️

Jaldi likhna agla bhi

Edited by EuphoricDamsel. - 3 years ago
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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: Iktara22

heyllooo noodlyy doodlyyy!!!

I read this, OMG this is what i expected when the third angle was introduced, only if makers showed it this way-it would've been so si much of fun!!!


Also, small but heartfelt, loved this!

I’m glad you liked it ❤️
Updated next part

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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: sapphir

Somehow these past few eps. have led to me being Soo Unbothered abt their Divorce that I've started to humour myself with the Chaos the makers r making🤭🤭


So urs was a perfect update, n d I enjoyed it

*Insert evil laugh for shiva

Image


Nd the one line that probably everyone cracked up on😍🤭


Tere Aate, he Divorce

Raavi to Shiva internally :

Image


Love it, nd still can't stop laughing (sorry😅)

Waiting for ur next update

N thanks for the tag💃🏻

HAHAHAH yes saph

I’m glad you liked it love

I’ve updated the next part

Have a look at it

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Posted: 3 years ago

Here because kismat connection!!!! 😎

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Taani❤️!! I love Shiva's alter ego so much!!!! And Shiva getting all jealous made me laugh, does that make me mildly sadistic? I thinks yes!!!! 🤣🤣

Edited by Pottermeow - 3 years ago

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