Moments that break (PART- III pg 11)

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ItsmePriya

@ItsmePriya

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Posted: 4 years ago

#51

You made me emotional...what a beautiful writing❤️👏

Raavi's pain was so heart breaking...I really felt like giving her a big hug...this was so beautifully written❤️

So happy Shiva is now firm in his decision.!!

Are we getting another part to see how Shiva makes amends and sets things right? I would love to read it❤️

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Odette_delusion

@Odette_delusion

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Posted: 4 years ago

#52

Originally posted by: ItsmePriya
You made me emotional...what a beautiful writing❤️👏
Raavi's pain was so heart breaking...I really felt like giving her a big hug...this was so beautifully written❤️
So happy Shiva is now firm in his decision.!!
Are we getting another part to see how Shiva makes amends and sets things right? I would love to read it❤️

Thank you for your appreciation i would surely write another part hope you all will like that too.

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maanmeet1

@maanmeet1

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Posted: 4 years ago

#53

her breaking down was 😭🥺heart wrenching......

one more part pls......

shiva has to do lots to prove himself...

he has lot of people to fight with

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Odette_delusion

@Odette_delusion

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Posted: 4 years ago

#54

Originally posted by: maanmeet1
her breaking down was 😭🥺heart wrenching......
one more part pls......
shiva has to do lots to prove himself...
he has lot of people to fight with

thank you for your support. I eill surely write new part hope you all will like that

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Mountains_Lakes

@Mountains_Lakes

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Posted: 4 years ago

#55

Heartbreakingly beautiful ❤️❤️. But the pieces are on their way to healing!! Everything Raavi said just 💔💔💔. My girl is finally going to get some happiness. Khushiyan finally has arrived!

Loved Raavi complete breakdown. And Shiva assurance. If I lay request, could you please continue another part where we see Shiva building her back up bit by but and supporting her so she's back to to her old chirpy self?

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Iktara22

@Iktara22

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Posted: 4 years ago

#56

Heart-wrenching and beautiful ❤️

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Kfof

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Posted: 4 years ago

#57

It was heart breaking but beautiful❤❤

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Odette_delusion

@Odette_delusion

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Posted: 4 years ago

#58

Originally posted by: Mountains_Lakes
Heartbreakingly beautiful ❤️❤️. But the pieces are on their way to healing!! Everything Raavi said just 💔💔💔. My girl is finally going to get some happiness. Khushiyan finally has arrived!

Loved Raavi complete breakdown. And Shiva assurance. If I lay request, could you please continue another part where we see Shiva building her back up bit by but and supporting her so she's back to to her old chirpy self?

thanks for connecting with my work i will surely update a new part and will condsider your request. 😃☺