ShiVi FF: 50% Pyaar + 50% Nafrat| Complete | - Page 22

Originally posted by: sillysatchel

I read this so happily and then I saw sad shiva and I'm like 😭❤️

Also, 1 more chapter to go for the revelation of Shiva ka cockt behaviour, right? I hope you aren't ending this ff in 1 chapter because I'll have to mentally prepare myself for it.

Love how Raavi's expertise came to use here ❤️

Thank you!!! Hopefully I did justice to ShiVi's feelings!

Yes! 1 chap to go 💔

ashu's spot

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well first, let me take a second to cry just a teensy bit because this story is over 😭 the anticipation, the excitement, the dread of something bad happening - sigh, I won't be feeling that anymore and I will miss that feeling 😭

as much as I troll spb shiva, his tears just break my heart 😭 but I'm so glad that instead of converting his pain into anger as usual, this time he chose to pour out his heart to Raavi

man that was such an emotional confession, all his insecurities laid out in front of the woman he loves the most - that has got to be nerve-wracking

and my poor baby raavi, she has her own set of insecurities as well 😭 ones that weren't as noticeable as shiva's but they were there

two years ago, it just wasn't the right time or space for them to have this conversation - they needed to be away to understand that they need to be together

their confession was so so cute and that soft kiss was perfect nothing more was required, it felt so complete

fav part was definitely shiva internally wanting raavi to ask him to walk her home, that was just so so adorable 😆

and I love how they were still awko tacos, because that's just so realistic

oh god, I'm so emo now 😭😭

I don't even want to watch 100% now, because I know it could never compare to your beautiful story

thank you so much for taking us on this amazing journey 🤗 I love you

Originally posted by: Suparna2210

Arrreee cliffhanger!!! But we know ShiVi is endgame so I ain’t complaining *much* 😅

Lovely update!!❤️‍🔥❤️‍🔥

Thank you! Updated the last chapter on page 34!!

Originally posted by: mpks1

Anu, thanks for tagging me.

This update! Raavi helped him❤️ but you again ended at the same point that he is not as good as Rahul, that Raavi compared him😕 I am really looking forward to reading the reason for his yo-yoing behavior.

AAH Thank you!! Glad you liked it! Hopefully I did justice to ShiVi's feelings :)

Originally posted by: ItsmePriya

Amazing update Anu❤️

The dance was so beautifulthe awkwardness added its own charm

So glad Raavi helped Shiva and there project is also successful and we will be getting to see Silicon Valley in Somnath!!

The end was heart breaking...Rohan's name again messed up things..waiting to see what happens next...❤️

With just one update to go, I really want to tell you Anu that this story was so different and you have written it so well. I really want you to continue writing more stories🤗

Priyaaaa Thank you!!!! 🤗

Cant wait for you to read the last update!

Originally posted by: GrilledCheese

Thanks for tagging! ❤️

So the story is slowly reaching it's climax now.. that was an emotional update 💔

This was one of my fav parts in the movie so enjoyed reading it.. and looking forward to how everything ties up at the end!!

Aaliya!!! Thank you!!!

I loved the final scenes of the movie too :) high on emotion. Updating soon!

Updated the last chapter on page 34!! Thanks for reading my amateur work y'all!

Updated the last chapter on page 34!! Thanks for reading my amateur work y'all

Updated the last chapter on page 34!! Thanks for reading my amateur work y'all :)

Wow. Am I glad to have read the last two chapters together?

As I finished reading the first one I was like damn, the phrase "if xyz happens tomorrow,ill tell you something is jinxed". It always leads to Rohan the great MU. I was with Raavi on this one. How is Shivattwisting this. It's like he had preconceived notions and that's what he was looking for and that why he interpreted her words the way it did.

But thank God, this time, he actually opened up and talked it out in defeat instead of lashing out at her like the last time. And Raavi could see the other side. Haha the fact that you wrote about kiss! ❤️. Both of their talk was sweet and so glad they made it up. And the two are walking together to new life ahead❤️❤️

Beautiful, Twinsey! :)