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I can't tell you how happy I am right NOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I'm reading this chori chori chupke chupke as I wait in the hospital for my class to start and..... EPILOGUE PLEASE!!!!!!!! They were soooooo cute!!!! And the last 'walk ke liye pooch, vaise bhi tu bohot filmy haina' was super sweet.... Sigh....

I'm so glad the idiot didn't have to get drunk to understand her point though.... 😆

Originally posted by: SlytherInMe.

ashu's spot

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well first, let me take a second to cry just a teensy bit because this story is over 😭 the anticipation, the excitement, the dread of something bad happening - sigh, I won't be feeling that anymore and I will miss that feeling 😭

as much as I troll spb shiva, his tears just break my heart 😭 but I'm so glad that instead of converting his pain into anger as usual, this time he chose to pour out his heart to Raavi

man that was such an emotional confession, all his insecurities laid out in front of the woman he loves the most - that has got to be nerve-wracking

and my poor baby raavi, she has her own set of insecurities as well 😭 ones that weren't as noticeable as shiva's but they were there

two years ago, it just wasn't the right time or space for them to have this conversation - they needed to be away to understand that they need to be together

their confession was so so cute and that soft kiss was perfect nothing more was required, it felt so complete

fav part was definitely shiva internally wanting raavi to ask him to walk her home, that was just so so adorable 😆

and I love how they were still awko tacos, because that's just so realistic

oh god, I'm so emo now 😭😭

I don't even want to watch 100% now, because I know it could never compare to your beautiful story

thank you so much for taking us on this amazing journey 🤗 I love you

ASHUU! THANK YOU! So glad you likey and lovey :)

I am glad the emotions came through and for your lovely comments!

Thank YOU for being a part of this journey with my amateur skills and motivating me to type this out!

LOVEEEE❤️

Originally posted by: Mountains_Lakes

Wow. Am I glad to have read the last two chapters together?

As I finished reading the first one I was like damn, the phrase "if xyz happens tomorrow,ill tell you something is jinxed". It always leads to Rohan the great MU. I was with Raavi on this one. How is Shivattwisting this. It's like he had preconceived notions and that's what he was looking for and that why he interpreted her words the way it did.

But thank God, this time, he actually opened up and talked it out in defeat instead of lashing out at her like the last time. And Raavi could see the other side. Haha the fact that you wrote about kiss! ❤️. Both of their talk was sweet and so glad they made it up. And the two are walking together to new life ahead❤️❤️

Beautiful, Twinsey! :)

Hails Twin!!! Thank you Thank you!

I am so glad you liked it!

That infamous part was all thanks to Ashu😳Took me a LLOOT of time to write those 2 sentences ahhahaha.

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Originally posted by: mpks1

Anu, just read the last chapter. After all, Shiva wanted acceptance from Raavi, he studied hard, worked hard and she has been with him through and through. Same goes with Raavi, an average girl became a topper because she wanted to be accepted and loved by Shiva. I am glad you showed them talking and both shared their feelings about each other. It was the perfect ending to a perfect story❤️

Thank you so much!! Thanks for sticking around my amateur writing skills!

I am so glad the emotions came through and you liked it!

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Originally posted by: maanmeet1

finally.......confession.....MU cleared and everything is sorted........m so happy

AH Thank you so much for sticking around!!

Originally posted by: Suparna2210

it was lovely Anu! Amazing FF! Added to my fav list!❤️‍🔥❤️‍🔥

AAH! Thank you so much! So glad you liked it :)

Originally posted by: Kfof

Loved the confession part❤❤

Their sweet walk😍😍❤

Beautiful ending❤❤❤

Thank you so much! Thanks for sticking around :)

Originally posted by: Miss.M

Will, be my bedtime reading tonight... The story sounds sooo familiar... I have a feeling I've watched it dubbed in hindi... Will finish reading and then watch the movie... Excited!!

You might have watched it haha! Thank you- hope you like it!

Originally posted by: Khoobsurat123

A very beautiful story both of them feels inferior and lead to two years of seperation😒😒 but I am happy atlast Shiva said his feelings and the feelings are from both side equally😳

Loved it... keep writing👍🏼

Thank you so much! Glad you liked it :)

Originally posted by: virangna2005

lovely 💖💖💖💖💖💖💖beautiful story👌👌👌👌👌👌

Thank you so much! Glad you liked it!