REALISATION- A SHIVI OS PART11 PG14 COMPLETED - Page 5

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PART6

An: (screaming) shiva raavi upar chhat pe hai…………….

Shiva was shocked for a minute.raavi was upstairs. For a second he felt his fear was becoming true. No, it can’t happen, he thought. He didn’t see anything, didn’t listen to anyone and just ran towards stairs. He removed his waistcoat and used it to blow of the fire on stairs. Whole family kept calling him but he didn’t hear a word. As he ran up, he continuously called her. Raavi, who was still crying, heard him and wiped her tears. Shiva finally reached after struggling so much in fire. He found raavi sitting on the floor. He quickly rushed towards her and picked her up and shouted.

Sh: (shouted) tu kya behari hai?......kab se bula raha hu……….kan band hai tere……(raavi was about to speak but stop as shiva continued)….pata hai bhi hai neeche kya hua hai……..short circuit ho gya hai…………..aadhe jayada ghar aag ki chapet me hai…… chal nikale jaldi………

Raavi got panicked. They both ran towards the stairs only to find them completely covered with fire.Fire was slowly spreading and in some time it will cover whole first flooralso. She was scared. She clanged to shiva in fear. Shiva found that gaubmi and bhabhi’s room was still away from fire. They both rushed inside the room. Shiva tried to find out a blanket in her room and after constant searching he found one blanket only. He took and wrapped it around raavi so that she doesn’t catch fire.

Ra: (panicked) shiva tu…..tera kya?..........tere kadpdo me aag lag gyi toh………

Sh: (wrapping the blanket around her properly) mujhe kuch nhi hoga raavi………..tera safe rehna jaroori hai……….koi sawaal jawab nhi tu bas shanti se mere saath chal baaki main samhaal lunga(giving her assuring look)

As he said, a bulb in the room caught fire,. They both rushed out and found that fire was increasing uncontrollably. They heard family member calling them and saying to come fast as whole house was catching fire with very high speed. They both rushed to the staircase. They both struggled hard to come down. Raavi started coughing because of smoke. Shiva held her from waist protectively. He was continuously encouraging her so that she doesn’t panic. They both, after so much struggle,finally reached hall but hall was too covered by fire. Whole decoration was on fire. He protectively held raavi and stepped forward. He saw his three brothers standing in the area near the gate calling him out. They tried to come towards him but fire was too high. He held raavi and headed carefully saving themselves from fire. Raavi was coughing like anything. She was complaining that she was unable to breath. All this made him remember his dream. No, I can’t let it happen, no matter what I’ll protect her, he thought. Suddenly he heard krish say “shiva, upar dekhhhhh………” and looked up to find that a large piece of decoration was about to fall on them. He got panicked and pushed raavi saying “raavi jaaaaaa………”. As he pushed her, she fell on fire but she didn’t catch fire was protected by the blanket. But she was least bothered about her. She turned her face towards shiva who was lying unconscious on floor with a big piece set on fire over him and blood coming out of his head. As she looked him, she screamed “shivvaaaaaaa………”. She was still facing difficulty to breath but she got and tried to run towards shiva but felt someone holding him. It was gaumbi. Gaumbi asked krish to take raavi outside immediately and said that he and dev will rescue shiva. Raavi didn’t want to go but krish forcefully dragged her out. Dev and gaumbi rushes to save shiva. By this time, fire brigade was there. An ambulance was also called by fire brigade for the injured people They immediately started the rescue operation. Raavi was continouosly trying to go inside to shiva but everyone was stopping her saying that dev and gaumbi are there, they’ll save him. Raavi was continuously crying.Finally with the help of fire brigade, dev & gaumbi rescued shiva and brought him out on the stretcher. Raavi was devastated to see him. His half face was covered blood. She was shocked to the core. She couldn’t see this. She felt her world scattering and fell on ground unconsciously.

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PART7 PG8

omg.......my shiva......sab thik kar dena....pls

Originally posted by: maanmeet1

omg.......my shiva......sab thik kar dena....pls

bharosa rakho....... Sab thik hoga👍👍👍main sab thik kar dungi

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Originally posted by: GrilledCheese

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PART 7

His half face was covered blood. She was shocked to the core. She couldn’t see this. She felt her world scattering and fell on ground unconsciously. All family members rushed to the hospital and got both raavi and Shiva admitted. Doctors started their procedure. The doctor who was checking raavi came out of the room after 10 min of check up and said that she fell unconscious as some of the smoke entered her lungs and she had minute injuries too. He asked that who is shiva as raavi was taking his name continuously. Dhara answered him saying that he is her husband and is also admitted right now.

Raavi was lying unconscious. She got startled and woke up, screaming “shivaaaaaa” . she breathed heavily. Everyone, standing outside, heard her voice and got panicked.They entered room to find her terrified. Dhara came to her and caressed her head. Raavi hugs her and start crying. She asks where was shiva and how is he.She tries to get up from the bed but everyone stops her saying that doctor is checking him.

As all of them tried to make raavi calm, nurse enters and tells that shiva’s doctor is calling them to update them about shiva’s condition. Raavi didn’t see anything, just ran out of the room to the doctor asking that how is shiva now. She bombarded doctor so many questions in a single min. rishita and dhara tried to calm down her. But she was not in state of listening anyone. All she wants was her shiva back safe and sound. Doctors finally got opportunity to speak. He says that he doesn’t want to make them scare but shiva’s condition is in critical condition. He had severe head injuries, burns on skin and got electric shock for a long duration too because of short circuit. Doctor says that they have to keep shiva under observation and they can’t say that when shiva will gain consciousness. Doctors say though he is fighting b/w life and death, his family should not lose hope.

Raavi was scattered at this. He fell on her knees and cried uncontrollably.

Ra: (crying so hard that her voice was choking) sab…sab meri galti hai………meri wajha se shiva ki…..ki yeh halt hai………..mujhe usko apne saath lana chahiye tha….....vo paagal gadheda…..mujhe dhakka maar diya aur khud vahin phas gya…….(hugged dhara whowas trying to reason her)……..agr shiva ko kuch ho gya na toh main nhi jee paaungi, nhi jee paaungi………

She cried and cried and finally fell asleep after getting tired.

Whole night passed like this. Raavi got up next day. She was weak physically. She can’t stop her tears.The whole scene of shiva saving her went through her eyes. He remembered the khandar where shiva protected her. Suddenly, a relisation struck her. She composed herself and went outside the room.

Everyone was shocked at her behaviour. The girl who was crying recklessly few minutes before was now so calm. rishita went to her and asked her to rest but raavi didn’t hear.

Ra: (stiff voice) main bikul thik hu……….aur aap sab aise maayush hoke mat betho…….shiva thik ho jayega………..usse thik hona hoga……. (to gautum) gaumbi, doctor ne kya kaha hai……..kabtak hosh aayega shiva ko?....

Ga: (low voice) doctor ne abhi koi surety nhi di hai…..but bol rahe hai ki haalat dheere dheere thik horhi hai, dawai bhi asar kar rhi hai…..

Ra: (with same attitude)thik hai………..kya main andar jaake use mil sakti hu?.....(seeing towards suman to take permission)

Suman didn’t protest as she didn’t want to do so and nodded her head in yes.

Raavi entered the room and saw shiva lying on the bed motionlessly. Her heart ached but tears didn’t fall.She promised herself to be positive. Nothing will happen to her bhoothnaath.Bholenaath can’t snatch him from her too. Though he will be of someone else after sometime but his sight is enough for her survival. She sat beside him for10 min but didn’t say anything. Dhara entered the room with a plate of food found raavi sitting and looking at shiva. She caressed her head and asked herto eat something. Raavi didn’t protest and took plate saying that we need to be strong otherwise when shiva will get fine, he’ll be hurt. Dhara’s eyes filled up and she hugged her. She asks raavi to take some rest but she refuses and says that she’ll we here till he isn’t completely okay. Dhara tried to protest but couldn’t after seeing her pleading eyes. Dhara left.

Raavi again sat in silence for 10-15 min before she broke it.

Ra: (smiling) tera acha hai shiva………..mujhe persaan karna ho toh bas chup ho jayo………par teri yeh chupi nhisahi jaati…………tu thik ho ja, phir chahe zindagi bahr baat mat karna………..bahut nafrat hai na tujhe mujhse……..phir kyun mere liye apni jaan daaw pelagai…….mera kya hai…..tujhse durr hone ke baad toh mujhe zinda laash ki tarah rehna hai……isse acha toh main mar jaati…….ab mar bhi nhi skti kyunki meri har saans teri mujh par karz ka interest hai, jo ki mujhe zindagi bahr bahrna hai………….ek baat bata shiva….tu mujhse itni nafrat kyun karta hai…..maasi ki wajha se ya koi aur bhi reason hai………..tujhe pata hai main dheere dheere tujhe samjhne lagi thi…..tere paas aane lagi thi…..but tu humesha mujhse durr bhagta tha………….(she continues)

Raavi just continue talking to unconscious shiva. she felt that this was the only time when she can talk to him without any filteration. She complains, apologises, confess and said whatever she wanted to say to him in front of him but her self respect was stopping her. She complains him for his deed and asks for the reason. She says that he hurt her till her core. She apologise him for not understanding him and his emotion. She says that they both were wrong and she was ready to accept her mistake but he wasn’t. she tells him why she decide to go. For 2-3 hrs, she kept talking to him and felt light hearted. She was tired after talking so much. She kept her head on his hand and slept.

She was woke up by doctor who came to do shiva’s check-up. She went out of the room and all waited for doctor to come out.

Doctor came out of the room talking to nurse. They found their expression somewhat serious. Everyone was afraid whereas raavi was hopeful. As soon as the nurse left, they all gathered around the doctor start asking about shiva’s health. Doctor was still silent.

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part8 - pg9

Suspense mein hi chod diya jaan abhi bhi atki hui hai kya hoga Shiva ko🤣🤣........... BTW was a very nice update and eagerly waiting for next part......

Originally posted by: Odette_delusion

Suspense mein hi chod diya jaan abhi bhi atki hui hai kya hoga Shiva ko🤣🤣........... BTW was a very nice update and eagerly waiting for next part......

suspense toh banta hai😁🤣😆

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PART 8

Doctor came out of the room talking to nurse. They found their expression somewhat serious. Everyone wasm afraid whereas raavi was hopeful. As soon as the nurse left, they all gathered around the doctor start asking about shiva’s health. Doctor was still silent.

They were all asking so many question that doctor was not able to speak. Finally, they all stopped their interrogation and doctor got a chance to speak. He told that shiva was out of danger and he may get consciousness by night. But still they have to keep under observation and after test reports are normal only then they can discharge shiva. Everyone was very happy. They thanked god. Raavi was overwhelmed. She knew that shiva will always keep his promise. Disha was there too. She was also happy. She went to raavi and hugged her. raavi too didn’t resist. Disha took raavi to side away from family as she want to talk.

Di: (smiling) thank god!!Shiva thik hai………(kept her hand on her shoulder) tum thik ho

Ra: (casually without any expressions) hmmm……….

Di: ek baat puchu raavi………..tum shiva se pyaar karti ho na?......................

Raavi looked with all her amazement.

Di: (smiling) aise kya dekh rahi ho…….tum dono ko dekh ke saaf pata lag jata hai………..dono ek dusre se bahut pyaar karte ho…………..jis tarha shiva bina kisi cheez ki parvaah kare tumhe bachane chala gya aur jis tarha tum shiva ke liye paresaan ho na …..usse pata chalta hai hai ki tum dono hi ek dusre se kitna pyaar karte ho…………bas bol nhi paa rahe ho……..main shiva se nhi kah sakti abhi….isliye tumhe bol rahi hu……ussebata do………main toh iss shaadi se khud backout kar lungi…………..par kaki uske liye koi aur le aayegi………..tumhare paas time hai…….bol do usse jo bhi tumhare mann me hai……kuch mat chupaana usse…………..

As disha said this , she left raavi in dilemma. ‘was she right? Did shiva really loved her?’ she thought and remembered the moment when shiva didn’t care himself and protected her. Shewas too confused.

That night, Ravi and gautum stayed back in hospital at night. Gautum was taking a nap outside the room whereas raavi was sitting beside shiva holding his hand and head down.

The darkness in front of shiva’s eyes slowly started disappearing. He slowly opened his eyes to find raavi beside him, with head down. He recalled what happened the last time hewas in consciousness. He was glad that she was fine. Slowly, he tugged her hairs behind her ears making her wake up. She saw him and her eyes filled up.

Ra: (with teary eyes andhusky voice) shiva!!!! tu thik hai na? ………kaisa feel ho raha hai?..........main doctor ko bulati hu……

As she got up shiva held her and and signed her to sit. Raavi didn’t protest and sat at the chair. They maintained 2min silence. Shiva was still holding her hand tightly.

Ra: (shifting closer tohim) shiva……kuch chahiye tujhe?........paani du?........(concerned)

Shiva nodded his head in yes. Raavi make him drink water carefully. Some of water spilled on shiva by mistake so raavi cleaned it softly with towel. Shiva looked the innocent figure in front of him. No matter what, each time he saw her, she looked equally mesmerising.

Sh: (low tired voice)raavi……tu thik hai?....

Raavi’s eyes welled at this.

Ra: (teary eyes)shiva……….khud ki halat aisi ho rahi hai….aur meri chinta kar raha hai………(with angry tone) uss din vo stunt karne ki kya zaroorat thi….mujhe dhakka mara diya khud vahin khada rah gya………(turned her face in annoyance)

Sh: tune mere sawaala ka jawab nhi diya………tu thik hai raavi?.....(this time with greater force)

Ra: (turning towards him and with loud voice) nhi hu……nhi hu main thik………..tujhe kya lagta hai main thik-

Raavi stopped as nurse entered the room and then called doctor to check him. Raavi silently went out of the room and cried. How could she be okay when he was in such condition? How can he even think that she was fine? She remember how shiva saved her everytime. But she didn’t want to misinterpret this care as love as she did in dev’s case. She didn’t want a heartbreak again.

After doctor left, raavi went inside the room and saw shiva lying on the bed with closed eyes. Raavi went near him and her hand unknowingly caressed his hair. This made shiva sleepmore peacefully.

Next morning, pandyas arrived. They all met shiva. all were there but not raavi. disha was also there but not willing. She was forcefully called by suman. Suman asks everyone to leave shiva and disha alone for some time.

Disha sat beside shiva but there was a silence for few minutes before disha broke the ice.

Di: (smiling) feeling better?........

Shiva nodded his head in yes.He was not interested in talking to her. His mind was completely occupied bychipkali who didn’t came to see her since morning. Shiva was continuously looking at door. Disha observed this.

Di: (smiling) sayad ab raavi dopehar tak aayegi……….teen din baad aaj gyi hai ghar ……..thak gyi thi………

Shiva looked her in amazement. How come she knows that he was waiting for raavi? Disha detected his question.

Di: (smirks) aise kya dekh rahe ho?............sab ko dikhta hai…….bas sayad tum dono ko nhi dikhta….jis tareeke se tumne us din raavi ko bachaya…..koi bhi bata dega ki tumhare mann mekya hai……….aur jis tareeke se raavi pichle teen rahi hai use bhi sab pata chal jata hai……..shiva, ho sake toh accept karlo aur bol do isse phele kaki humara rishta pakka kar de(pleading look)……..main nhi chahti ki kaki humare rishte ki baat aage badaye…….take care……..

Disha left leaving him in confusion. He didn’t know what to say or do. He thought and thought for long time. His thought process broke when raavi entered the room.

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guys I am hell confused how to write confession part........please give ideas and help me out🥺🥺🥺🥺............. soch soch ke dimag ka dahi ho gya hai........

part9 on pg 11

Beautiful.I would like you to continue this scene with shiva complaining about where she has been for so long .Here her husband is injured n she is not available when he needs her for personal help and for attention something like that. They keep on bickering ravi giving info about where she has been but shiva is stuck up at being ignored n not cared enough like a kid.Then suman comes in with family announcing it would be disha who would take care of shiva in his personal space.shiva is super uncomfortable n angry says Ravi is there to take care so need of disha n ravi too can't tolerate it 😣 n claims she would herself take care of her husband.she gives suman back ignoring whatever Shiva will be angry or not.she has had enough of her tantrums n won't tolerate more.suman questions her ,shiva can't tolerate it n claims to love Ravi.Ravi doesn't say anything in shock.But while taking care of him plans surprise in hospital itself n proclaims her love n asks for forgiveness about how he has been treated by her friends n making him insecure.shiva starts crying n says for how long he wants to listen this from her but himmat hi nahi hui n apologizes for his mistakes too reveals his insecurities n take promise to never ever leave him n vice versa.I have full fledged imagined what I would like to read😂😂😄.I could go in detail more but zyada ho jaega 😁