Hlo guys……Here I present my first fan fiction..........I know it's quite late to post this but still...please ignore the errors.......please tell the loopholes and minus point too, soo that I can improve.................
THE BAINGAN KAAND
PART 1
Suman warned dhara not to do a single household work and gave whole responsibility of kitchen to raavi. And now all the kitchen related things are handled by raavi. Raavi goes to market looking for vegetables for the dinner (in show it is lunch but I made it dinner). She find nothing but only baingan. She thinks what to do. She knows that gaumbi and shiva are not fans of baingan but at the same time nothing is available except baingan. (in show krish and dhara came to know that raavi was going to make baingan in dinner but here no one knows this except raavi …). Raavi decides to buy baingan with the thought that she will make it in such a way that no one will able to recognize that it is baingan. So, she buys baingan and returns home.
At night everyone gathers in dining room for dinner. raavi starts serving food to everyone. She was afraid of shiva and gaumbi while serving them there not so favourite baingan.(here I reapeat no one know that raavi made baingan). Everyone starts eating except shiva as he was somewhat busy in his phone. raavi thinks in her mind that bhoothnath will eat his not so favourite baingan without even knowing. Everyone eats the dish and find it very tasty. They appreciate her for it. Shiva sees this and feels proud of her but maintains his favourite look ‘mujhe fark nhi padta’. He takes one bite in his hands take it towards his mouth but before he put the bite in his mouth, his nose detects the smell of baingan. He looks at raavi who was smiling seeing him and thinking that how will shiva react when he will come to know that he ate baingan. Shiva gave raavi a death glare which made raavi realized that she was caught. Now, she was sure that he will create a big scene in front of everyone and she will get scolding by dhara, maa and gaumbi. But to her surprise, shiva eats his first bite without uttering a word. He was not able to eat it but still he ate it. Raavi was shocked to see this. She never thought that shiva would do this. She saw shiva struggling to eat baingan. She was happy to see him like this because somewhere she wanted to annoy him.
Everyone finishes their food and head towards there room for sleeping. Raavi goes to kitchen where she finds shiva drinking milk. She was quite shocked that shiva was drinking milk and that too at this hour. Shiva sees her with anger. Raavi finds that his eyes are swelling. Before she could ask, he leaves. Raavi let that go as she thought that he must be tired or sleep deprived. Raavi, after completing all the work, prepares her cot for sleeping. She lie down and tried to sleep. After few moments, she hears sound from kitchen. She goes there and find shiva struggling to stand and as he is about to fall she goes and holds him. Shiva tries to push her away but he is not in the state to do so. Raavi is shocked to see that there were rashes on shiva’s body and his eyes were red with high body temperature. She was not able to handle shiva alone, so she called krish who was sleeping like a kumbhkaran. She tried to handle this on her own. She takes shiva to his room and made him sit comfortably on bed. He was continuously repeating one line “raavi tu ja ….main khud ko handle kar sakta hu”. Raavi was fed up of hearing this and finally when limit crossed she kept her hand on shiva’s mouth and said “chup…bikul chup….ab ek sabd bhi nikala na toh seetha dhara di ke paas jaungi aur unki neend kahrab karne ka blame tujhe aayega samjha”. Shiva tries to say something but after seeing the death glare given by raavi he stopped. she brings first aid box and cold water bowl with cloth. she was unable to find what happened to shiva. It seems some sort of allergy. but she didn’t knew any kind of allergy shiva had. she gave him medicine and kept cold water cloth to bring his temperature done.
After some one or two hour, shiva got somewhat better and was in condition to talk. She asked him that how this happened, how come he got these rashes. She never seen shiva in such condition before. Shiva refused to answer her and told her to leave him alone saying that he is fine. Raavi found something fishy. She knew that he is hiding something. She tried her best to know but shiva didn’t utter a word. Finally raavi’s patience broke. She hold his hand and kept it on her head saying “shiva tujhe meri kasam …….sach sach bata kya hua tujhe …ye rashes….fever ke saath….phel toh kabhi nhi hua aisa …..bol kya hua tujhe…”. Shiva saw her with big eyes. How could he even tell her about this? He don’t want her to be guilty as she didn’t do anything that she should feel guilty but he knew that if she comes to know the truth then she’ll surely blame herself. But now he need to tell as she gave him swear on her. As shiva was thinking this, raavi thought that should have given dhara di’s aur kaki’s swear to him as he hardly cares for her and can easily break it. Still, she again ask that what happened to him. Finally, shiva decided to tell her but he is going to show his anger to her as always. He says “ kyu fikr kar rahi hai…koi jaroorat nhi iski…….tujhe jaanana hai na ki ye meri haalat kyun hai….toh sunn mujhe allergy hai……with a pause….ajwaeen se…(raavi thought how come he ate it as it is not used in the house because of it’s smell which is not liked by anyone in family)..aaj shaam ko dost bahar leke gya ….wahn pe humne kuch khaya …sayad uss me ajwaeen thi par mujjhe pata nhi chala…isliye ye….”. before he complted, he saw raavi fuming with anger but at the same time showing concern not sympathy. Anger for being so carless and concern for his condition. Raavi scolded him for being careless attitude. She was almost about to cry but controlled herself. Shiva was happy to see that raavi was scolding him with right. But at the same time he can’t deny that it is short lived. Shiva asked raavi not to tell anyone about this. Raavi refused first but when shiva pleaded she agreed. Shiva falls asleep and raavi also sleep sitting beside him.
Next morning, dhara comes to raavi with a basket full of baingan and asked her to make baingan today. Raavi thought that they ate it yesterday and smiles. Dhara says that raavi need to make one more vegetables as gaumbi and shiva don’t eat baingan. Raavi smiled a bit thinking of yesterday night when both of them were eating baingan. Raavi said that she won’t make another vegetable as she is sure that both gaumbi and shiva will love to eat baingan today. Dhara intrude her by saying “bikul nhi tujhe ek aur sabzi banana padegi raavi……..ek baar ko gaumbi baingan kha lenge par shiva….vo haath bhi nhi lagaye ga….na main usse lagane dungi…”. Raavi saw dhara with amazement and confused look and to this dhara replied, “aree tujhe maine abhi tak bataya hi nhi…….shiva ko baingan se allergy hai….isliye shiva baingan nhi khata…..”. after hearing this, raavi felt as if earth slipped down her legs. she was in shock. She asked dhara about shiva’s allergy and to this dhara replied that shiva is only allergic to baingan and if he eats baingan by mistake he gets rashes all over his body and also fever. Raavi understood that shiva lied to her. She realized that during dinner he came to know that it was baingan but still ate it. Even when she asked him he lied. She thought why did he do so. Immediately, her heart said that he didn’t want her to feel guilty. But now was too angry on shiva. ‘What was the need of eating it?’ she thought. She blamed herself for doing this prank on shiva and others. She decided to confront him today itself.
Everyone was waiting for breakfast. Shiva arrives there. He was feeling much better bit still he had rashes on his neck face, and body. Raavi and dhara came with breakfast. Raavi was giving him death glares with tears in eyes. As shiva thought, she was feeling guilty without any reason. Before anyone sees this, dhara noticed rashes on shiva’s neck. She asked shiva shockingly that if he consumed baingan yesterday. She turns towards raavi thinking about last night. Before dhara could come on any conclusion about last night dinner, shiva said “Bhabhi vo kal main apne dostoon ke saath zara chala gya tha……..vahan pe unho ne idli sambhar khila diye……khate hue pata h nhi chala par raat me thodi si tabiyat kharab hui toh samjh ayaa……..jayada nhi khay isliye handle ho gya mujhse akele aur jaise hi mujh realise hua ki maine baingan khaya hai, maine doodh pi liya……….maine davai bhi le li hai, aap tension mat lo bilkul”. After saying this he look at raavi. Her eyes were questioning him about his actions. Dhara scolded shiva for being carelessness and ordered him to stay at home today and take rest. Gaumbi agrees with dhara.
Raavi thought in her mind “kal mujhse jhut bola, aaj dhara di se jhut bola……iss gadhede ko jab pata chal gya tha ki baingan ki sabzi hai toh kyun khayi………idiot, stupid, pagal…….par shiva ke paas acha mauka tha meri dobara insult karne ka, sambke saamne bura banana ka par phir bhi shiva ne do baar ye mauka chodd diya……..kyun?....usne mujhe kyun bachaya kaki aur dhara di se..........mujhe aaj ho usse baat karni hogi……..chhodungi nhi iss bandar ko aaj main”. in his room, shiva thinks sitting on bed “aaj toh gya….bahbhi ki najare itni tez kyun hai………ab raavi mujhse puche gi ki kal raat jhut kyun bola aur fir subh kyun jhut bola toh kya kahunga usse…usse sach bhi toh nhi kah sakta....ab vo bina baat guilty feel karegi aur kuch nhi…usse nhi pata ki agr maa ya bhabhi ko pta chal jata toh voh log kitna gussa karte usse...abhi abhi toh bahbhi aur raavi sulha hui hai..fir se agr misunderstanding ho jaati toh..........Bhabhi ko bhi uske saamne hi puchna tha…..beta shiva taiyaar ho ja……..kyunki teri gauri aaj kaali banke tujhe damru banakar bajane wali hai… ”. as he was thinking all this raavi enters the room with anger on her face and unwanted guilt in eyes with basket full of baingan in hand…………………..
Sorry guys for ruining all biological and medical logics. And also for writing this long and still leaving a question that what will happen next.Hope you guys enjoyed this…………
PART 2- PG 3
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