THE BAINGAN KAAND- SHIVI FF PART3 PG4 COMPLETED - Page 2

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Posted: 3 years ago
#11

Nice take to this baingan kaand! In the shower for some reason, I always felt that Raavi would know of this since she practically stayed at their place growing up.


Continue soon.

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: Mountains_Lakes

Nice take to this baingan kaand! In the shower for some reason, I always felt that Raavi would know of this since she practically stayed at their place growing up.


Continue soon.


I also thought this, but then I took the "story me kuch bhi ho sakta hai" excuse and wrote it😅😅😅

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Posted: 3 years ago
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hey guys........I am here with the second part of THE BAINGAN KAAND. hope you'll like it and please review................ and I edited the last line of part 1, see that too...............

PART 2

suman’s room

Su: toh bhagodi ki beti! Mujhe toh phele nivaale me hi pata chal gyatha……….tujhe kab pata chala? (in her usual saasu maa tone)


Dh: (while tiding up suman’s room) mujhe bhi phele bite me hi pata chalgya tha……….main shiva ko rokti isse phele usse pata hi chal gya….. mujhe laga maa ki vo khud rukk jayega (sat in front of her)……. jis tarha se raavi ko ghur raha tha, mujhe laga ki raavi pe chillaye ga par voh toh baingan kha gya…………….tension toh iss baat ki thi ki zayada tabiyat kharaab na ho jaye……..par raavi ne samhaal liya….


Su: (making faces) do peticot chaap kam the jo ye teesra bhi bangya………..ye dega uss kaagdi ki beti ko talaq………..(smiled at little) na hi de toh acha….dono ki sulha ho jaye jaldi hi……………….


Dh: hn maa……..dono saari galtfemi durr kar ke phir vahi purane haste-khelte, nok jhok karte hue shiva-raavi ban jaye……..(smiling)


Su: vaise tune bhi daaun acha khela hai(laughing)………….kaise shiva ko raavi ke saamne hi puch liya……….aur maanana padega mere bete ki haazir jawabi ko bhi…….kya bachaya hai usse……….


Dh: haa maa(laughing)…maine toh raavi ko kitchen me hi bata diya tha…maano uske paaro se zameen khisak gyi ho sunne ke baad……aur jab shiva mujhe bebkoof bana raha thatab dekha tha maine usse……raavi toh gauri se kaali ban gyi thi gusse me(laughing)


Su: abhi kya kar rahi hai vo……


Dh: maa, maine abhi abhi usse shiva ke kamre me jaate hue dekha……..aur haath me baingan ki basket thi(giggling)………….bhagwaan jaane abhi kya kar rahehonge dono……


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Shivi’s room

Sh: ae gadhegi, kya kar rahi hai? Lag jayegi mujhe………..(screaming)


Raavi was throwing baingan on shiva out of her anger.


Ra: pagal, gadheda, idiot, stupid, akal ka dusman……………aaj nhi chodungitujhe…ruk tu…………..(chasing shiva who was running aroud the room to protect himself from the baingan bombs) ……… …..paagalpan ki hadh paar kar di aaj tune shiva………….main bta nhi sakti ki kitna gussa aa rha hai tujh par……………..(continuouoly throwing baingan on him)


Sh: arree marna band kar…….lag rahi hai…..phele hi tabiyat theek nhi haimeri…tu aur maar rahi hai……..(trying to save himself from the the baingan)


Ra: tabiyat karaab hai!!!!.......tab nhi socha jab baingan khaya ja rahatha raat ko……tab hosh nhi tha ki tabiyat kharab ho jayegi……(still running behind him and hitting him with baingan that were on the floor)………aur phir jhut bhi bol diya badi safai se…….hn?.......rukk tu….


Sh: raavi, marna band karegi tab toh main kisi bhi sawaal ka jawaab de paaunga……….(shielding him by the pillow)…….ahh, raavi lag rahi hai bas kar naab…….kitna maaregi?


Ra: jo harkat ki hai na tune uske liye ye bahut kam hai(throwing pillow on him)………..jaan buch ke apni tabiyat kharab ki…..pata tha ki voh baingan hai…..phir bhi khaya……..(throwing basket on floor with full force and stopped hitting him)akal kya ghaash charne gyi thi teri……….gusse ke aage kuch dikhai nhi deta……….mera gussa khud pe nikala….gadheda……….......


Sh: aisa kuch nhi hai…..main kisi-


Ra: (interrupted shiva) aisa nhi hai toh kaisa hai………….galti meri hihai…..mujhe hi dhyaan rakhna chahiye tha……aalas ke chakkar me maine dusri sabji nhi banayi(looking away and her eyes filled with tears and unwanted guilt)……..par tu bhi toh paagal hai…..agr bol deta sabke saamne , toh kya ho jaata……meri daant hi toh padti……vaise bhi meri galti hi thi……..tujhe kya-


Sh: (cut her in b/w) isiliye toh nhi bataya………


Raavi looked him with confusing expression whereas he saw her with determination…………


so here I end this part..........next pert will be updated soon..........

PART 3- PG 4

Edited by virangna2005 - 3 years ago
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Posted: 3 years ago
#14

Nice👍🏼

Thanks for consideration for what I said in last chapter🤗

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Posted: 3 years ago
#15

I loved it ❤️

waiting for the next 🤗

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Posted: 3 years ago
#16

Both of parts were great.

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: Khoobsurat123

Nice👍🏼

Thanks for consideration for what I said in last chapter🤗


🤗🤗🤗

thanks to you 😊😊😊

actually it was needed and you brought it to my notice.........😊😊

Edited by virangna2005 - 3 years ago
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Posted: 3 years ago
#18

awwwwww cuties.....🤗

dhara and suman pakke khiladi nikle🤣

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Hello girl... This was really good... Loved how Raavi didn't even think about how much trouble she could get in for this kaand, was only worried about Shiva.. ❤️

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Posted: 3 years ago
#20

Dhara and Suman are cupids...wow and their plan worked😎

Shivi room scene was cute❤️

Do update soon!!

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