Shivi SS: Yeh dooriyan , part 7 (pg 6) ,updated on 15/10/21 - Page 2

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Finally something on this topic!

I really felt there was a LOT of potential in this particular occurrence but the makers chose to not do any follow-ups as usua.

Anyhow, this was absolutely terrific.

Do continue soon. Can't wait to read more. ❤️

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Fabulous update 💕🥰🥰can’t wait for the next update

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Part 3


Confusion! . This was exactly what Raavi felt after the conversation that she had with Shiva. All this while she had thought that Shiva wanted a divorce because he hated her which he has since childhood. But now she felt there was something more to it ,but was unable to figure it out. She was determined to know what Shiva felt more and then she would decide what to do with their life. The whole marriage fiasco had clouded her mind and still was making her scared but she was more focused towards understanding her husband.

She tried to observe him whenever he was home but that was difficult because he spent most of the time at store ,as if he was finding every possible reason to avoid her. Raavi atleast wanted to have a normal conversation with him which never happened. She also had a college to end which intensified her misery.

One morning when she was about to leave for college, she saw Gauri standing in the aangan talking to Shiva. She felt her temperature rise seeing them together,but she controlled her feelings. She rushed away and collided with Gauri on her away.

Tum dekh ke nahi chal sakti ,aur subah subah tum yaha pe kya kar rahi hun , Gauri asked Raavi.

Raavi who already hated Gauri snapped back at her , yeh question toh mujhe tumse puchna chaiye.

Raavi glared at Shiva before leaving and Gauri was quick to notice this.

After Raavi left , Gauri asked him , Woh tujhe aisi looks kyu de rahi thi. Aisa laga ki woh tujhse bohot gussa hain.

Aisa kuch nahi hai Gauri. Hum dono hamesha ladte rehte hai. It's nothing new , Shiva replied.

Hmm teek hai. Par mujhe na uski behaviour bilkul acchi nahi lagti.

Shiva didn't saying. What could he say now?

Ek aur baat Shiva ,woh yaha se college kyun ja rahi hai? Uski apni ghar nahi hai kya , she asked in surprise.

Woh subah aa gayi bhabhi ki help karne ,isliye yaha se jaa rahi hai, he said.

Woh sab to teek hai. Par mujhe lagta hai woh kuch zyada authority dikha rahi hai iss ghar mein. Mujhe woh accha nahi lag raha. Aakhir kon hai woh, Gauri spoke annoyed.

Shiva wanted to tell Gauri that she was his wife and had every right in this house like him. But he was not sure if he could so. She no longer will be his wife in a few months and the thought itself pained him.

Dekh Gauri ,jaisa tu soch rahi hai waisa kuch bhi nahi. Iss parivaar bhi uski hai aur woh hum sab se bahut pyaar karti hai. Bhabhi ke liye woh choti behen jaisi hai aur iss parivaar ke sab log ke liye woh important hai. Pata hai nahi tujhse kyun rudely baat ki but normally woh aisi nahi hai. Lagta hai aaj uski mood thodi kharab hai, Shiva was clear in whatever he said about Raavi. He didn't want her to be misunderstood.

Calm down Shiva,tu itna irritated kyun ho raha hai. Aur waise uske tere saath kya rishta hai ,tu bhi usse pasand karti hai kya?.

Shiva froze at the question. He didn't know how to react.

Wohh.. main ,he started stammering

Woh acchi hai ,toh uss angle mein karti hoon pasand , Shiva spoke not trying to be expressive too much.

Accha teek hai. Maine socha tu use pasand karti hai bohot zyada. The way you were going protective about her, woh bohot cute tha, Gauri smiled at him and he was shocked.

Aisa kuch nahi hai Gauri ,tu kuch bhi sochi rehti hai, Shiva tried to retort but Gauri just teased him further.

Shiva tu darna math,main Raavi se iss baare mein kuch nahi kahungi. Tu na use baat karle aur pata chal ki woh tumhare liye kya feel karta hai. I'm sure she likes you too. Agar nahi pasand karti na woh subah mujhe aise looks nahi deti. Woh bohot gussa thi mujhe shayad isliye kyunki main tumse bohot close thi, Gauri said shocking Shiva further.

Gauri yeh sab tera imagination hai. Woh mujhe pasand tak nahi karta aur issi wajah se hum dono humesha ladte hai. Woh iss ghar mein sabko pasand karti hai sivaay mere, he spoke the last line with a bit of sadness and Gauri noticed this.

Shiva ,tu ek number ka stupid hai.
Woh tujhe bohot pasand karti hai ,shayad pyaar bhi karti hai.

Aaj subah tujhe uska expression dekhna tha. Jab hum dono baat kar rahe the ,woh bohot gussa tha aur tujhe dekh ke glare kar raha tha.

Tab maine uska matlab nahi samjha but now I can understand. She was jealous.

Isliye main tujhe keha rahi hoon ,use baat kar aur samajh ki uske dil mein kya chal raha hai. Cheezon ko assume math kar.

Ladkiyon ka soch tum ladkon ka jaisa bilkul nahi hota. Samajhne mein mushkil hai. Woh kuch sochta hai aur kuch aur dikhata hai ,tu kabhi decipher nahi karega.

Isliye tu directly usee pooch aur confusion clear kar. Agar usne tujhe reject kiya phir bhi teek hai which I'm sure she won't. Atleast tujhe uski dil ki baat pata chalega.

Gauri spoke gleefully already excited to witness a love story blooming before her eyes.

Dekh Gauri,uski koi zaroorat nahi hai. Main usse koi pyaar vaar nahi karta, Shiva said irritated with Gauri's idea.

Maine kab kaha tu usse pyaar karta hai. Par ab toh confirmed hai ki kisi bhi ladkiyon ko dhyaan nahi dene wala Shiva Pandya ko finally pyaar ho gaya hai. Yaayy , Gauri literally shouted and Shiva had to glare at her to reduce her volume.

Main dukaan jaa rahi hoon , Shiva said and left the next moment.

Gauri looked at his retreating self and prayed for his happiness. He was such a sweet and caring guy and he truly deserved all love in the world.

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It was lunch time and Raavi was quietly having her lunch. Today was a very hectic day for her. She had two assignments to submit and beyond of that seeing Gauri in the morning worsened her mood.

She quickly finished her lunch and sat down to revise her notes for tomorrow's exam. Before she could study more , Rahul came towards her and smiled at her.

Raavi ,kaisi hai tu. Accha hai ki tune college rejoin karliya, he said and Raavi just gave him a quick smile.

Sunna hai ki teri shaadi tooti hai. I feel so sorry for you. Waise ek baat acchi hai ek tune uss junglee janwar Shiva ko chod di.Woh tujhe jaisa ladki ko deserve nahi karta.

Raavi immediately got up hearing Rahul' words. Whatever happened between her and Shiva she couldn't bear to listen others insulting him. Beyond the fact that he was her husband ,he was still her family always.

Dekh Rahul ,tum Shiva ko aisa insult nahi ka sakta. Woh insaan hai koi jaahil junglee nahi. Aur jo bhi hum dono ko beech mein hua , tum fikar math karo , she said a bit angrily.

Chill yaar ,tu itna gussa kyun ho rahi hai. Main toh bas sach keh raha tha. Tune uss din dekha nahi ki woh kaise baat kar raha tha tujhe. Usmein koi sanskar nahi hai aur janwar bhi usee zyaada acche se behave karta hai. Tu uski wife hai par tujhe koi respect nahi kar raha tha woh. Aur humne mazak kiya aur usne hume maarne ki koshish ki. Iss unpadh gawar ke saath kaise reh sakti hai tu, Rahul spoke and that was it.

Bas karo. Enough is enough. Tum Shiva ke baare mein kuch nahi jaanti , kuch bhi nahi.Maana ki usne uss din bohot galat ki hai par main bhi koi accha nahi kia uske saath. Aur waise bhi mujhe tumhe explanation dene ke koi zaroorat nahi. Aaj ke baad agar tumne mere saamne Shiva ke burai ki na ,toh main baat tak nahi karna chahti tumse, Raavi literally shouted and a huge crowd was formed in the classroom.

Waah Raavi. Yaha main tujhe congratulate karne aaya hoon aur tu mujhe insult kar raha hai. Tujhe mujhe thank you bolna chaiye ki meri wajah se tune escape karliya us ghatiya shaadi se , Rahul smirked at her and Raavi got confused. She didn't understand what he was hinting at

Kya bola tumne ?

Rahul continued laughing and Raavi held his collar in anger.

Bol ,tumne Shiva ko kya bola uss din.? Woh itna gussa kyu thi?

Rahul removed her hands from his collars and smirked at her.

Woh Shridhar mujhe bata rahe the ki Raavi ke saath chalo. Atleast use mukti toh milega us Shiva se.Teri good for nothing husband ye sunke gussa ho gayi aur hum sab ko maarne ki koshish ki. Use mazaak ki matlab nahi pata. Kaise pata chalega , woh to college nahi gayi na. Teri junglee pati ek wild animal ki tarah hum sab pe gussa kiya aur tab hum samajhe teri shaadi kitni galat insaan ke saath hua.

Tears glistened her eyes and she covered her mouth in shock. That
was why Shiva was so angry that day.

She should have understood that Shiva couldn't be angry without a reason. How would he bear it when somebody else speaks about eloping with his wife in his presence. It was not a joke.

She slapped Rahul in anger and he didn't expect that to happen.

Ay Raavi ,tune mujhe thappad maara. Yeh tune accha nahi kiya , he roared in anger.

Uss din Shiva ko maine maara na woh tumhe milna chahiye tha , Shiva ko nahi. Ab chali jaa yaha se. Aaj se tera mera dosti khatam. Tera chehra bhi nahi dekhna hai mujhe. Aur Shiva ke baare mein ek aur shabd bola tho muh thod dunga, Raavi's eyes raged with anger.

Iske liye tu suffer karega Raavi. Tu ne yeh accha nahi kiya , Rahul spoke pointing his fingers at her. His friends tried to drag him away but he didn't budge.

Dekhte hain ki kaun suffer karega, she took her bag and left. She couldn't stay in the college anymore. This was all too much to bear and she needed some alone time to digest all of this.

After leaving from college Raavi came and sat in her favourite place ,beach. It gave her a peace of mind to come and sit there whenever she felt upset or sad.

She had never thought from Shiva's point of view regarding their relationship. But now she had a slight idea regarding how he felt. From whatever Rahul said ,she had understood that Shiva considered her as his wife and had feelings for her. Otherwise why would he have got angry like that when Sridhar spoke in that manner.

He could have told her all of this. He should have told her his feelings. At the same time she couldn't blame him for not doing so. What if he thought that she would make fun of him and never reciprocate his feelings?. All these thoughts were making her crazy and she thought to talk with Shiva regarding this. After that she could deal with Gauri.

She took an auto and left towards Pandya stores. It was evening and Raavi knew that he would be there.
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Kaka , Shiva kaha hai. Kahi dikhai nahi de raha. Raavi had straight away went to Pandya stores to meet Shiva.

Shiva andar hai. Kuch samaan arrange karna gaya hai , Kaka replied and Raavi went inside in the store room. Probably he will try to avoid her but she needed to talk to him. She needed answers. The feelings were mutual and she didn't want to divorce him just because of their silly misunderstandings.

Shiva, she called out to him and he was shocked to see her there.

Tu yaha kya kar raha hai. Tu college mein tha na , he asked.

Haa par ab woh important nahi hain. Mujhe tujhse baat karna hain, she said firmly.

Dekh Raavi , mujhe koi baat nahi karni hain. Waise bhi kya hai baat karne ke liye. Tu aur main baat karke ek dusre par gussa nikalte hai , aur main nahi chahti ki meri wajah se tujhe aur dard ho , he looked away unable to look into her eyes.

She walked towards him and asked, Kyun ,agar mujhe dard hota hai tujhe kyun farak padta hai. Tujhe khush hona chahiye,haina.

Main koi sadist nahi hoon ki kisi aur ke dard main mujhe khushi milega , he retorted.

Yeh Mera sawaal ka jawaab nahi hai Shiva. I know tere dil mein bohot kuch hai jo tu chupana chahta hai. Par mere saath yeh hide and seek math khelna. Bachpan se dekh ke aagaya hoon tujhe. Bol ,kya chal raha hai tere dimaag mein , she looked at him with a piercing gaze and he was unable to look away.

Dekh raavi ,yeh faaltu baaton mein mera time waste math kar. Mujhe time nahi hai , he tried to sound angry but he didn't know that she was even more smarter.

Aur tu bhi mera time waste math kar Shiva. Tera ye natak mujhse nahi chalega. Tu bas mera ek question ka jawaab de aur main yaha se chali jaaungi , she spoke with determination and Shiva was getting scared listening to her tone.

Kya jaan na chahti hai tu , he asked.

Yahi ki tune mujhe divorce dene ke baare mein kyun soch liya jab tu sach mein mere saath rehna chahti hai, she spoke and Shiva was shocked. How did she know this ?

He started laughing and spoke ,
Yeh sab bakwaas kisne kaha tujhse ,main aur tera saath. Yeh toh possible nahi hai. Agar tu iss duniya ki aakhri ladki hoti na ,phir bhi main aisa nahi karega.

Raavi got angry and held his collars,
Yeh mazak nahi hai Shiva. Sach sach bol. Teri yeh natak se guttan hogayi mujhe. I know tere dil mein kya chal raha hai. Ek baat kaan kholke sunle ,tere jawaab ke bina main yaha se nahi jaaungi.

Shiva stopped laughing and looked at her. She looked determined and he didn't know how to handle the situation. What should he tell her? The truth or a made up lie. How would she react ? He didn't have an answer to any of these questions. He didn't know what fate had in store for him.

Edited by Janeavneil - 3 years ago
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Thank god they have started to talk😂❤

Nice update❤❤

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Great update!! So raavi's misunderstanding with her friends is finally cleared ❤️

Glad she confronted Shiva directly.. waiting to see how it proceeds now!

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Finally the misunderstanding with her friends is cleared..So now there is no stopping for Raavi. Glad she asked questions directly to Shiva determined to get answers!!

Beautiful update...waiting for the next one❤️

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Finally direct face to face talk .loved it Rahul sounded scary but probably he would be the final push for shiva to confess his insecurities as well as love or he would be the one who would trigger his obsession for ravi in front of her .Abhi to it's clear ravi won't let him go without having her answers.update soon.

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Beautiful update ❤️👏

Finally Raavi knows about her friends true face😊

Shivi had the much needed conversation👏

Gauri is nice, she is a good friend of Shiva

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Hello... The latest update was very interesting... Curious to see what happens ahead...

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Part 4

Agar tujhe pata hai ki mere dil mein kya chal raha ,toh puch kyu rahi hai. Shiva really didn't know how to respond so the best thing he thought was to be indifferent to her questions.

Main cheezein assume karke galti nahi karna chahti. Mujhe tere muh se sunna hai tu kya chahta hai hamare rishta se. Raavi was also not backing out at any cost. She needed to know what was in his mind. She needed a closure.

Jab koi rishta hai hi nahi , usmein kya umeed rakhna hai. Maine pehli ba kaha hai aur phirse keha rahi hoon. Mujhse baat karke koi fayda nahi hai , Shiva said thinking that she will back out hearing that he was least interested in this conversation.

Tu kuch bhi bole Shiva, aaj main yaha se tujhe baat karke hi jaaungi. She was determined and there was no backing out.

Dekh Raavi,tu kuch bhi karle. Par jo mere dil mein nahi hai ,uske baare mein baat karna impossible hai , he tried to move out of the store room but raavi caught his right arm.

She closed the store room door and stood right in front of it ,making Shiva glare at her.

Ay maami ki behen ki beti ,iraada kya hai tera. Darwaza bandh kyun kiya?

He tried to push her away but she wouldn't budge.

Jab tak mujhe jawaab nahi milega ,hum dono iss darwaza ki bahar nahi jayenge , Raavi stood there folding her arms together with a firm look on her face.

Iss jawaab se kya karega tu. Hum toho alag hone wala hai aur tujhe ise kya lena dena hai, Shiva asked as a last thread of hope to make her back out.

She came closer to him ,looked in his eyes and spoke , Bohot kuch hai jo tu ab nahi samajh sakta. Agar tu mujhe asli jawab dega toh main bataunga.

Asli jawab toh main de chuki hoon. Tu vishwas nahi kar rahi hai aur main iske baare mein kuch nahi kar sakta, he said.

Tujhe na school of drama mein hona chahiye Shiva. Itna acha natak toh karta hai tu , she said sarcastically.

Tu kya ulti baatein kar rahi hai ,seedha bol na , he spoke getting irritated.

Pehle tu teek se baat kar mujhe. Bada aaya mujhe sawaal karne waala, she glared at him.

Tujhe khush hona chahiye tujhe mujhse chutkara mil raha hai. Phir bhi mere sar khaana kyu aagaya yaha, he said angrily.

Meri khushi tu decide nahi karega. Ek aur baat ,tujhe mujhse kabhi chutkara nahi milega. Main hamesha tera peeche padungi.

Agar maine dusri shaadi kiya , phir bhi tu mera peeche padegi chipkali ki tarah?.

He didn't want to say that but it was his last string to let her leave this conversation. He knew that if this continued he will probably tell her everything that is in his heart.

Her eyes glistened at his words but she composed herself and spoke,
Jab tak main zinda hoon ,tera koi dusri shaadi nahi hoga.

He was shocked to hear that. He had expected her to agree to it but instead she said the opposite of what he had thought.

Tu kaun hai mera life ki decision lene waali ?. He wanted her to leave at any cost and for that he had to infuriate her.

Tumhara biwi. Abhi ke liye yeh rishta kaafi hai. She said firmly shocking Shiva. She has never been this authoritative about their relation before. Then what changed now.

Jis biwi mujhe divorce karne wala hai uski koi value nahi hai meri life mein. Aur waise bhi ,iss rishte se teri dam ghutt rahi thi na. Ab kya badal gaya tere mere beech mein. It was more of like a question which he really wanted an answer for. Why is she behind him for answers if she is leaving him.

Divorce papers tune bheja tha maine nahi. Aur sign karne ke liye tune mujhe majboor kiya. Main nahi chahti thi yeh divorce ,she said. She had always wanted to say this to him. She wanted him to know that she didn't want a divorce.

Haa tu kyu chahegi. Tujhe toh hamesha Pandya pariwaar ki bahu ban na tha aur woh toh tu ban gayi na. Aur poora parivaar tujhe pyar karta hai , Shiva said.

Main kya bol rahi hoon aur tu kya samajh raha hai Shiva. Tu itna dumb kyun behave kar raha hai? Woh sab chod ,bas yeh bata ki uss din tune meri friends pe kyun gussa diya. Kya bola unlogo ne?. She wanted to hear him from that she was his wife and that is why he fought with them for all the nonsense that they said.

Tu toh bolti haina main jaahil jungle gawaar ..chalte phirte kirane ki dukaan hoon. Ab samjho ki isliye kiya. Mujhe toh logon ke saath behave karna hi nahi aata hai , he said sarcastically.

Raavi felt a pang in heart hearing all those names people and she herself had called him. He didn't deserve all of that.

Logon ke baat kab se tujhe farak padne lag gayi Shiva. Tu jaanti hai na tu aisa bilkul nahi hai. Ab kya badal gaya. She felt as if he sounded so broken but was trying to hide it through his rude behaviour.

Dekh ,tu mujhe padne ki koshish bhi math karna. Aur waise bhi tu apne baare mein soch. Mujhse baat karke time waste math kar. Koi fayda nahi hai he retorted.

Raavi spoke in her mind , Main tujhe kaise samjhau Shiva ki main yeh sab apne liye kar rahi hoon. Main regret nahi karna chahti ki maine kabhi tere feelings ke baare mein tujhe nahi poocha. Par tu toh kuch bata nahi raha hoon. Kya karun mein.

Raavi felt defeated at the pace their conversation was going. She had thought that she could make him admit his true feelings but here he was acting all stubborn. After all he was Shiva Pandya and he would only speak whatever he wanted.

She felt like crying but she didn't want him to empathise her. So she thought of leaving before she could break down in front of him. She had to find some other way of knowing what was in his mind.

Main abhi jaa rahi hoon. Par yeh math sochna ki sab khatam hogaya. Mujhe jawaab chahiye. Par ab mera mood kuch teek nahi hai , she said and left. Shiva did notice the tears in her eyes but he like always tried to hide his true feelings in front of her.

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Shiva came home early that day. Raavi's tears were distracting him and he couldn't do his work properly.

Dhara was shocked to see Shiva early.
Tu itna early aa gaya Shiva. Sab kuch teek hai na ?

Haa bhabhi. Main bas aise aaya kyunki aaj ka kaam jaldi khatam hogaya he replied.

He went and freshened himself and looked out at the aangan but couldn't find Raavi there. Has she already left and gone to her maasi's house after their conversation that happened today. He wanted to know about her but didn't know whom to ask. He went to their room and found her studying. He sighed in peace and
went out to sit in the aangan.

Krish came and sat beside him.

Tu Raavi bhabhi ko divorce kyun kar rahe ho ,tu sach mein bhabhi ko nafrat karti hai kya , Krish asked.

Dekh Krish ab iss sab ka koi fayda nahi hai. Jo hogaya woh hogaya. Hum dono iss decision main teek hain , Shiva said not having anything else to say in particular.

Tera to mujhe pata nahi ,par Raavi bhabhi bilkul khush nahi hai. Jab se ghar waapas aayi bohot bechaini si lagti hai. Aur college main bhi bohot moody hai. Jo Raavi bhabhi hamesha cheerful hotata ,sabke saath masti karta tha aaj kal sirf akela classes attend karta hai aur library jaata hai. Friends ke saath zyaada time tak spend nahi karta hai woh, Krish said looking at Shiva's expressions.

Dekh Shiva,aisa math soch ki main tujhe advice kar raha hoon. Ek baat toh clear hai. Tum dono iss decision main khush nahi hoon aur sabse zyaada yeh main jaanti hoon. Toh ho sake tum dono baat karke iss divorce ke leke rethink karo. Tum dono mere apne hai aur main tumhe dard mein nahi dekhna chahti , Krish said and walked away.

Raavi who was walking towards the kitchen heard what Krish said and looked at Shiva who was in deep thoughts.

She walked towards him and said ,
Shiva kal humari counselling ki session hai.

Shiva looked at her and nodded his head in response. He didn't know what to say. Was this their end or would it lead to new beginnings.

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