ShiVi: The one after Raavi’s decision SS (Raavi’s POV updated)

Index :

Part1 &2 : page 1

Part 3 &4: page 3

Raavi’s POV page 5

Part1:

so This is after Raavi came back to Pandya niwas saying that she will not go back …All Pandya boys are pleased but confused.. Dhara was miffed because what Raavi did a day prior..Suman was thinking and observing… she didn’t like her return but she wants to understand why did she come back all of a sudden? Rishita doesn’t know what to make of it…she has nothing against Raavi but off late Raavi is on some other tangent…. there was a huge showdown between Dhara-Suman and Raavi but Raavi was firm… the only person whose reaction she is fearful/awaiting of is Shiva … he wasn’t there … what will happen once he comes to know about this…

Shiva was channeling his anger and energy in work… Pandya store is his safe haven… nowadays he spent most of his time there only… even though he used to work for long hours before as well but now he will be the first person to open the store and last one to leave… he is working double hard to keep him occupied…the recurrent absurd hallucination like dreams not helping him either…

so he was preoccupied when Krish called him and ask him to come home urgently… his immediate thoughts were did something happen to Dhara Bhabhi again… he wasted no time and left for home… since he burnt his bike and Gaumbi refused to give him another one.. he has to walk all the way home… he has no issues in suffering from the consequences of his actions and he has accepted his punishment graciously….

he almost ran to home but when he reached there … the house is silent… eerily silent…he sensed something is wrong… he dreaded the worst… he saw Dhara sitting in courtyard on a cot looking sullen… he immediately ran up to her…

Shiva: Bhabhi aap theek ho..kya hua h? kuch hua h kya Krish ne aise phone krke kyu bulaya? sb theek to h na…

Dhara looked at Shiva but didn’t answer… she doesn’t know what to tell … though she is upset with Raavi … she doesn’t want Shiva to do something irrational too…

but before she could say anything… Krish came almost running to Shiva:

Krish : Are shiva theek ni ta pr ab sb theek ho gya hai… ab to sb khushi hi khushi mnayenge…wo jo aa gyi h

Shiva: ae kya bol ra h ? kon aa gyi h? fir kon sa bhoot sawaar hua tuj pr…

Krish: bhoot mj pr ni pr tuj pr sawar hone wala h… kyuki teri akal thikane lgane wali wapas jo aa gyi h…

Shiva was getting irritated: tu bkwas bn krega ya aj maar khaye bina chain ni milega tuje.. saaf saaf bol hua kya h.. warna itna marunga na…meri to ni pr teri akal jarur thikane aa jayegi…

Krish: abe ja… mai ni darta tujse ab …jyada dhamki dega na to bhabhi se complaint kr dunga wo btayengi tuje…

Shiva was getting annoyed with Krish antics… he got up to beat krish but Dhara held his hand …

Dhara without looking at shiva: Raavi wapas aa gyi h …

Shiva(his back towards Dhara) stiffened listening this… she came back… why? what does it mean? why did she come back? he was confused but then confusion is replaced with anger …did she come back to insult him? or insult his family more? divorce proceedings are already in progress… did she come to tell him that she doesn’t want divorce? no … it has to happen..though he has no issues with her insulting him but his family is a different matter altogether and also he doesn’t want the divorce proceedings to stop…

without turning back Shiva asked : kaha h wo?

Dhara trembled at his cold response… she can feel the storm brewing inside him… but its too late he can’t be stopped…

awesome chapter. excited for next update

It's amazing 😍 waiting for next part

Great Start :)

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Part 2:

Shiva asked again pulling Dhara out of her reverie: Bhabhi kaha h wo?

Dhara: Apne kamre me…

hearing this Shiva started in the direction of store room which was once their room..he himself doesn’t know how should he handle this… should he behave angrily/rudely as he is doing since last few days that will definitely piss her off … it worked like a charm when he practically bullied her into signing divorce papers…but no he doesn’t have the heart to hurt her more… plus nowadays Raavi has become too volatile.. what if she starts insulting his family again… he won’t be able to control his anger this time and end up hurting her which he doesn’t want… so the only option is to talk to her calmly first if she doesn’t leave then he will employ his anger as a weapon… sounds like a plan…at least that’s what he thought…

he entered the room … Raavi was busy unpacking… she has sensed him but scared to look at him for she can’t fathom his reaction or the extent of his anger so the best is to avoid him… and that’s what anyways she is planning on doing … when she decided to come back … she was firm on one thing that she is coming to rectify her mistakes for not reciprocating the love that this family has showered on her..and ignore Shiva to best of her abilities…

Shiva(rudely but calmly) : tu yha kya kr ri h? wapas kyu ayi h? or ye sb kya kr ri h?

Raavi took a deep breath and prepared herself for entering in this war zone….

Raavi: dikhai ni deta tuje … kapde laga ri hu…

Shiva taking a step forward: dekh raavi… ye natak mere sath mt kr … tu wapas kyu ayi h? kasam khayi ti na wapas ni ayegi… ab to divorce b de ra hu mai tuje… tune b sign kr diye h…court ka notice b aa gya h to ye nautanki kyu?

Raavi: ha pta h mje… agle hafte ki date h hearing ki… she said nonchalantly and keep on unpacking..

Shiva is losing patience at her nonchalance…he took quick steps towards her .. and jerked her around to face him

Shiva: janti h to wapas kyu ayi h… dekh already bht tamasha ho chuka h… tune jo sunana ta .. krna ta kr lia… maine jo khna ta… krna ta kr lia… ab tera mera koi rishta ni h… ye roz roz k drama se tang aa gya hu mai…or hm dono ki wjah se bhabhi ko stress ho ye mai bardasht ni krunga… doctor ne unko mna kia h …

dekh please tu chup chaap yha se chle ja… isse phle k mai kuch aisa kr du jo tuje or chot pahuchaye…tuje ab ye natak krne ki jarurat ni h…

Raavi snatched her hand back from his hold: tuje tension lene ki jarurat ni h … tere liye ni ayi hu… na hi tujse koi rishta nibhane ayi hu… Dhara di ko meri jarurat h to mai unke liye yha ayi hu… khud ko itna importance dena bnd kr…

Shiva: Dhara bhabhi k liye? kis rishte se ayi h tu yha? sare rishte tod kr gyi ti na to ab wapas kyu ayi h? dekh raavi pyaar se smja ra hu … mje gussa mt dila or chup chaap chle ja yha se .. maine phle b bola h tuje is ghr me rhne ni dunga mai ab…to tu abhi k abhi chle ja yha se warna..

Raavi: warna? warna kya? mje ghr se bahar nikalega? tujhse waise b or kya hi expect kia ja skta h… pr Mr Shiva Pandya… aap bhuliye mt… shaadi hui ti hmari… I am your legally wedded wife… divorce hua ni h abhi tk hmara.. or jb tk divorce ho ni jata .. tu mje yha se ni nikal skta.. tune hi kaha ta na.. ye divorce paper to formality h …india me itna asaan ni h rishta todna…

or teri biwi bnne se phle b mera is ghr se 1 rishta ta… dhara di ko bachpan se apni behen maana h or wo aj bht takleef me h … shayd meri wjah se b … tujse samjne ki umeed ni kr ri mai… nahi mje tujse kuch chaiye…hmare beech ka jhagda, gussa sb 1 taraf h … jo ki na mai bhooli hu … na bhoolungi.. pr ye sach b ni bdl skta k tere alawa b mere is ghr me kuch or rishte h… patni ka rishta bhle hi tootne ja ra ho pr tu mje dhara di ki care krne se ni rok skta…

Shiva was taken aback… what is wrong with her? she came back for Dhara bhabhi… he was secretly hoping that she will fight with him and may be fight for their relationship.. he was a little disappointed but relieved too that at least she is still not making his already difficult situation more difficult…shiva was not unaware of the happenings in the house… Dhara bhabhi was advised complete bed rest by doctors… Maa has opposed hiring a maid … Rishita doesn’t know household work and has expressed her desire to work …this was in best interest of Dhara bhabhi and quite noble of Raavi to keep aside their differences to help her out in this difficult situation…he was impressed by her again… she had already left an impact on his heart but seeing her selfless act … he is getting overwhelmed with guilt for the way he behaved with her… he doesn’t deserve her… he understands this… what should he do… should he drag her out forcefully and hurt her more… or should he let her stay for his own selfish reasons and get emotionally tortured seeing her helping his family everyday without expecting anything in return… he was in conflict…

as if reading his thoughts a little…

Raavi: kya soch ra h? yhi k meri shakal roz dekhni pdegi jo tuje pasnd ni… to tu fikr mt kr … mai koshish krungi tujse dur rhne ki… jitna ho ske utna km tere samne pdungi..infact tu bed pr so jana mai niche so jaungi…

Shiva: uski jarurat ni h… ye tera kamra h… mai waise b yha ni rhta ab…aangan me sota hu krish k sath or ab kisi ko kuch smjane ki jarurat b ni h k hme sath rhne ka natak krna pde..mje ni pta k tere dimag me kya chl ra h… pr teri wjah se bhabhi ko takleef ni honi chaiye… tu yha rhe na rhe mje koi fark ni pdta pr 1 baat kaan khol kr sun le… agr tuje aisa lg ra h k teri baato se mera tuje divorce dene ka faisla bdlega to aisa kbhi ni hoga or divorce k bad 1 pal mai tuje yha rhne ni dunga… smji?

Raavi was heartbroken hearing this but she can’t be weak in front of Shiva… she came here only to help Dhara … so she agreed by nodding her head …

with this Shiva stormed out unsure what will happen next..

Awsome ❤❤

Both parts are lovely 😍

Waiting for next part 🤗

Hey can anybody tell me how to link these parts together.. I have written few OS so far … this is my first time writing an SS… so trying to link but failed so far…

Originally posted by: nikkiGarg

Hey can anybody tell me how to link these parts together.. I have written few OS so far … this is my first time writing an SS… so trying to link but failed so far…

Even I don't have experience in this , sorry 😐. Mujhe bhi nhi ptaa

Great start! Read both parts together ❤️

Krish toh pitega ek din, sirf dhara ne bachaya usko aaj 😆

Looking forward to more, and how Raavi falls in love with Shiva!

Originally posted by: nikkiGarg

Hey can anybody tell me how to link these parts together.. I have written few OS so far … this is my first time writing an SS… so trying to link but failed so far…

What do you mean by link? You can create an index on the first page with the page numbers of each part