ShiVi OS: I am here for you!

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I Am Here For You

~An OS on ShiVi


"Aye Shiva jaldi kar na! Dahi handi shuru hone ke baad nahi pahuncha hai." Dev standing outside his room was sarcastically spoke. "Aur jaane se pehle yeh mor pankh mukut bhi toh bandwani hai Dhara Bhabhi se." Dev held the mukut high up in the air and spoke. Shiva was getting annoyed as he was not able to get a grip on his dhothi and on the other hand Dev was ordering him.


"Iss Dev ki toh na..." Shiva muttered to himself in anger. Since both had not come Dhara sent Krish up, to look for both of them "Yeh kya ho raha hai? Tch tch tch.." Krish shied away on seeing the scene.


Dev was helping Shiva in wearing the dhothi and had held in for his convenience. Krish started teasing them and Shiva who was already annoyed slapped Krish's head. "O tu kabhi chup nahi kar sakta na? Betuki baatein karna hi hai tujhe." Shiva scolded and Dev just giggled at the two.


Krish lowered his head making a puppy face. "Ab chal yeh seera pakad tu dhothi ka." saying so Dev handed him one side of the dhothi to catch hold of. The brothers were carefully watching the YouTube video and doing as per they said, but only to be unsuccessful.


Gaumbi came up to check upon his brothers as time was ticking and they were slow. He looked at the web they created with the dhothi and passed a chuckle "Kya kar rahe ho tum teeno?" he asked walking towards them. Gaumbi was still angry on Shiva but seeing his brothers struggle he could hardly remain the same way. Shiva didn't look up at him and kept his face lowered. Gaumbi too didn't say anything, rather got back to work of making Shiva wear the dhothi.


In a matter of few minutes they finished and went down to get the mor pankh mukut tied around Shiva's head. Suman and Rishita along with Dhara were waiting for them. "Aa gaye mere chaaron bete. Badi jaldi aa gaye na.." Suman sarcastically asked at which Rishita laughed and the boys just lowered their head in embarassment.


Suman looked at Rishita laughing and she couldn't digest it "Path raani tu kya khi-khi khi-khi karke hass rahi hai. Haan? Aaj kal jo koi bhi dekho hum pe hass raha hai." she scolded and Rishita kept quiet.


Dhara tied the mor pankh and Shiva took the blessings of both his mothers, Maa and Bhabhi maa. "Jeet ke aana. Uss Prafula ka munh band bhi karna hai tujhe." Suman said and Shiva nodded his head in positive.


At Ravi's home no one was there to help her get ready. Prafula as usual was talking bad about Pandya family to the neighbours and very confidently saying that her daughter would win. Anita was busy planning to know what is happening in Pandya Nivas. So Ravi got ready all by herself when she realised she did not get the mor pankh.


"Hai Bhagwan! Mor pankh toh main lana hi bhool gayi. Ek number ki dobi hai tu Ravi. Matki toh Kanha ji hi phodte hai na aur mor pankh ke bina kya karungi main?" She started complaining to herself when she heard a knock on the window


She opened it to find Krish out there taking the support of the pipeline "Bhabhi yeh dekhiye main aap ke liye mor pankh leke aaya hun. All the Best bolne ke liye. All the Best Bhabhi." he kept it on the window sill and jumped from there.


"Krish Sambhalke." Ravi uttered as he jumped off. Now Ravi had two options one was go without Mor Pankh and the other one was take the one which Krish gave. She thought about it and at last selected to go with the second option.


She immediately made a mukut for the morpankh and went to the competition venue. She wore a dhothi and a t-shirt just like Shiva as both Shiva and Ravi were the team leaders of the boys and girls team respectively.


To start the competition they got a nod from the trustee and the next moment all were dancing to the tune of the beats. The boys won the toss and Shiva decided to go first. Each team would get two chances to try, and if they couldn't they would lose the competition and even the bike.


The boys rejoiced at this and so did the Pandya family. Ravi got dejected but she had decided to win the competition. All the boys started dancing and gathering under the matki. Soon they formed a pyramid and Shiva was asked to climb. But when he did so one of the members lost their balance, because of which everyone fell down.


Ravi smiled while all the other girls booed them. There was still another round remaining and they again gathered under the matki. This time no one lost their balance while making the pyramid and Shiva could easily break the matki. Everyone rejoiced at this moment.


The next turn was of the girls. If they could break matki both the times they would be the winners. And if once then it would be a draw. The girls were determined to win the competition, especially Ravi.


The gathered under the matki and made a pyramid. Halfway through the process the girls lost balance and fell down. The next opportunity which they had was the last opportunity. "Ab kuch bhi ho jaaye yeh mauka main haath se jaane nahi dungi." Ravi muttered to herself, fully determined to win the competition.


All danced and gathered under the matki. Slowly they started forming a pyramid and retained their balance for long. Ravi also climbed to the top but before she could get a grip, one of the girls lost her balance. Ravi didn't want to let go of this opportunity hence without thinking she tightly held the rod from which the matki was hanging.


The girls fell down and Ravi was the only one hanging up. All got scared and started screaming. Prafula was shook as she looked at her daughter hang so high above the land. Prafula and Pandya Nivas were calling for help but no one tried to help them. They could make the pyramid again but no one did. Everyone started witnessing the drama.


Dev and Krish asked everyone to join in a pyramid so that they can save Ravi. But before they could form one, they saw Shiva hanging from teh side of teh building and moving towards Ravi. "Shiva tu pagal hai. Tu yahan kya kar raha hai?" Ravi screamt.


"Wahi jo tu kar rahi hai. Time pass." He stated in a loud voice. "Kya?" She asked confused.


"Aye gadhedi aise dekh mat. Tujhe kya laga yeh sirf kuch feet upar hai? Tu jaanti bhi hai tu kahan phasi hai?" Shiva asked angrily.


"Haan matki ke paas." Ravi answered cutely. Shiva looked at her angrily and disbelievingly. "Chal mujhe pakad yahan se nikalte hai." Shiva said.


He planned to take Ravi along with him by hanging, to the building from where this rod was attached. "Nahi!" Ravi answered seriously. "Aye gadhedi dimaag kya girvi rakhke aayi hai? Jaanti bhi hai kya ho sakta hai yahan?" Shiva screamt. Dhara and all were praying that their fight doesn't escalate much and they don't make a mockery of themselves.

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"Haan jaanti hun. Lekin main matki phode bina neeche nahi aaungi. Tu jana chahta hai toh chala ja." she said. Though she didn't mean the last statement and she did not want him to leave her and go, she still asked him to.


"Aye dobi main yahan jaane ke liye nahi latka hun. Tujhe bachane aaya hun. Samjhi." he said and this was a music to everyone's ears including Ravi's. She was so happy to see her Shiva back. The Shiva who cared for her, who scolded her about being careless, who fought with her on silly things, she got him back.


"Mujhe kaske pakad tu pehle." he ordered and Ravi did as she was told to. "Ab main tujhe naryal doonga, tu phir ek haath se naryal pakad aur phod de." Shiva slowly took the nariyal kept above the matki and kept it between them. They were so close that the naryal could be balanced between both of them. He again held the rod. His hands were paining terribly, it felt numb. But to make Ravi win, he could cross any limit. She slowly took it and looked at Shiva first. She saw he is in pain and hence she immediately tried to break the matki. After 3-4 hits she was successful.


Shiva didn't waste much time and took her to the 2 storey building side. On reaching there they didn't part away from the hug. They were still hugging each other.


"Shukriya Kanha ji meri dobi ko bachane ke liye." Shiva thanked the Lord silently.


Ravi nodded in denial as though she heard him "Shukriya Kanha ji Shiva ko meri zindagi mein bhejne ke liye." she said and looked up at him with a smile. He smiled even more and tightened his grip on her.

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Hope you liked this OS. Written for ShiVi as I can't see any development in their story in the show. But they are so cute together that I couldn't resist myself from writing about them..

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So good dear....

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That was really good.

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This was amazing! Shiva saving Raavi, and Raavi thanking god for bringing her in his life ❤️

Loved it!

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Thank you so much dear ❤️

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Thank you dear ❣️☺️

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Thank you dear ❤️❤️

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Thank you so much dear ❤️❤️

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Thank you so much ❤️

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Originally posted by: GrilledCheese

This was amazing! Raavi falling in love with Shiva was done beautifully

And the ending where he realizes it was her who gifted him ❤️

Loved it!

At some point of time both have to realise that they love each other. And I hope it happens during dahi handi itself 😌🤞🏼

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