Shivi OS Becoming us again (16+epilogue pg6) - Page 3

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: srix

That was so well done and so, so beautifully written!!

Thank you Sri, may I call you that? ❤

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: GrilledCheese

That was lovely! I had a great time reading it 👏

Loved Krish and Rishita teaming up in the end to bring ShiVi together! ❤️

Looking forward to the epilogue!

The forum's missed you!!! I saw that you'd mentioned being busy with work Aaliya di, may I call you that? .... Hope life is better now....

Thank you❤... Hopefully the epilogue will be up within a few days....

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Posted: 3 years ago
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I loveeed it Sathya!! And the best part was that you reunited them and didn't torture us like the makers are 😆


I actually liked Rishita here, thank you for making her mature enough to not only understand her wrongs but also the wrongs of the other members!


Will wait for an epilogue

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: blissfulcanyon

I loveeed it Sathya!! And the best part was that you reunited them and didn't torture us like the makers are 😆


I actually liked Rishita here, thank you for making her mature enough to not only understand her wrongs but also the wrongs of the other members!


Will wait for an epilogue

Hahaha🤣😂🤣, Shyna!!! I simply cannot stand sad endings unless they're written amazingly well.... Most of the time I refuse to read fics if I feel like they're going to have a sad ending, so that was a practical impossibility.

Thank you❤.... I did end up having to go over that Shiva-Rishita conversation multiple times until it felt somewhat right, so I'm super happy that everyone likes it!!!!! 😇

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: Pottermeow

Hahaha🤣😂🤣, Shyna!!! I simply cannot stand sad endings unless they're written amazingly well.... Most of the time I refuse to read fics if I feel like they're going to have a sad ending, so that was a practical impossibility.

Thank you❤.... I did end up having to go over that Shiva-Rishita conversation multiple times until it felt somewhat right, so I'm super happy that everyone likes it!!!!! 😇


@bold- same!! I totally get what you're saying. I'm even guilty of reading the end of books before the beginning just to make sure the ending isn't tragic 🤣


You should be happy! You did a good job ❤️

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Beautiful dear😍😍

I would love to see their conversation. Please show please

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: MeDHellsAngel

Beautiful dear😍😍

I would love to see their conversation. Please show please

Showing the conversation was sadly never a part of the plan.... But we'll see..... 😘😘.... Maybe, maybe not... But I certainly require inspiration at the moment to write anything on Shivi!!!!

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Originally posted by: Pottermeow

Showing the conversation was sadly never a part of the plan.... But we'll see..... 😘😘.... Maybe, maybe not... But I certainly require inspiration at the moment to write anything on Shivi!!!!

Oh okay okay❤️

Haha about inspiration toh I dont know what to say because I myself is one of the persons who need inspirations.

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Hey very beautifully written 🥳

Rishita character should get such a beautiful arc😊

I hated that apart from Dhara or Shiva all character are so loosely written in PS😳 I like Raavi the most but so less monologue sometimes make me lose my sanity...

The anxiety Shiva had for his Chipkali and sense of losing him give realization to Raavi that is so adorable😳

I loved it, you said at last you may write epilogue❤️

So I am waiting for it there isn't enough of Shivi for me

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: Khoobsurat123

Hey very beautifully written 🥳

Rishita character should get such a beautiful arc😊

I hated that apart from Dhara or Shiva all character are so loosely written in PS😳 I like Raavi the most but so less monologue sometimes make me lose my sanity...

The anxiety Shiva had for his Chipkali and sense of losing him give realization to Raavi that is so adorable😳

I loved it, you said at last you may write epilogue❤️

So I am waiting for it there isn't enough of Shivi for me

Hello Anupama🤗.... Yes, I am writing something for this, not sure when it will be up though... I kind of lost inspiration with the dragfest that was going on in between but hopefully it'll be done soon😭...

Yes, I feel like, Rishita if treated well, can be the member of the family willing to see all perspectives before deciding what is right for her... It falls in line with what the show has shown us so far as well...

As for Shivi, this is what I envisioned happening after the yaatra mahakaand, them realising their mistakes on their own but needing a trigger to take that first step towards each other.... The show has gone a different route, but still a nice one❤️....

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