When they knew (drabble series)(3rd pg13 27/4/22) - Page 5

This is so so adorable, Shiva lying down on Raavi's lap and just being happy 💘

Sathyaaa!!!!!

I was smiling ear to ear throughout , I couldn't put my phone down , got busy in rooting for shivii itna cuteeeeesssyyyy it was.

Sooo manyyy Awwwwwdorable moments

Shiva laughing khulke with raavi... All hearts❤️

Shiva laying his head on raavi's lap awwiieee

Raavi's fingers through his hair again awwieee

Shiva instructing krish to call raavi bhabhii

Shiva being suman dil ka tukda is always maintained but suman being fond of raavi is what gives pure bliss feeling😆

There was something soo serene with the whole scene that it had left me wanting for more🙈🙈

Oh how much I love krish here... Just like initial krish vibes... Always by shivi's side❤️...and always ready to blurt secrets🤣

Loved it soooo much❤️❤️

Absolutely loved both parts!!

Like you said, Suman-Raavi ka rishta would have been wonderful to see, like the initial days, but sigh.

Aur likhna please.

This is soo cute, Sathya ❤️
Loved seeing Suman find Shiva laughing so whole heartedly

Originally posted by: sillysatchel

This is so so adorable, Shiva lying down on Raavi's lap and just being happy 💘

Megs! Glad you loved it! ❤️

Unres kar diya gaya hai lekhak kripya dekh lein! 🤪

OOhhh Sathyaaa!! Im glad you're continuing this!! I had completely forgotten about it so it was lovely catching up on part 1 as well! And now to the Suman part! Ek toh I love the concept of chupte chupate pyaar karte huye ShiVi! Hoping we get that now the apparent "separation" is coming up! Him lying with his head on her lap and reprimanding Krish on not calling her Bhabhi was the highlight for me! I also loved how Suman just gave a look to Krish and bechara darr gaya hahaha! Keep em coming! I think next one should be when Kaka new? Or Kaanta kaki? What do you think?

THIS WAS SO PYAARA MERI JAAN ❤️❤️

IM LEFT CRAVING FOR MORE

Sathya, such a cute drabble! Pre- marriage Shiva and Raavi with Krish that too Shiva snd Raavi are in love❤️

Suman finds that Shiva’s happiness lies in him being with Raavi😍

Originally posted by: EuphoricDamsel.

MINEEEE!❤️

Sathu Ben Ka charm continues. ❤️

This was a particularly unique piece. With very less of the story, (it was one scene right//) and so much emotion in between.

This part had layers! Each layer consisting of a character quality.

From Raavi who was sitting there in absolute glee, unaware of the world with Shiva on her lap, to Shiva who radiated happiness like never before while his head was on his woman's lap.

From Krish present there to provide a link between both the parties and of course Suman to know her son through and through until his very core, positive enough to see, for once, that how much of his heart does Raavi owns and is the reason of his unwavering smile.

It was a beauty.

It was short though, mera mann nhi bhara. I wanted more of Shiva in Raavi's lap, ALONE. No Krish, no Suman, no, no-one.

But theek hai...seh lenge thoda. 🤡

Now you know what Imma gonna say next is all about the next one. My Mensies story.

I'm all here waiting like a hawk for it. Jldi likhna...

You know the weirdest part? I probably didn't put half the thought into this one that you did. Because I kind of figured out how I wanted Suman to find out, but it was a different scene. Where Krish says something insensitive without realising it to Raavi and then Shiva gets very protective with Raavi calming him down. And Suman catches all of this.

But then I started writing today and it kind of morphed into this super fluffy drabble. And for once, it was actually as short as drabbles are supposed to be, I think... 😆The next one, Periods wala? That's gonna have 2 scenes though, for sure. 😳

I'm glad you loved it so much, and I just wanted Suman to see how ALIVE Raavi made Shiva, you know? And I really, really, really wanted Krish to TRY to keep the secret once, even from his mother. Glad you loved it!

PS I think I've found a place to ghusaofy your alone time Shiva's head in Raavi's lap, I have. Buuuuuut, we stuck in Spy Kids 4 at the moment.