To fit in- A Shivi SS(Part 4 page 14)completed - Page 5

waiting for the longer update

introspection mode is on....on both the sides....some how realizing and analyzing who did what and why....beautifully written 👏 ❤ 👌

childhood scenes are so beautiful and provide insight of their relationship....how it has been....

the dread is at both ends ...of not being part o each other's lives anymore.....it breaks my heart

Short and sweet update Chikki❤️

Reading Shiva's feelings was so heart touching...It made me emotional...The childhood memories were so beautiful❤️

The hope that she will come back like she used to always....My Shiva❤️

And finally she is back...Waiting to see them talk it out in the next part❤️

Also thank you for sharing this idea with me....I loved it so much🤗

Beautiful updates👏

Read both parts

Shiva and Raavi's pain and longing was beautifully described👏

MY heart breaks everytime I read how ravi has been treated with no fault of hers but just because she was daughter of mami . Shiva hatred for mami is very right as no one can tolerate how cruelly mami has treated her. saying is true whatever it is, parents bears if their children go in wrong path n same goes with children too.Ravi has always tried to fit despite of how being treated n this time too she has decided to give a last try as she knows shiva won't ever give their relationship a chance.Now if she breaks their will be no going back.loved the update n more excited for next one.

Originally posted by: Pixiepadhi

Nooo chikkiii don't stop heree 😭😭😭

I am loving your story, the way you explain Shiva's emotions 👏👏👏

And the childhood flashbacks are the cherry on top. 😍

Zyada wait mat karana.ok? 🥺🥺

Updateee soonishhh ❣️❣️

Pixie I didn't want to stop here either but I am caught up in something. I will try my best to update soon.

So happy that you are loving this alongwith childhood flashbacks ❤️

Originally posted by: AlterEgo27

Wow, that was so good. I was completely immersed in the story. Please update soon👍🏼

Thank you so much . I will try my best to update soon🤗

Originally posted by: Pottermeow

Hello girl, loved the way you expressed both of their emotions, especially Shiva's....

Also, Chikki, may I call you that? I love your flashbacks!!!😚

Glad you loved it.

Of course you can dear..awww I am so happy that you loved those flashbacks. I was worried about that part 🤗

Originally posted by: Miyas_Scribbles

This is NOT a place to end the chapter 😭

Sorry dear 🤗🤗 I will try my best to update soon.

Originally posted by: maanmeet1

waiting for the longer update

introspection mode is on....on both the sides....some how realizing and analyzing who did what and why....beautifully written 👏 ❤ 👌

childhood scenes are so beautiful and provide insight of their relationship....how it has been....

the dread is at both ends ...of not being part o each other's lives anymore.....it breaks my heart

Thank you so much 😳Will try to update soon🤗

Originally posted by: ItsmePriya

Short and sweet update Chikki❤️

Reading Shiva's feelings was so heart touching...It made me emotional...The childhood memories were so beautiful❤️

The hope that she will come back like she used to always....My Shiva❤️

And finally she is back...Waiting to see them talk it out in the next part❤️

Also thank you for sharing this idea with me....I loved it so much🤗

❤️❤️ Thank you for helping me out with the idea and encouraging me each time.