Shiva os - aftermath of leaving the family

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Posted: 4 years ago
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I know nothing like this will happen but I wish it did anyways it’s a small idea which I would’ve loved if it did happen.

Shiva has left the family, he’s moved to another city. He works very hard starting from mopping in restaurants to learning basic maths so he could do the till work. He was being trained gradually and eventually worked full time in a restaurant. He was working very hard, he had a dream to prove everyone wrong. He was never wrong he was very misunderstood. People took his quietness as his weakness. He was an angry young man who had made many mistakes but he had realised all his wrongdoings but he was hurt no one ever tried contacting him after that incident. He’s big dream was opening up pandya stores globally and he had started working towards his goal.


A couple months later shiva has now become a little bit educated and had opened up his own business, he was the best selling online shopping business in the world. He named his business pandya store. The dream had come true not only was pandya store a global business but people could buy things from online now and there was a lot more variety with very good quality products. Shiva had become a serious, ambitious and a business focused man. He was chivalrous and very patient unlike his old self. He had changed but not for anyone but for himself.


One day on the news the pandya nivas see shiva on the tv promoting pandya store and they all get shocked and surprised that he’s made the dreams of their father come true without anyone’s help. Shiva was always ziddi and this time he had no one by his side. They all get very emotional and miss shiva but know there’s no way of contacting him now because they don’t even know where he is.


Raavis family also see the news and see shiva on tv and get surprised, prafulla thinks how did he become so popular and so rich. Raavi gets heart broken as she had realised time ago what she had lost but she would never get it back because she never understood him or never tried understanding him.


Shiva had moved in life but always carried a picture of the pandya family because they were his strength even though they weren’t physically there.




If someone would like to take this idea and make it a long series please do because I think this storyline would’ve had a lot of potential. Also if anyone wants to carry this on please do so, you can copy and paste whatever parts you need :)


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Posted: 4 years ago
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I loved your intro and concept of an online store, and towards the end, I really wanted to see where you would take the story next ❤️ Please continue if you can!

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Posted: 4 years ago
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This is really nice! ❤️

I loved seeing Shiva's journey of his self worth, self confidence and growth! I also loved the family realizing his value finally ❤️ ( who knows if/when that will happen in the show 🤪)

Do continue this if you can, I would love to read more!

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Loved the storyline.... awesome 😍😍😍

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Nice💕, like the concept.

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Beautiful concept👏

Continue it

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Posted: 4 years ago
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This is really a good concept. ❤️

Loved the way you portrayed Shiva's journey.

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