Shivi drabble- emptiness - Page 4

Originally posted by: barbieflora

"she even sneaked out at night to get some masala from the kitchen and spread it on her bedsheet.but that didn't help.this was not Shiva's essence."

These lines and her desperation..... split my heart into two😭

This was just sooo beautiful! Their restlessness on being apart and then the tranquility after they came together....it was so well written.❤️

Thank you dear❤️❤️

I wanted to bring out raavi's desparation here, because we all know how hurt shiva is going to be, and how badlyyy he will miss her.

Originally posted by: Swastika34

This is Soooooo Beaauuutiiifuuulll Pixie!! 🥰😍

Thank you partner ❤️

Originally posted by: MeDHellsAngel

Now I know that your drabbles are also complete pieces, thinking so i opened the drabble and was not at all disappointed

I just loved this one dear🤗

I mean the best❤️ uff show mein kab dikhega, kisi ek ko toh akal do🙆‍♀️

You wrote it beautifully❤️

Thank you so much ❤️

I hope we get to see something like this in the show too.

Originally posted by: nafees5

Priyanka meri janemam!

This one's just simply beautiful❤

Their emotions, the restlessness I could feel it while reading it.

Loved it❤️

Thank you so much ❤️

Originally posted by: mpks1

Pixie, simply beautiful!! Can we just have this in the show, the exact same sequence. This is the prefect way the track should end❤️

Thank you Prema ❤️

Hope we get something like this on the show.

Originally posted by: Mountains_Lakes

Omg, Pixie!!! This was amazing! Liked how both realized their own mistakes and took steps towards the other to be with each other!

I know it's a drabble, but please please please convert this into something more. Pretty please!

Thank you so much ❣️

Awwww

Such a beautiful piece 🥺😍

Do write more 💛

Originally posted by: Pixiepadhi

Thank you so much ❤️

I hope we get to see something like this in the show too.

I too hope❤️

Pixi..this is beautiful❤️

Hope to see something like this in the show

What an amazing work

Awww u write with lot of intensity dr

Beautiful

The emotions spilled created magic

I truly loved it