One year - A Shivi OS [Updated and Complete] - Page 2

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Posted: 4 years ago
#11

Loved it❤️and as you wrote, their relation needs time and iam happy that Raavi took that step🤗

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Posted: 4 years ago
#12

Beautiful ❤️❤️ loved it 😍

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Posted: 4 years ago
#13

oh my my jaan

this was such a beautiful story - a separation like this would be epic

she took her time to heal, to sort out her thoughts and he took his time to repent, to realize her worth and you portrayed that so seamlessly

I love how it was gradual and how they slowly grew into a love that is now formidable ❤️

the last scene was so cute I loved it

amazing amazing amazing 🤗

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Posted: 4 years ago
#14

This was sooo beautiful.

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Posted: 4 years ago
#15

Originally posted by: sunsaathiyaa

love this so much 🥺❤️

please teach me how to write :))


But you already write so beautifully!!!


Glad you liked it 😘

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Posted: 4 years ago
#16

Originally posted by: ValleyOfPeace

Slow and steadyyy

🖤🖤🖤🐢🐢🐢

Loved it Min


Mahi you do they intense ones.. I do the fluffy ones 😂😘😘

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: White-Lilac

Awww it was such a lovely OS

I love reading your stories... Keep writing🤗


Thank you.. Yes definitely will when inspiration strikes 😊😊

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: SlytherInMe.

oh my my jaan

this was such a beautiful story - a separation like this would be epic

she took her time to heal, to sort out her thoughts and he took his time to repent, to realize her worth and you portrayed that so seamlessly

I love how it was gradual and how they slowly grew into a love that is now formidable ❤️

the last scene was so cute I loved it

amazing amazing amazing 🤗


I feel they need it.. I hope they do have a long separation.. More ideas coming in my head 😂😂😉😘

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Min, just got a chance to read this OS. Oh my! What a beautiful OS! Separation and meeting after a year with full of love for each other. This us true love! Thank you for this creation!

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Posted: 4 years ago
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It's beautiful.

Loved the way you portrayed their gradual journey towards each other. ❤️

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