ShiVi OS: Always Been You - Page 3

Beautifully penned🤗 Loved it❤️

Originally posted by: barbieflora

This was beyond brilliant!!!👏

I could feel her pain and fear. She couldn't even bear the thought of losing her Shiva. 🥺

And Shiva taking care of her, both after the broken wedding and later, during the confession segment, that was just so pure! ❤️

Kudos!!!🤗👏❤️

Aw thank you sm 🤗 I'm super glad you enjoyed this piece!❤️ I wasn't sure if I'd be able to connect the audience with her pain (as I'm not very good at it), but I'm happy to see your positive feedback 😃

Originally posted by: ValleyOfPeace

I loved it!!!

Keep writing more such Storiess!!!🖤🖤🖤

Aww thank you! Coming from you, it means a lot to me. I'll be sure to keep writing ❤️

Originally posted by: GrilledCheese

This was brilliant and I loved it! You did perfect justice to Raavi's feelings after her broken marriage, and her journey of moving on with Shiva's help

I loved how Shiva supported her throughout, and helped her regain her strength and courage ❤️

Their confession and the last scene was adorable!

Glad you loved it!❤️

Originally posted by: Fah_huq

This slow gravitation towards each other without any worldly relationship gawking on them is ❤️

Loved it so much 👏

Ahh you put that into words so beautifully! I've always wondered how their story would have gone if the marriage never happened; I would have personally loved to see that as well!

Happy to hear you loved this piece!❤️

Originally posted by: SlytherInMe.

love love love this

only shiva can pull her out o her misery and only raavi can tame his anger ufff

I want moreeeeee

Thank you!❤️ I'm so glad you liked it!

Currently, I'm waiting on more from your FF's 😆 (I think I always forget to comment due to my silent reader habits 😲)

Originally posted by: Mountains_Lakes

It was beautiful!❤️

I loved the fact that Raavi was strong and Shiva and Raavi chose each other. Also, loved the fact that Shiva didn't care to be part of Dev's life because of how wrong he did with Raavi. Loved seeing their progression, realization z and confession! You should definitely write more!

Thank you for the review!❤️ And I definitely will 👍🏼

Originally posted by: funny_fubar

This was a beautiful story ❤️ You write so well.

"Dekho kareeb se" is one of my favorites, so it made reading this story that much more enjoyable 😆

Not sure if I asked you before- what can I call you?

Aw thank you sm for your kind words!

Funny story: that song is what inspired me to write this particular piece! Those lines I included in the OS actually make me all emosh 😆 and I kind of had an epiphany like "omg, Shivi!! What if I make Raavi suffer a tad bit more to help her realize her feelings?" 🤪

You can call me Shyna 😊 Do let me know what I can call you as well ❤️

Originally posted by: mpks1

I like this OS of yours because it gave us an alternate way for Shiva and Raavinto fall in love and then enter the matrimony. This would have happened if Dhara didn’t ask Shiva to marry Raavi when Dev left her at the altar, The progression., slow realization were beautifully written.

Thank you!❤️ I'm so glad to hear you liked it!

I sometimes truly wish Dhara had not interfered - I think their story would have unfolded beautifully as well! But I guess that's what FF's are for 😆

Originally posted by: blissfulcanyon

Aw thank you sm for your kind words!

Funny story: that song is what inspired me to write this particular piece! Those lines I included in the OS actually make me all emosh 😆 and I kind of had an epiphany like "omg, Shivi!! What if I make Raavi suffer a tad bit more to help her realize her feelings?" 🤪

You can call me Shyna 😊 Do let me know what I can call you as well ❤️

Hi Shyna! I am Sriya ❤️

The song was apt for what Raavi was feeling 😊