Pandya Store Written in Avi Style - Page 2

Originally posted by: Transference

This is really fantastic Avi! ❤️

I wish the PS universe writers hired you as a part of their writing team.❤️

Aww thank you 🤗

PS universe writers would fire me since I wouldn't be able to match the adbhutness of them during episode writing 🤣

Originally posted by: ValleyOfPeace

I eould love to read more of this Avi.

This is very beautiful

Aww thank you 🤗!! Maybe I will come back to this and make a character specific post for each character when I find the time

Originally posted by: Popzzzz

Sooo beautiful story❤️....something we wud love to see on screen esp Raavi's character growth (i really wish to see her like this)... Shiva's story was beautiful as well as heart touching....and ur Dev-Rishita story made me like them alot....LOVED IT !🤗

Aww thanks!! 🤗 If I made you love DevTa, then I must've done something right 😆 Wish CVs were this creative when delivering the DevTa storyline...

Originally posted by: Shivi_forever

Beautiful take on Pandya Store's stories👏

If you have been the writer of the show, it would turn into a beautiful story 💓

Your take on Shivi, Gaura ,Devta and Suman Dhara was so perfect

It has the flavour of the show with more depth and some different scenarios🤗

Waiting for your take on the villians of the show

Aww thank you so much 🤗

Hope you like the villains edition as well!

Originally posted by: ItsmePriya

Avi, this is really beautiful❤️

We all want you to be the writer of the show...I guess we need to trend this on TT. You have penned this down so beautifully keeping the core essence of the show intact❤️ How I wish we get atleast 1% of this onscreen

My favorite parts were Suman- Dhara, entire Devta storyline and yes Raavi's character growth❤️

Waiting for your take on Maagin, Jaanu and Motiben

This post is gold....you are an amazing writer🤗

Aww thank you 🤗!! I'm so glad you liked the storylines! I hope you enjoy the villain versions as well!

Avi.. I am crying now😭😭😭 this is so good. They could have shown so beautiful tracks and we see what?😒

I loved the spin you gave to Prafulla- she isn't plain evil for the sake of it. It was relatable and it was good. I can accept that character arc.

Rishita arc - her relation with each character was explored- Dhara, Raavi, Dev everyone. Here Rishita keeps screaming and Raavi is a prop

Anita should have been kept like pre haveli days. She was shown regretful. What is the need for third angle? It doesn't generate trps either

Originally posted by: funny_fubar

This was amazing, Avi. You should ignore your sister 😆 You write beautifully.

I loved the Suman-Dhara take. I also wish Dhara could develop a bond with Suman, where she can openly share her wishes- right now, Suman is on a pedestal for Dhara, any grievances Dhara has, she needs to vent out to Gaumbi. She has no female support or sounding board. She doesn't share her pain or fears with the kids too, amd Anita seemed to be her only friend, we know how that relation is 😒

I really really loved your ideas for DevTa- they definitely can explore their past and help us understand why Dev chose Rishitha. I believe Rishitha represented a freedom from the burden of being the star kid of the family. It would also have be nice to see a non-cribbing, fun Rishitha.

And finally ShiVi. The cheating scandal is such a nice idea. Shiva taking money for the family also makes perfect sense. Also, Raavi's journey of discovering Shiva. This is what I miss from the OG. Mullai probably grew up watching Kathir, but she truly had no idea who he was, and had to get to know him bit by bit. The makers here wanted to set up a scenario where Shiva and Raavi's world revolved around each other- so it is not a major undertaking to get to know each other. I wish here they did set up a Dev-ShiVi conflict, like Piu mentioned.

That apart, I loved that all the women are working in your PS land, and they learn off each other- Dhara about independence, Rishitha about adjusting her needs, and Raavi about having some direction and looking beyond the surface.

Sorry, I went into a rant 🙈

Aww thank you!! 🤗

My sister and I have this hate-hate relationship where our main goal is to annoy each other. She tells me my writing is bad because I don't give her enough fluffy, romantic scenes 😆

Agreed! Dhara and Suman's relationship needs to change. Dhara can't claim her bhabi-maa status as long as she is afraid/putting Suman on a pedestal. Dhara needs a womanly support figure in her life, which could be Suman, along with a friend who is close to her in age (Anita)!

As for DevTa... I keep thinking back to Esha's requests of seeing all the Pandya women going out to have a night of fun, and if there's any character that would have fun like this, it's Rishita! I would love to see a side of her that's not obsessed over Dev or crying about not having the newest things at home. I want to see her having fun while showing the other Pandya women on how they could have fun!

Also, thank you for your words on the cheating scandal. Didn't know how people would take that type of track, but I'm glad it makes logical sense!

Originally posted by: Scarysea

Avi.. I am crying now😭😭😭 this is so good. They could have shown so beautiful tracks and we see what?😒

I loved the spin you gave to Prafulla- she isn't plain evil for the sake of it. It was relatable and it was good. I can accept that character arc.

Rishita arc - her relation with each character was explored- Dhara, Raavi, Dev everyone. Here Rishita keeps screaming and Raavi is a prop

Anita should have been kept like pre haveli days. She was shown regretful. What is the need for third angle? It doesn't generate trps either

Aww! I'm glad you loved the villain's edition too 🤗. I wish Prafulla and Anita weren't evil for the sake of being evil. Their scenes are becoming too much for me 🤢

And I won't even comment on Rishita or Raavi as the CVs royally ruined their characters for now!

Originally posted by: milkcakejamun

Aww! I'm glad you loved the villain's edition too 🤗. I wish Prafulla and Anita weren't evil for the sake of being evil. Their scenes are becoming too much for me 🤢

And I won't even comment on Rishita or Raavi as the CVs royally ruined their characters for now!

Raavi and Rishita are so different in our imagination that it is hard to watch them in the show. What have they turned them into?😒

I would have taken a track on the dynamics between the two and how it changes than what we are seeing 🤓

Originally posted by: milkcakejamun

Aww thanks!! 🤗 If I made you love DevTa, then I must've done something right 😆 Wish CVs were this creative when delivering the DevTa storyline...

Yes yes😛...you really have awesome ideas...And as many have said, i wud also love to read ur take on the villains...esp maami...someone who could take care and love two girls who are not hers like this, then there shud be def a take on her story.

Waiting for more stories from you