ShiVi SS- Woes Part 5 page 33 - Page 25

Mahii🤗 Finally started reading this. Just finished the first part and Wow. What a rollercoaster of emotion this was?!

The journey of seeing slowly falling in love with Raavi as he treasured their Momentos was ❤️. My heart truly went out to Shiva the way his heart was shattered into tiny pieces. So glad that he didn't defend himself, but gave her just the right amount of information for her to realize that she may have made mistake with her callouse accusations. Wish she'd given him a chance to explain his side if the story instead of assuming, coming to conclusions, and giving both of them the death sentence.

It was just beautiful! Off to read next part.

P.s. May I make a request for your future store is to have an index in the first page?! Please.

Part 2

Dobi, Dobi, Dobi, Dobi, Dobi! Argh. Ek number ki gadhedi. Why did Raavi have to say those hurtful words.

Loved her realization of what she meant in Shiva's life. Shiva ke rag rag main bus Raavi hi thi. Aur uski Khushiyan. And Shiva ka accident?! Yeh Kya ho gaya. Sachme memory loss toh nahi hai na?!

Part 3

Shiva's in coma?! Yeh expect nahi kiya tha. Hopefully, he'll wake up soon. Finally, I felt for Raavi here. After the first teo parts, I was angry and upset, but this time, I truly felt for her. Shiva is her duniya. Loved how she'd narrate the days happenings to him and would bring back old childhood memories.❤️ And they were playing Ghar Ghar where the roles were reversed ❤️. Loved that bit of detail.

Uff, Gaumbi's wish for Raavi to move on. It's heartbreaking. I know he means we'll, but if Dhara was in Shiva's shoes, would he have moved on?! Likely no. So glad that Raavi clarified her stance andthe prospect of Raavi losing herself is what caused him to move at the end. Running to read the next part!

Part 4

Rishita and Dev. Why do I have a feeling that Rishita said what she did because bshe meant well for Raavi and wanted her to move on. They all in their own ways wanted her to move on, but she stood strong. Liking this strong Raavi. So can I say that finally the happy phase is beginning?! Shiva woke up!❤️

❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️

What a beautiful ending to a beautiful story! Sorry for not being able to support you while you were writing this, but my fickle heart just wouldn't have been able to handle the angst as I would have had to wait for the next part.

Loved having glimpse into these past 8 months from Shiva's perspective. He was very much up to date with the happenings due to his wife. Loved their ritual of tying Mangalsutra and filling her maang with sindoor on a daily basis. And touchy, feely, with date nights twice a week?! Wow.

Mahi, you have written some of the best Shiva's. I love love love Shiva in Mine and this one comes close second! Thanks for this lovely story ❤️.

What an ending maahi ❤️

Shiva's side of the story 🥺🥺🥺

Raavi's penance and patience paid off and how❣️

The way you write the emotions, ab kya kahu.your stories make me believe in love.

Shiva patiently waiting for her as she got ready.🥺

Merging her into himself, if that was even possible.😍

He makes her wear the marital signs daily ❣️

Eagerly waiting for your next masterpiece ❣️

Okay I've been looking for this one story. And I think it was yours.

Where Raavi and Shiva mellow down a bit, raavi gets fever and shiva panics, in the same one shot, Shiva gets beaten up by goons, and raavi confesses her love for him

If it wasn't your story, could you tell me who's it was?

Mahhhii❤️

Finally I read this chapter!!! Sorry for the late comment...❤️

Woes is one the best stories I have read here. You are an amazing writer Mahhiii!!! I travelled with you in this emotional roller coaster. The last chapter was the perfect ending to this beautiful master piece❤️

Shiva's feelings, his desperation to wake up from coma, the realisation that this is the Raavi he wants in life...Wow wow wow...It was beautiful❤️ I could feel as I read the story...It touched my heart!!

The scenes after he woke up were so soothing and happy happy...Finally they are together..the power of love won❤️

Thanks for giving us this beautiful story🤗

Hi Maahi,

Thank you so much for this soulful story. The way you portray Shiva and Raavi and them together is exactly how imagine them. I have full faith that Shiva and Raavi's love story when it will start will be epic. They are inherently so passionate, so extreme and so giving. They are so similar in their emotions and yet so different in the way they are. One who is so beautiful inside and out, so soft, innocent, lush and full of love. While the other is so hard, rough, matured, clever, wordly, just fire 🔥 all over.

Maahi, you potray this opposites so beautifully. I just hope that we get an epilogue like you gave one for Queen and her pawns. I just wish you give this one an epilogue as well.

Like always waiting for your next story.

Maahiiii🤗 This is one of the best stories I have ever read❤️ You made me feel every emotion of Raavi and Shiva and I love this Shiva☺️And the love you portrayed here is soooo beautiful....All consuming....Raavi going breathless without Shiva...Shiva's love....The waiting...The angst...I loved everything❤.... Write more Maahi....about such love🙈

And now le me* In an AU world of mine with a faceless man feeling the love you portrayed (silly me😆...but still wishing for that)....Your story made my expectations on love even more high Maahi(ab kya hoga mera) Iam a sucker for such love😳

Dont mind my senseless ranting.... And for now Iam in love with your stories😉