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Posted: 4 years ago

Beautiful ending to a beautiful story ❤️

This was a fantastic journey. You have written it beautifully Maahi. ❤️

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Posted: 4 years ago

this so soothing and felt so peaceful while reading even felt emotional at some points. you have written it so beautifully.


update this story on wattpad too please❤️

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Posted: 4 years ago

this was such a beautiful ending Maahi! I loved it a lot ❤️

The journey of Shiva's feelings all these months was beautiful to read.. and of course their moments after he woke up were gorgeous ❤️

I loved this story through and through!

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Posted: 4 years ago

And here we come to the end of another masterpiece 🥺❤️.

Finally these two got what they were waiting for since ages !

And what do I say about the way you write. It is as if no words of appreciation can do justice to your skills 🌺

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Posted: 4 years ago

That was a beautiful end to a beautiful story

It had captured me right from the first part

His words reminded me of my dad. He was in a similar condition, the difference being that he was conscious at times. I remember just spending almost all the time there except when I slept at home. Never losing hope but breaking down when he did

So Shiva's words here felt so painful. Also, probably why I kept thinking about the nurse and the setup at home 😵


I read him about being terrified, and that was the first time I realised how scared he must have been at the time. Heartbroken, just darkness, pain and hopelessness 🥺


Him bouncing back with the toy lizard

Rishita and Shiva, I just love them so much. They'd be such an awesome team

Krish part was cute 😆 Naughty bachcha

I love your writing

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Posted: 4 years ago

That was beautiful!❤️

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Posted: 4 years ago

Beautiful ending to a beautiful story 💓💞

No words to describe it👏

Shiva's emotions during the coma state was beautifully described❤️💞❤️

Shivi's relationship after that was so beautiful❤️

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Posted: 4 years ago

You know you have such a beautiful way of expressing emotions ❤️

Loved it!

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Posted: 4 years ago

So soothing and beautiful and do write epilogue plz

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Posted: 4 years ago

the first thing I read today..

you know how much I love this story..

I just loved the update so much that I'm short of words.

i just knew that if this is going to be the last part, it will be from Shiva's point of view.

shuruuaat pe usii se ki thi aur khatam b.. khoobsurat.❤️

loved every bit of this.

This one is gonna be close to my heart.❤️


thank you maahi for this beautiful story!

intezaar rahega apki nayi kahani ka❤️

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