Shivi FF : entangled relations part 11 updated on pg 26 - Page 12

Originally posted by: funny_fubar

Lovely update… Shiva is Chattan Pandya through and through ❤️

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Originally posted by: Scribbled_tales

lovely update.

gradually both shiva and raavi are coming close understanding each other. love it❤️

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Originally posted by: lourel24

Loved it

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Originally posted by: Shivi_forever

Amazing update👏

Shivi are getting closer , their progress is beautiful ❤️💗

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Originally posted by: Mountains_Lakes

I'm loving how this story is headed. When I read the initial parts, I was like maybe Shiva will marry Raavi for reputation sake, but this is so much better. He's taking care of her (though he may claim that as a sympathy, but we all know it's not) and both will be together because they want to. Can't wait for the love to blossoms more. Hope Dev won't be thorn anymore in their life being jealous of Shiva.

Thank you ❤️

I wanted to write a story where they naturally fall in love and not due to forced bond of marriage. 🤗🤗

Originally posted by: Sakmen

Another beautiful update ❤

Loving their progress.. shive realising his true feelings for her beyond the care, at tge back of his head is❤️

Update soon

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Originally posted by: Khoobsurat123

Beautifully written

Waiting for the next update

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Originally posted by: ItsmePriya

amazing concept...I have been following your story since start...

Finally today i got to comment on this beautiful work

Dev is spineless cheapo here....🤢

This is such a beautiful update. You have expressed their feelings so purely....shiva and raavi have so much care for each other....they are perfect for each other❤️

Such an amazing story...looking forward to next part....loved all the parts...

sorry for the late comment

do update soon🤗

Thank you so much for your encouraging words ❤️

I wanted to write something where Dev is the villian 😈.

Will update soon 🤗

Part-7

" Shiva" raavi came shouting in her usual chirpy voice into the store.

She was not afraid to come out anymore.she went for morning walks with Anita di, went to temple with maasi.she had learnt to smile again.her family was happy to see her happy, but they were apprehensive on how long this happiness would last.She did make a store visit everyday for some or the other reason.she had started annoying shiva again and this time he didn't push or pull her around, nor did he hold her hand tightly like before.all he could do was just glare and raavi was enjoying this new found upper hand in their relation.

Shiva rolled her eyes upon hearing her voice. It's not that he didn't like her coming to the store, but she always distracted and annoyed him and he ended up doing a mistake.

" Kya Kar Raha hai? " She asked while picking up a chocolate and eating it.

" Cricket khel Raha hu, gadhedi " shiva replied.

Raavi giggled at him and pinched his cheeks.

" Tu na gusse Mai bahut cutee Lagta hai " she said.

Some chocolate smeared in shivas face. She took her dupatta and wiped it from his face . Shiva was lost looking at her.

" Ghoor kya Raha hai? Khayega kya? " She asked

Shiva flustered at her comment.

" Kya? " He asked

" Chocolate . Khayega? " She asked again bringing the chocolate near his mouth.

" Nahii...mujhe nahi khaana , aur Tu yeh Roz Roz Dukaan par aake mujhe pareshan mat Kiya Kar" he said looking away.

"Mai? Mai Kaha tujhe pareshan karti Hu shiva? Mai to Teri madad Karne ati Hu ." She said pouting.

" Madad? Kya madad Karti hai Tu? Jab dekho baithke chocolate, chips, biscuits thusti rehti hai . Woh bhi Bina paise diye." He said

Raavi opened her mouth in shock.

" Tu mujhse paise lega? " She asked looking at him with her big big eyes.

"Aur nahi to? Adha Saman to Tu hi kha jaati hai, tabhi Mai kahu ki iss mahine store Ka munafa itna Kam kyu hua hai." Shiva said irritating her further.

She kept the chocolate on the counter and crossed her hands across the chest.

" Mai kya karu? Pregnancy ki wajah se mujhe bahut bhook lagti hai.Aur waise bhi yeh baccha pandya parivaar Ka hi to...." She stopped as she realised what she was about to say.

Shiva stiffened at her words.he was still not comfortable associating her or the baby with dev.he clenched his fists in an attempt to control his anger.

Raavi misunderstood his expressions and thought he was angry at her.

She kept a 50 rs note on the counter and was about to leave. Shiva saw the money and cursed himself for hurting her.

He held her hand and gently pulled her to him.

" AE mamikibehenkibeti... Bachpan se Kisi cheez ke liye paise diye hai tune Jo ab de rahi hai? Mai to Teri taang kheech Raha tha aur Tu itni si baat par Ganga Jamuna bahane Lagi " shiva said wiping the drop of tera that fell from her eyes.

" Yeh galat hai Raavi " he complained

She looked at him with confusing in her eyes.

" Tu apni pregnancy Ka bahut faida utha rahi hai.mujhe itna pareshan karti hai, aur Mai tujhe Kuch keh bhi nahi Sakta. Ek baar yeh baccha paida ho Jaye phir chun chun ke badla Lunga " he said as he held her cheeks and lowered his head to meet hers closing his eyes.

Raavi chuckled hearing him, also closing her eyes feeling him close to her. They stayed like that for sometime when a customer coming made them separate hastily.

Raavi ran away from the store feeling shy. Shiva took a deep breathe trying to focus on his work.this chipkali will be the death of him.

PS- sorry guys ,.I updated a half written part by mistake😭😭.

I will update another part by tomorrow 🥺

Plz bear with me 🤗

res 🤣

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ahhh, I am so so sorry - I missed so many updates but I made it my goal to stalk this thread and reserve first right after you post the next chapter and to give comments on each part I missed, so here goes:

Part 4:

I am so so glad that Shiva decided to call Dev out

dev is so freaking disgusting and cheap, how dare he say all that bullshit about raavi? 😳

sahi punch maara shiva ne, wish he had gotten more of an opportunity to hit even harder!

can't believe gaumbi took the decision of getting dev and raavi married 🤢 she would never agree after the humiliation she faced

shiva and raavi's conversation was so freaking cute, he'll always be with her awwww 😭

thank god raavi stopped the engagement, dev is so ughhhh - shiva the wonderful man that he is stepped in front of raavi

I really wanted raavi to tell everyone about the abortion and she did, woohoo!! her mauspa is a gem

Part 5:

Dev is out of story for now woohoo thank god, what an irritating man

raavi is so cute when she's angry awww and shiva is so cute when he's so confused 😆

he made gol gappe for her 😭 SIMP

bechara shiva doens't understand pregnancy symptoms 🤣

it's so cute that he brought so many different things for her and was so understanding ☺️

anita didn't warn her about dev and now is doing overacting with shiva shut up

sach mein shiva toh gaya ab 🤣🤣 he's reading about pregnancy awwww

Part 6:

ShiVi have gotten so used to each other, hayyeee

he helped her while she was vomiting wow 😭

their interactions are so cute and a little funny too, especially her excitement about going on the bike 😆

shiva being careful on his bike 😭 banda has completely changed

the father is SHIVA PANDYA WOOOHOOOOOO 🥳 love this!!

Part 7:

ahhhh I just love it when raavi annoys the frick out of shiva 🤣🤣 it's so in tune with their actual characters!

that tender moment between them was so heartwarming 😭 and shiva not liking her associating with dev was ufffff

I'm sure shiva is going to take revenge by having THEIR child on his side 😆

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whoosh, finally caught up and I'm so glad I did

I have no idea why but this is one of my fav stories and I really like how the story is progressing

I'm so greedy for updates, please ek aur chotu sa dedo 😆

amazing updates jaan 🤗