ShiVi OS: Putting the Pieces Together - Page 6

Originally posted by: SlytherInMe.

haye this was so beautiful

you covered everything that needed to be covered in such an eloquent way, I loved it so much

cheesu this is why you should write more often 🤗 you're amazing

Awww.. thank you so much Ashu! ❤️🤗

Originally posted by: DesiiiiGirllll

This is so beautiful ❤️

Thank you! ❤️

Originally posted by: Scribbled_tales

Beautiful❤️

Thank you!

Originally posted by: nafees5

Maaar dala

Beautiful OS❤️

thank you! ❤️

Originally posted by: RainbowChaser

This was such a delight to read! All the empty spaces which had so much potential to be built upon have been penned perfectly ❤️

thank you so much! ❤️

Originally posted by: chandiniebinda

Wow this was soooo goood...

I really hope you will continue this..

Loveed there conversation... Raavi was sooo sweet and Shiva was really understanding her point...

I hope you will continue this one. And then we can see how Raavi will take a stand for Shiva and fight for him.. and the same way around...

Thank you for this story.

Thank you so much! I'm glad you loved it❤️

I will continue once I get some ideas 😆

Originally posted by: MeeraWrites

Thank you so much for writing this OS. 🤗

It's such a relief. This OS literally put the shreds of my ShiVi-yearning heart together.

You've penned down this OS beautifully. ❤️

We all are yearning to see such a curve in Shivi relationship.

I really loved the way Raavi opened up to him and made him understand her concerns.

The dialogues..... by God.... those were so natural and eloquent.❤️ I was reading them out. Felt really good.

You're amazing at writing. 👏

I was yearing to read something on Shivi after the heavy-loaded episodes and this OS was soothing like a balm.

I wish CVs yeh dekhe aur kuch toh inspire ho jaaye... This is what the fandom need...

P.S - Do bless us with more amazing ShiVi contents like this. 🤗

Thank you so much for this lovely comment! I'm glad you loved this one

I hope we get some beautiful ShiVi scenes on screen too soon ❤️

Originally posted by: hedwig_potter

Wow!!!!! Its so nice😳👏👏

I loved it❤️🤗

Thank you! ❤️

Originally posted by: mpks1

Aaliya🤗 this is the first thing I read in the forum this morning. First of all, you write so well! Secondly, you have written a very beautiful conversation between Shiva and Raavi. This is the kind of conversation I would like to see more in the show. I have always felt that there should be a conversation between them about the marriage that happened quickly and their thoughts during that time. Your OS definitely portrayed Raavi’s thoughts post marriage especially after she is starting accept the marriage and ready to lead a life with Shiva

Please do write more. I am sure the writers of this show are not creative😆 you know how I feel about them, so I can only rely on fans like you to write what we want to see😃

Thank you so much, Prema! 🤗I would love to see some meaningful conversations between ShiVi too, and I'm still hoping we get them once the writers find the time to look away from DevTa and Dhara 😕

I will continue this once I get some ideas

Like all of us, I want to see ShiVi give it back nicely to Rishita and Dhara 😈

Originally posted by: Miss_SR

This really brought a huge smile on my face! Can they please have a beautiful discussion like this on the show too? They talked about everything, even had the much needed manhandling apology.

Thank you for this ❤❤❤.

Thank you so much! ❤️

I hope we get meaningful conversations between ShiVi in the show too...