ShiVi FS~ Hungama [part 10, page 48, 29/5/2021][completed] - Page 17

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: MeeraWrites

This is hilarious.

Kitna bada raita phail rakha hai in logon ne. 🤣


Update the next chapter soon.

Thank you😆😆

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: Foxii

Raavi is jealous of Krishnaa hahahah

OMG Krish... Suhagraat mana ke maarega ke pehle

This is Hilarious

Do update super soon, can’t wait

Thank ya🤗

Soonish❤️

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Posted: 4 years ago

Gosh ....this story is a roller coaster ride I am willing to take.....loving it so far 🧡🧡🧡❤❤❤

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: Pavani.Minhas

Gosh ....this story is a roller coaster ride I am willing to take.....loving it so far 🧡🧡🧡❤❤❤

thanks a lot 🤗🤗

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Posted: 4 years ago

Part 4


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Shiva uth jaldi.

Shiva blinked his eyes confused about why he's hearing his Bhabhi's voice. As far as he remembered he just slept and it's already morning?? He looked ahead and saw his Dhara bhabhi looking at him all tensed. Honestly!! He's too sleepy right now.

Kya hua hai bhabhi?? Itni jaldi subah ho gayi kya?

He asked and sighed as he felt too tired. Why did it feel like he didn't sleep as much as he's used to??

Agar tu abhi nahi utha na, toh zindagi bhar subah nahi ho payegi teri life ki.

Shiva frowned at what his Bhabhi just said. What is his bhabhi even talking about?? He looked at his phone and his eyes widened as he saw the time. It's just 2 am now, that's why he feel so tired.

Bhabhi, raat ke 2 baje kaun si subah kara rahe ho aap?

Shiva asked and looked at her confused as she put a phone on his lap. What the hell is going on?? He looked around and saw Gaumbi standing with a tensed face.

Ye le baat kar, maami ka phone hai.

Shiva looked at his bhabhi unable to believe what he just heard. Maami called here at this time?? That too to talk with him??

Kya yaar dhara bhabhi, aap mujhe 2 baje neend se utha rahe ho, vo bhi maami se baat karne ke liye?

Shiva asked feeling totally frustrated and out of his wits. He's not even in the mood to talk to anyone, let alone that evil crow.

Shiva baat kar le.

Shiva sighed as he heard Gaumbi's worried voice. Looks like there's really some problem. He took the phone and gritted his teeth annoyed.

Kya hai? Tu khud ulluo ki tarah jaagi hui hai to yaha meri neend kharab karne ke liye phone kyu kar rahi hai?

Shiva snapped at the phone but heard nothing from the other side for a minute. He rolled his eyes feeling really irritated.

Shiva!!

Shiva raised his eyes as he heard his Mami taking his names while crying. Now what happened to her?? And why the hell did she call him?

Ab kaun mar gaya tera? Ro kyu rahi hai?

He asked closing his eyes as he feels really sleepy. He hates it when someone disturbs his sleep.

Raavi.

Shiva opened his eyes startled and sat up on the cot. He blinked his eyes and took a deep breath. What did that idiot do now?

Kya hua usey?

Shiva asked slightly tensed and heard some shuffling from the other side. Why is his Maami crying?? That too for Raavi?? Is she even okay?

Shiva!! Main Anita, Raavi dopahar me tumhare store ka kehke gayi thi, tabse wapas nahi aayi.

Shiva's eyes widened in shock at what she just said. Dev said that he dropped Raavi at Maami's home, then how could it be possible that she didn't reach her home?

Kya!! Par dev khud usey tumhare ghar drop karke gaya tha.

Shiva told her totally confused about what's going on. How could someone go missing from their own house?

Par wo to ghar aayi hi nahi.

Shiva took a deep breath and looked towards Dev's cot only to see him sleeping soundly.

Dev!!

Shiva shouted and saw him turning around but that idiot didn't even open his eyes. Shiva took his pillow and threw it on Dev's face.

Abey uth!!

Shiva shouted as soon as Dev opened his eyes baffled.

Raavi kidhar hai?

Shiva asked from him irritated and saw Dev looking at him wide eyes.

Abey dimag to theek hai tera?? Raat ke 2 baje tu mujhse puch raha hai ki teri manghetar kidhar hai?

Shiva rolled his eyes at Dev's words. How much idiotic could this person behave??

Tu hi gaya tha na usey drop karne?

Shiva asked glaring at Dev and saw him sitting on his cot all confused as he saw both Gaumbi and Dhara bhabhi standing in front of them tensed.

Haan to uske ghar ke aage utaar ke aaya tha usey. Ghar ke andar bhi gayi thi wo.

Shiva sighed realizing that probably that Chipkali had sneaked out of her house again. She pulled that stunt often when they were children.

Tu uth fatafat, aur ye Anita di se baat kar.

He threw Bhabhi's phone at Dev and got down from his cot. This idiot Chipkali has literally managed to deprive him of his sleep.

Krish tu Raavi ko call kar. Main taiyaar hota hu tab tak.

Shiva said to Krish as he saw him sitting on his cot and looking at everyone tensed. Shiva washed his face at the well and grabbed his vest.

Tu kaha ja raha hai.

Shiva looked at Dev as soon as he asked that.

Uss pagal ko dhundne.

Shiva said as he wore his shirt and saw Dev jumping down from his cot.

Main bhi aa raha hu ready hoke. Pehle maami ke ghar chalte hain.

Shiva sighed and nodded at Dev. He doesn't even like to see that Maami's face, but right now that Chipkali's security is more important.

Mujhe bhi leke chalo, aaj main wahi ruk jaungi. Wo log bohot tensed hain.

Shiva nodded at his Bhabhi and almost ran out of the house with Dev and Dhara bhabhi. He's going to kill that Chudail today.

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Dev looked ahead tensed as everyone keeps on crying since they reached Maami's house.

Meri bacchi, dhara. Kaha hogi iss waqt? Kahi kuch ho na gaya ho usey.

Dev shook his head at Maami's words. Why does she has to talk like this?? Everyone here in Somnath knows Raavi and he's sure if anything had happened they would have informed either here or Pandya House.

Ye manhooso wali juban se na tu bas manhooso wali bakwaas hi kiya kar.

Dev smiled slightly as he heard Shiva's frustrated voice. He looked at Shiva only to see him moving around agitated.

Store me kuch hua tha kya?

Dhara bhabhi asked and Dev stiffened as he saw Shiva shaking his head in a no. Now he remembers what had happened at the store. Raavi was upset when she got to know about Shiva's non existent fiancee. He had to tell this to Shiva.

Shiva!!

He called Shiva and indicated him to come out of the house. He came out of the house and looked ahead tensed. He never thought that Raavi would behave like this.

Jaldi bol kya hua?

Dev turned around hearing Shiva's voice and took a deep breath tensed. He knows Shiva is going to be angry.

Yaar wo Raavi bohot gusse me bhi thi aur upset bhi thi.

Dev told him softly and saw Shiva giving him a confused look.

Kyu??

Dev sighed and Shiva almost glared at him.

Wo teri shaadi wali baat sunkar.

He said and Shiva looked at him almost panicked.

Aur tu ye ab bata raha hai?

Dev shrugged unable to think how to react. Raavi's behaviour has always been unpredictable but now she's behaving like a lunatic. She clearly entered her house and then ran off to god knows where as soon as he went away?

Mujhe kya pata tha wo aisa kuch karegi.

Dev said looking at Shiva tensed. If he even had a slight idea about what she'll do, he would have dropped her to her room rather than leaving here at the door.

Tu jaanta nahi hai kya uss gadhedi ko? Sankiyo wale kaam karna uski hobby hai.

Dev sighed as Shiva snapped at him. All of a sudden Shiva looked as if he remembered something and he stormed towards his bike while Dev looked at him baffled. What's wrong with him??

Ab tu kaha ja raha hai?

Dev asked as soon as Shiva started his bike.

Mujhe pata hai wo kaha ja sakti hai. Main aata hu thodi der se. Tu yaha dekh.

Dev nodded slightly as Shiva drove off to god knows where. Dev felt too tired and sleepy but then he blinked his eyes trying to stay awake. What a time Raavi selected for her drama. Doesn't she feel just a little bit sleepy??

He looked down at his phone and saw it's already 2:30 am. He moved inside the house with a frown on his face. Right now Raavi is not even in their house and they all are sleep deprived, god knows what will happen if she ever come to his house as a daughter in law of Pandyas.

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Raavi sighed and looked ahead confused at her feelings. She's sitting on the yard of the Somnath temple, she came here as soon as Dev dropped her and left from there. She wanted to stay alone.

She still can't believe that Shiva is getting married to someone. And it troubles her that someone is going to show all the right on him as his wife.

Kya sanyasi banne ki training le rahi hai yaha, aadhi raat ko?

Raavi came out of her thoughts startled and turned around only to see Shiva coming towards her with a glare. She turned away from him and glared ahead. By the way, how the hell does he know she's here??

Tu yaha kya kar raha hai? Aur tujhe kaise pata main yaha hu?

She asked still looking ahead with a glare and felt him sitting beside her.

Somnath aaye the sapne me mere, bole ki tu unko baith ke paka rahi hai yaha. Isliye aane pada tujhe lene.

Raavi rolled her eyes at what he just said but then frowned slightly as she realized that it could be true, otherwise how could Shiva knows about her whereabouts??

Chal wapas, warna teri maasi duniya se nau do gyarah ho jayegi ro ro ke.

Raavi shook her head at what he just said. He doesn't need to exaggerate this much.

Main kahin nahi jaane wali.

Raavi said firmly not in the mood to move away from here. She's feeling at peace her and she doesn't want to go back to her home.

Kis khushi me tu ye aadhi raat ko nautanki kar rahi hai?

Raavi sighed realising that only he could answer her questions. She's trying to figure out who this Krishna is, and why is Shiva so good to that girl. She saw how happy he was with that girl.

Ye Krishna se kab mila tu?

She asked and saw Shiva looking at her as if she has gone mad.

Kaun Krishna?

Raavi gasped as soon as Shiva said that. He doesn't know who Krishna is??

Teri hone wali biwi, aur kaun.

Raavi asked looking at him suspiciously and saw him looking at her with wide eyes. Something doesn't feel right.

Oh accha Krishu. Wo kya hai na main usey Krishu bulata hu to Krishna naam se samajh nahi aaya.

Raavi looked away from him gritting her teeth furiously. How dare he!! Krishu?? Seriously?? He already has a nickname for that girl??

Mera naam Chipkali, Chudail, or wo Krishu?

Raavi murmured to herself feeling like killing someone. Most probably, that Krishna only.

Ja na tu apni Krishu ke paas, yaha kyu aaya hai?

Raavi snapped at him irritated and saw him glaring at her.

Wo raat ko normal logo ki tarah soti hai, tere jaisi chudail nahi hai jo idhar udhar bhatke.

Raavi got up and glared at him as he stood up too. Oh really?? She's a normal person?? Then does it even possible for that Krishu to live with this Bhootnath??

Tere jaise bhootnath ko na koi normal ladki jhel hi nahi sakti, tu dekhna 2 din me bhaag jayegi. Bada aaya shaadi karne wala.

Raavi said rolling her eyes as saw Shiva's eyes flare visibly. She moved back tensed as took two steps towards her while glaring at her.

Oye!! Tu bhabhi ban rahi hai na meri? Wahi banke reh, jyada biwiyo wali harkate mat de.

Raavi stilled in shock as soon as he said that. He's right, what is she doing?? And why?? Raavi looked at Shiva and saw him looking around with a frown on his face. She gulped slightly unable to understand what's wrong with her.

Ghar chal ab, teri Maami ne bawaal machake rakha hai waha.

Raavi came out of her thoughts at Shiva's voice and nodded slightly. She really needs to think about why she's feeling so conflicted.

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Posted: 4 years ago

Not Bhabi... she actually planned to become teesri ma 😂

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Posted: 4 years ago

Oh god! Raavi ne kya drama laga rakha hai vo bhi hone wale devar ke liye🤣

How is Shiva oblivious to this?😆

Edited by DesiiiiGirllll - 4 years ago
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Posted: 4 years ago

Meri Bacchi, she's so confused and in pain too !

I'm so sad for her, but she's the one being impulsive also !


I kinda teared up a bit feeling her emotional turmoil. I need her to be her happy self again !

And Shiva ! I love how only he knows where she is ! When will Shiva realise that she's jealous ? I can't see Raavi so saad 🥺🥺

Great job as always ♥️

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Posted: 4 years ago

Typical confused soul Raavi🤣🤣

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Yaaayyy. Two updates? Third one and we can change my signature😏😋


I loved it!

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