ShiVi OS ft. family~ His proxy - Page 2

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Woww Superb, Awesome👍🏼

Loved it ❤️

Great work 👏👏

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Posted: 4 years ago
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loved this one! Shiva and Raavi were spot on towards DevTa as usual 👏.. but janardhan was the surprise! loved how he supported the pandyas against rishita

his hatred for dev and apparent liking for shiva was nice too 😆

krish teasing shivi, and the way shiva and raavi came close to each other was beautiful

all in all enjoyed it!

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Posted: 4 years ago
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I love all your stories! High voltage drama, some sniffles and closing up with some romance! ♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️ Keeep writing! I really hope you have one for today, since it being lockdown and all 🙈🙈

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Posted: 4 years ago
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OMG!!! That was bloody amazing!!!!

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Raavi being Shiva's proxy 😉

As always you wrote amazing 👏

♥️♥️

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: NephilimByHeart

This was brilliant... You write Krish's lines so well. ☺☺he is becoming my favourite in the show. Love pandya's bonding in all your fics.. Great work. 🥰🥰

Thank you🤗

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Posted: 4 years ago
#17

Originally posted by: D_e_s_t_i_n_y

Ek high voltage track ka episode ban gaya neha ye toh ya ek pure book pad le 100 pages ke..😆

Kaafi entertaining the ye story isme sab kuch tha.. ❤️

shukriya gauri ji🙏🙏🙏

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Posted: 4 years ago
#18

Originally posted by: Mountains_Lakes

😆 Raavi is the rightful proxy. She even managed to give thappads to both DevTa. 😆 Did you by any chance started writing this OS two episodes ago when we were pissed with Rishita? 😂😂 And Dev too.


I actually was pissed off at both DevTa when I started writing this, but then my mood got okay, isliye end tak gussa kam dikha hoga🤣


Loved this OS once again. Raavi in this mode + ShiVi are just ❤️🥰😘🔥. And you had bike scene too. I was almost expecting Raavi to argue and sit with Shiva. But argue she did, but in bedroom!


PS. Loved the ankhon ne bol diya and sun liya dialogue by Gombhi! ❤️


Thanks for this OS!

Thank you🤗

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: ananyakhetarpal

Thank you so much for blessing us with this amazing OS when we will be devoid of fresh episodes till Monday 😆


Raavi's anger was out of this world! Shiva and her are truly made for each other ❤️ You are such a fantastic write, every dialogue and scene was written beautifully and you can really feel all the emotions. Krish of course if my favourite as always and his dialogues are just too good 👏 The whole Pandya family is adorable (would love some more of Suman knocking some sense into Rishita though)


Shiva and Raavi's romance is just so passionate that I fall more and more in love!! Cannot wait to read more!!🤗

Thank you❤️🤗

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Posted: 4 years ago
#20

Originally posted by: Foxii

Nehaa♥️

There is no emoji for it but I am sending you a

Virtual Standing Ovation for this one!👏

My absolute favorite of urs.


Thank you, that's sweet of you🤗


I don’t hate Devta, In fact I want their characters to grow and they will.

But they have been getting away with too much and This OS was a relief for all the frustration I felt towards them.


I actually thought the same too, inse zyada punishment to bechare Krish ko mil jaati hai.


Raavii was the Star of this and I loved it sooo much.

She did full justice to her own previous action.. she called herself Shivas Proxy and she proved it.

Shivi Romance - Haye♥️


I have stopped at every paragraph here to enjoy it.. even reread a few things said by Raavi.


Dev getting the first Slap was unexpected but brilliant.

I liked how Krish got all the confidence and stood by Raavi.


Gaura were so proud.


Thank you so much for writing these wonderful Stories on Shivi

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