ShiVi FF- Mine, Chapter 16 UPDATED on page 55 - Page 5

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Omg. I cannot believe I waited so long to read this. THIS WAS SO AMAZING.


The epilogue was an amazing hook. Who is the girl? - we all knew it was Raavi. But her husband dead - Is Shiva dead? I was so curious and immediately wanted to read more. Thank god I read everything you've posted in one go.


I love that Dhara and Anita have reconciled. Anita deserves a little bit of happniess too. All of Shiva's reactions. Him being curious about Raavi. Losing respect for Dev. Raavi's story just broke me. She had to endure so much. And to think all of it happened because one guy didn't have the guts to be honest about his feeling.I kinda dislike Dev now.


You have written Raavi's pain so well. Her slow dissent from being a chirpy, bubbly girl to a broken women. But I love how she found strength to escape her circumstances for her son. She deserves better now.


Thank you for writing so beautifully. This story just moved me. I hope to leave a long ass comment in the next update as well. (Pardon my long comment, I just couldn't stop myself)


Keep writing 💕🌼


Love,

Abhi.

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Posted: 4 years ago
#42

I want shiva to stand by her and the baby....no one should harm them anymore....not even mami with her words and that ex family of hers....😭

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Waiting to know how would be the conversation between shiva and raavi pls update soon
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Posted: 4 years ago
#44

You portrayed raavi pain so well

Now cant wait to see what shiva will do to give her life back again 👍🏼

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Posted: 4 years ago
#45

That was so beautiful.. The way you described her pain, it could be felt.. Update soon..

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Posted: 4 years ago
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Oh my god, this is absolutely beautiful. Hats off to you! Please jaldi jaldi update kardo, I can't wait to read.

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Posted: 4 years ago
#48

Soooooo cuteeee ♥️♥️
loved how he pulled her back to how she was with just one sentence! And Ladooo! 😍

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Posted: 4 years ago
#49

Ooh I am loving the way this went. Shiva managed to bring some life back in Raavi's world, though momentarily. And then Shiva's moment with Raavi's son! And looks like that bond is mutual. Can't wait to read more. Hope Rishita and Dev don't create anymore problems and apologize to Raavi for what they did.

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Posted: 4 years ago
#50

Can you name the baby 'Shivan' it's a sweet name....❤️

And it's a awesome story 😊

Please do continue....just love Ravi and Shiva...🤗

Edited by ashsamik - 4 years ago

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