Shivi FF: Distance Makes Us Stronger Part V Pg 16, Update 2/5 - Page 5

I usually don’t read stories where the leads don’t speak Hindi

But I love your writing

It’s simple and effective and just lovely

And also the first SHIVI story

Great going! Keep it up!

Beautiful..

I am actually imagining this whole scenario in my mind. .

Can't wait for next part

Glad you could find this solution so we were able to enjoy and appreciate your Work.

Hayeee the Part was amazing.

It was so relatable because I can totally understand Shiva being doubtful. He has never really bothered to know Raavi... She was Mamikibehenkibeti aka the dushman

So nice that Raavi proved his imagination wrong and they became Friends.

Raavi cracks me up!! :) Sooo cute

That Genie part was so adorable... ahh Cliffhanger

I am already excited to read the next Part

You can’t stop there..😳

This was an amazing chapter...

Knowing how the feelings of Shiva started..

Cant wait to read the next chapter..❤️❤️

Hey, just read the second part. Nicely done!

I really appreciate your talent here, reading the fic felt as if I were actually roaming around Shiva's head. All his thoughts and his (innocent, idiotic) preconceived notions about Raavi sounded very canon. I loved how you plotted his slow progress so cutely yet very much Shiva-ish. The smoky eyes awwie, everyone would know Shiva is lost to love at that point 😆

Cutesy, bubbly Raavi is a delight, especially when served with a side of whipped Shiva.

I liked his different adjectives for Raavi, shows how he can't help but agree with her own titles. Also, "Somnath's Dumbest" haha nice touch. I'd like him to say that in the show. In fact, I would be very happy if we got to see Shiva evolve in the show as you've penned down.

I hope we get to see the other characters commenting on and reacting to their changing relationship as well as teasing them in future chapters

Reiterating that your usp as a writer seems to be your ability to really grasp the essence of different characters and write them convincingly. I could never! ❤️

Thanks a bunch @ML for posting it here so we can all read.

Ps. Feel free to include me in your PM list if you face issues posting chapters again, will be happy to help out if I'm online 😊

This was such a treat to read!!

It was almost like I could imagine everything happening in front of me, your writing is fabulous.

His thoughts about Raavi, him telling gombi how he feels about her, and how she has become his confidant now and the tiny details about Raavi, Rishita and Krish.

Just so wholesome and warm. I absolutely loved reading this!!

I loved the detail about how when he finally is falling for her he is taking it slow and making sure he doesn’t mess it up. even though he is known as the hot headed one; when it comes to Raavi all of that melts♥️🥺

And that ending just made me so eager to read the next part🥺I can’t wait to see his reaction when he realizes she’s been waiting for him.

5 stars ⭐️ ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️ Hehe♥️

The update was so good!! I really enjoyed reading this!

I felt like I was really in Shiva's head and honestly, this is definitely something that I can see happening in the show!! I really loved it!

really loved this part! can't wait to see what happens when shiva finds out that she misses him as much as he missed her.. waiting for the next!

I love this ff and your writing is so good. Raavi being in her imagination and happy in her own world is a treat to read . Not to forget Shiva in love looks so adorable. Dhara has always been the closest to Shiva, seeing Raavi as a little crazier version of his bhabhi is always going to make Shiva only fall deeper in love. Please update soon and whenever you update if you edit the title telling part 3 is updated it could be helpful

Loved it ❣️ Specially the ending... Do continue ❤️ Thanks for the update