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SanFrangirl

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Posted: 7 years ago

#51

Originally posted by: fanraya
OMG this is beyond beautiful, I am totally speechless , part 4 and now part 5, I. can not describe how I feel, wow just wow. You are and amazing writer. Absolutely wonderful, you made my day,, A big hug to you🤗 brilliant writing.

A right big one back at ya, sweetie!

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@ShellJA

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Posted: 7 years ago

#52

Originally posted by: SanFrangirl

I wrote as you commanded! But very few words because words are weapons in the hands of Zubiya just now. Hope you enjoy the wordlessness!

THANK YOU! THANK YOU! Thank you!

In the spirit of being honest instead of being just soothed i feel a bit (ok a lot) tuned on myself.

That was deliciously sweet. I am going to savour in my head a while then read it again.

You're amazing!

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octaverider

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Posted: 7 years ago

#53

Girl the way you write them is so perfect. I feel bad for dishing out crap after I read this story.
You so beautifully captured their awkwardness. The finesse with which you write... too much!

Loved the update. Will there be more coming?

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SanFrangirl

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Posted: 7 years ago

#54

Originally posted by: octaverider
Girl the way you write them is so perfect. I feel bad for dishing out crap after I read this story.
You so beautifully captured their awkwardness. The finesse with which you write... too much!

Loved the update. Will there be more coming?

Oh no, dont stop writing. I got inspired by your trailor. After I read it I realized we were kind of infantalizing their romance. These are two adults. It would be a crappy base for a relationship if they didn't have smoldering hot chemistry. Do write. You have a real screenplay quality. I look forward to it

I would like to write more...any ideas --- what to write on? I dont want to write about Bahador gang.

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.Anya.

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Posted: 7 years ago

#55

Originally posted by: SanFrangirl

Oh no, dont stop writing. I got inspired by your trailor. After I read it I realized we were kind of infantalizing their romance. These are two adults. It would be a crappy base for a relationship if they didn't have smoldering hot chemistry. Do write. You have a real screenplay quality. I look forward to it

I would like to write more...any ideas --- what to write on? I dont want to write about Bahador gang.

Koi ludo star match ka 1-2 rounds hi kara do😉😆😆

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Aatra..

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Posted: 7 years ago

#56

WOW! THIS WAS FREAKING BRILLIANT.

THE TENSION, THE EMOTION, THE WARMTH, THEIR THOUGHTS EVERYTHING SO PERFECTLY WRITTEN.👏

I LOVE IT! ❤️

RE-READING IT AGAIN AND AGAIN NOW!👍🏼

⭐️

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SanFrangirl

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Posted: 7 years ago

#57

Koi ludo star match ka 1-2 rounds hi kara do😉😆😆

Yeh lo Ludo Star ki shuruat ho gayi!

Abhi warm up match hai--- round 1. Asfi-1; Zubiya -0

Apni apni teams decide kar lein-- kaun kis ko cheer kar raha.

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octaverider

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Posted: 7 years ago

#58

Originally posted by: SanFrangirl

Oh no, dont stop writing. I got inspired by your trailor. After I read it I realized we were kind of infantalizing their romance. These are two adults. It would be a crappy base for a relationship if they didn't have smoldering hot chemistry. Do write. You have a real screenplay quality. I look forward to it

I would like to write more...any ideas --- what to write on? I dont want to write about Bahador gang.

😆 @ being inspired by the trailer.

I don't have any ideas atm but will make a request if I can think of something. I am sure whatever you write, myself and all your readers will tune in.

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Carry

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Posted: 7 years ago

#59

Dear SanFrangirl...

THIS.IS.BEYOND.BEAUTIFUL!!!

😳👏

I don't want you to ever stop!! Please continue writing some more... The way you elaborate the scenes, I feel as if I am right there watching it all happening in front of my eyes. The way you described their emotions upon the physical proximity, my God! My own cheeks started burning!!! Such strong are your words and your ability to write... mashaAllah.. hats off to you... ⭐️