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aimmy

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Posted: 7 years ago

#191

Originally posted by: fanraya

Omg this is incredible, beautifully written, loved it so much, totally speechless, no words to describe the feeling.. Aims you are an amazing writer👍🏼 the way you write emotions, just so beautiful 👏

Thank you much 😳 This means everything to me 😊

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Push-pull

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Posted: 7 years ago

#192

Originally posted by: bookworm123
I was just re watching a few scenes (something all of us do all the time I am sure!!) and once again I was struck by how made for each other they are...

Asfi is such a gentleman that even a woman like Fariyal who spoke ill of his dead brother and rejected him in a very hurtful manner was treated with respect by him...he may not have any feelings for her any more (na mohabbat, na nafrat as he himself said) but he still does not insult her or belittle her..even in rejecting her direct proposal he treated her more kindly than how she treated him when she ended their engagement...not did her gloat over her failed marriage...

He is happy if his bhabhi who was married to his brother is prepared to start her life afresh with another man...just like his brother asked him to shortly before he died, he has taken up the responsibility of caring for and watching out for the women in the family..

On the other hand, Zubia's brother and her father never respected the women in their family, they could never be counted upon..

I am glad, Zubia and Asfand met. He looks more than eager to care, protect and take up her responsibility too..

Yes, he'll all be ready to pounce on anyone who would point fingers at her.. And more than that he'll ensure that no harm is done to her inner self because of any of that.. That's the beauty of his soul and that's the kinda soul Zubia needs.. And the beauty is only added because he too needs a soulmate like her with whom all his inner turbulences due to his past can be calmed down..

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Push-pull

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Posted: 7 years ago

#193

Originally posted by: Aims.

I actually had in my mind for her to open up to him but then it was too much to write. I couldn't do justice to her emotional needed out burst so had to skip that. But I'd love to see that on the show!

I enjoyed your writing in every way.. Yeah it's too much on her part to jot down.. Hope the writer of the show has done that side of her job perfectly.. 😃

Maybe you can beautifully wind through in your wonderful writing, few moments between them where her every Emotional fear or hesitant about take a dive at life be addressed by him in his own special way.. Looking forward to more shots from you.. Keep it posted here 😃

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bookworm123

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Posted: 7 years ago

#194

I wrote an OS inspired by the precap of episode 26. Please be kind, I hardly ever write stories! 😊

Here is the link.

http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=4907527#p144403961

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bookworm123

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Posted: 7 years ago

#195

Originally posted by: Aims.
Hi Guys!
I wrote Shot # 5.😆😳
Here

https://aimmybk.wordpress.com/2017/10/14/shot-5/

Those who don't know me I'm Aims and I come here occasionally. Been writing on Asfiya for a month now. And this is the fifth installment in the One Shots.

Thank you 😊

That was an engaging read, as were all your other OSes on this delightful couple.. You are right. The Asfi we know would not care about her past. Thanks for bringing that out so nicely..

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Ain

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Posted: 7 years ago

#196

Originally posted by: --HiNa--

hahahaha sahi kia
me to kehti ho address bi mang leti yaar
dandhey utha kar jaty😆

Guys how to reduce quotes? Like what to remove to get it smaller or whatever you can say.

She didn't reply to fake id till now 😆 i re-read what i had messaged and i think i am sounding creep 😆

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Ain

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Posted: 7 years ago

#197

Originally posted by: Jiyagulabi

Wow ainee
Thanks a lot for sharing this with us
Indeed I m happy

Hugs gulabo 🤗 😆

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Push-pull

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Posted: 7 years ago

#198

If I come to think of it, Zubia used to cry a lot earlier.. Now how she's controlling herself piling up on her emotions inside her.. Too much of a toil on the little girl who is forced by situations to grow up all of a sudden, all on her own.

The last she cried was when she was thrown out of the house by her sis-in-law.. I think after that she's been focused on being strong and deviating her energy on being supportive of others..🤗

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Posted: 7 years ago

#199

Originally posted by: Push-pull
If I come to think of it, Zubia used to cry a lot earlier.. Now how she's controlling herself piling up on her emotions inside her.. Too much of a toil on the little girl who is forced by situations to grow up all of a sudden, all on her own.
The last she cried was when she was thrown out of the house by her sis-in-law.. I think after that she's been focused on being strong and deviating her energy on being supportive of others..🤗

Yes. In fact I loved it when instead of crying or dignifying her Khala's DIL's allegations with lengthy justifications, she used her education and contacts to get herself out of this situation...

Since then, she finally found a place where she was respected and valued...