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pakpearl

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Posted: 12 years ago

#41

Asher-Khirad ❤️

It's not easy to forget them !!!

THanx Marie...

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Jagruti

@AnAvidReader

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Posted: 12 years ago

#42

Heyy,
Read all chapters in one go..and I Loved it..
Khirad's awkwadness,Ashar's guilt,Hareem's innocence was so brillaintly potrayed in ur SS..
and this chapter was super awesome..I cannot wait for ur next update after reading the Precap :)
Update soon..and do PM me when u update..It was a treat to read ur SS..thanks :)

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bonibright

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Posted: 12 years ago

#43

Awesome..Loved it...😛..Thanks for the PM..😊

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Black.Jack

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Posted: 12 years ago

#44

What e prologue!

i loved the dialogues they could be felt...good going and if you do continue please put up an index...!

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-Marie-

@-Marie-

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Posted: 12 years ago

#45

Originally posted by: SaneWhispers
What e prologue!
i loved the dialogues they could be felt...good going and if you do continue please put up an index...!

Thank you but prologue dialogues are original from script so thanks to Farhat ishtiaq for writing dm down!!

4 to 5 parts are already update i wil put index on first page thank you for reminding 😳

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Black.Jack

@Black.Jack

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Posted: 12 years ago

#46

i remember reading them in the novel now... thanks for reminding!

reading the next few parts now!

the first chap...

awesome love how they are getting back to their lost relation ship! Khirad being all caring and Asher being all guilty! nicely done! this could be Humsafer part 2!

and caming to chap 2... i love you for adding that pool scene...so emotional at the same time cherish-able!

will comment after reading the next chaps...

thanks for writing this i really appreciate it!

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Fatima

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Posted: 12 years ago

#47

Res:P (read but will comment later)

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-Marie-

@-Marie-

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Posted: 12 years ago

#48

Originally posted by: HSFA
Res:P (read but will comment later)

I had updated it long back ange😲 btw check other new Kisher OS from my posts😳

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-Marie-

@-Marie-

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Posted: 12 years ago

#49

Originally posted by: SaneWhispers
i remember reading them in the novel now... thanks for reminding!
reading the next few parts now!
the first chap...
awesome love how they are getting back to their lost relation ship! Khirad being all caring and Asher being all guilty! nicely done! this could be Humsafer part 2!
and caming to chap 2... i love you for adding that pool scene...so emotional at the same time cherish-able!
will comment after reading the next chaps...
thanks for writing this i really appreciate it!

Thank You G ! Your comment is encouraging n paying back for penning down it.. 😆 Humsafar something i would cherish always coz Kisher !!😳 Thank you <3

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Black.Jack

@Black.Jack

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Posted: 12 years ago

#50

Chapter 3...

oh i love how you manage to keep in the essence of the show... the little things... like Hareem always saying her name when she speaks, Khirad's shyness and Asher's cravings for her...

perfect! and Hareem's part...so damn cute!