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Posted: 17 years ago
#41
Since it is one of hosana wishes, it has forced me to start writing again. I have a erratic writing structure...... pardon me for it....
thanks giri for closing it and thanks meli for opening it 😛
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Posted: 17 years ago
#42
Way to go Hosanna...Anju akka decided to stop with her ff coz we had a
small argue...and refused to talk with me for 1 whole week 😭 but
somehow, Ho n Nets PM changed her mind 😃

akka...plz continue soon so I can print out urs ff too and read it on the flight
like I will read Nallu, ambi, giri akka and ushas ff 😳
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Posted: 17 years ago
#43
That is good news Basanthi 😊

Waiting.....

Hos and Netra - Wow!
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Posted: 17 years ago
#44
wow gr8 news can't wait for next chap 😃
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Posted: 17 years ago
#45

Hiya all,

Thank you for the varavayrpu 😆. I was super mad at meli she was really mean to me...... so she got my famous basanthi wrath on herself😉, but anyways lets get to the story........

This one is specially dedicated to the bday baby hosanna 😳

*Warning!! All the characters in this story as fictional, any resemblence to a living or dead person is merely coincidental *

Sahana Hariharan 😛😉, put down the phone, closed the piece of script which she read out as a converstaion and was looking at her mom with bored eyes.

Anjana Hariharan aka Anju was looking at her daughter. At 18 she was totally useless she didnot even know how to talk to her fiance. She had to script the all her talks.

Anju: Nee yepdidi yennaku ponna vandhu porandha😡😡😡... At your age i had already eloped with your father and you were only your way.😆, in 18 yrs of your life you have no boyfriend infact you dont even talk to men. And look at the way you dress all baggy yaar di unna parpa endha maadhiri erundha.....

Sahana 😃: Nee parpiya hugging her amma

Anju pulling out of the hug: 😡 Naa parthu yenna aradhu........... yeppovadhum yennodaya eruka porai

Sahana : Amam, nee yengayo angai than adiyen num 😆😉

Anju: Eppadi solli solli yenna kollariye😡

Sahana has heard this threat like million times she shrugs : Amma please adhuku munnaki nee yellariyum konnuda maata 😆

Sandhya : Arambhichutaylaa neenga........... 😆 Looked bored with her friend and her future DIL

Sahana : Sandy aunty ( squelling like a excited child runs and goes to sandhya )

Anju: amam di yemma nee tha avala chellam kuduthu kutichava aakirkai......... I am telling her that i might not live that long..........

Sahana narrows her eyes: What do you mean, you have a problem and u didnot tell me 😲😡

Anju: The only problem i have is a tiring daughter......who wont listen to me........ if something happens to me what will u do........who will take care of you....

Sahana: Endha aruva story yaa than naraya dharava aruthikiye....... 😆you got me engaged to sandy aunty's son what else you want...😡........😡

Anju: Yes but are u behaving like a fiancee.......You dont even talk to sunder........always avoid him

Sahana: Well you got me engaged....... if you observe we are not exactly in the same age group......what in the world can i talk with him.......😳😕 and on the top of that you both are monitoring every move on mine, why not go and advice some to your precious son...... you guys make me more nervous than he ............ there is something called privacy........ but you guysss dont know the meaning of it.....

Anju sighs and looks sad 😔

Sahana looks at her mother big face.......... : Ok ok drama queen i will do what you said the next time i see sunder ok ..........

Sandhya : Ok what will she tell you to do........

Sahana : Ok imagine you are sunder........covering her face with her duppata........... she says : yen Prana naatha, ....... Vellai lendhu vandhuvitrigala.......yenna endha tamadham........neegal kalangu poi vandirperigal, naa sapdidai thirtham koduvarava....

By tthe time sandy and anju are laughing.................

Anju: ada mandu mandu.......kalaiarthuku avar yenna arisi yaa..😆

Sahana : apo varayenna kuravendhum thaayee....... and starts mudering more tamil ..............

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Meenakshi goes to her room and spends the rest of thenight crying on what she did.....

Sunder on the other hand....... knew that shew as angry withhim........It was wrong for him even to think of other womanwhen he was enaged to somebody else.........but being in love has been something he never hs felt before and today he felt so strong......... when she was leaving the room it was as if his life was leaving him........He had to talk to her.......... He had to...............

I hope you guys enjoyed the part...........sorry to confuse you with new characters

Edited by basanthi - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
#46

I am bored to writing the next part to bore you guys........😆

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At 4 am in the morning, somebody touched Meena, with a jerk she gets up to check on who is the person, to her shock it is sunder.....

She gets all angry, What, why are you here........

Sunder: Look meena i need to explain myself to you........ I know you are very upset.........

Meena : I am not upset..........

Sunder raises his eyebrow.......

Meena : Well ok Fine I am upset you are in my room at 4 am in the morning.......

Sunder: And that is why you are crying...........

Meena 😡 I cry when ppl wake me from sleep............

Sunder tired with her lies : Enough, we both know what happened in there, you were really upset about my fiancee.....you and I both know that something happened inthere......... and it was magical........if it was not for the damn phone we would have ..........

Meena was already feeling sick............ she didnot know what to tell...........

Sunder: Look meena i am not good at fancy words...........I really like you and I would like to spend rest of my life with you .............

Meena Wat.......are you mental.......... you are already engaged.............

Sunder So what I am not married yet........I never felt anything like this ever in my life........

Meena was 😲 and embarrased ........

Sunder : What is it meena....... I cannot live without you........ I will leave everything and come for you........... Will you support me.............

Meena : But it is so wrong..... You are already commited......I cannot do this.......... I cannot please leave............

Shocked sunder leaves.............

*****

Dejected Sunder comes back to his place....... where he meets his apprehensive mother Sandhya who looked worried.

Sunder : Yenna problem maa......

Sandhya: Onnum ellai, I was wondering if we can prepone the marriage for next week.....

Sunder : Yen.......

Sandhya: Well I have this big conference of writers coming up, which i dont want to miss ( Sandhya was a big thing in a writing world, she wrote with pen name of kadhambari 😉😛, read the warning please 😆)

Sunder didnot care anymore, he had begged meena before leaving but she wouldnot listen to anything.......... How did it matter any more if the marrige was today or after a week, it was not with meena and it was never going to be.......He would ahve to accept the truth........atleast from this marriage his mother will be happy

Sandhya was a shrewd lady finding her son tensed she asked : Sunder I have told this million times before, if you have a problem with the marriage let me know, I dont want to impose my wishes on you.....

Sunder : Amma you arenot imposing, i said yes becoz its time for me to get married so dont worry about it...........

Somehow sandhya sensed that something was going to be very wrong.......she felt it.............. but for now all she could do was to wait for it.............

*****

Meena received sunder's wedding card, all her family was excited about the visit. Every day made meena realize how much sunder was important to her. It was so hard to tell, i mean she knew him like for 3 days and now she missed him more than anybody else in her life.......she felt terrible......... He was honest of his feelings and told her upfront that he will leave everything for her and what had she done........ she had showed him the door.........

After a lot of thinking meena decided to go and talk to sunder....... it was just a day of the marraige.......but she kept telling herself, if th e marriage went through nobody would be happy and 3 lives would be ruined ........ As soon as they reached the mandapam......( wtih meena's the family ofcourse).........meena went looking for sunder.................... finding him in the marriage attire just took meena's heart away..............

Looking at her he comes, : So you ahe decided to come and mock me and this marriage huh............

Meena having tears in her eyes : No i have come here to tell you that I Love you a lot, i dont care what happened in teh past, all i care is you, and I want you in my present and future......... Without you i dont have life...............

Sunder froze there......... and stared at her in utter shock........This is what he wanted to hear.......This is what......... it was like a dream. was she real or was he imaginiing......... The moment he waited for his whole life had come shaken him and gone..........He had got wat he wanted............ he was thanking god and hugging meena profusely...........

Netra who had come looking for meena ( as she was concerned like a good mom about meena being gloom y and all........and put 2 and 2 together...........)

Netra : Good guys.......finally .............. Now Sunder we have to go and talk to your mom and the brides family and convince them............

Sunder: Aunty, Amma is downstairs she is wearing a brown saree....... alright..........

Netra and Meena come down giving sunder to time to recup his senese before facing his mum........

Netra : I am so happy for you meena.......finally you listen to your heart

Finally finding the lady in the brown saree........ Netra says

Netra: hello I am netra...Meena amma........ We want to tell you soething important..........Your son and my daughter they love each other a lot........ it took them long to realize that........but now they are sure about their feelings..........i think you should call of the marriage and talk to the brides family.......After all this is your son's happiness............. which is most important..............

Apparently that turned out to be pattu mami........the biggest gossiper in the community she tured and looked shocked

Pattu: Yenna sollrel.......Appo kalyanam nadakadha.............. Sandhya........ Yendi Sandhya enga vaadi eva yennenno sollra.......Un paiyyan yaara yo love panitana di......... kalayanam nadakadham......Anju endha aniyayatha kaykiya......... unno friend paiyaan..................

Sandhya who was shocked to hear pattu mami yell came runnign........ she too was wearing madisharu......but different style....................

sandya : Yenna maami...........yedhuku santham podarel..................

And then listens to pattu mami excited explainaiton............

Sandhya: Ella mami.........neenga thappa purinjiprel.......yaar ava yennaku kamingo............. naa vandhu............as she sees netra...........she is shocked............ as meena netra and sunder are all standing together.......

Netra: Edhu unga amma va.................😲............shock shock...........

Sandhya: Yennadihu sunder what is all this........

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Regards

Basu 😉

Edited by basanthi - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Sandhya: Sunder What is all this
Sunder :err Amma, this is meena, I was at my friend's place last month and I saw her and fell in love with her....
Sandhya : I am listening.........(very calmly)
Sunder: I was asking her to get married to me she refused....... but today she has come to tell her love........ Amma i love her a lot
Sandhya calmly : So wht you want to do sunder
Sunder: I want to marry her amma........
Sandhya : Ok so you want to get married right now ?
Sunder is quiet....
Sandhya : what about the gal you were getting married too ?
Sunder is quiet.......
Sandhya: Didnot i ask you so many times before fixing the marriage about your acceptance
Sunder : Yes amma you did, I didno tmeet meena until after engagement.
Sandhya: Ofcourse, you didnot see her after your engagement....... well should i be glad that it was not after marriage.......... that you didnot see her...........
Sunder: Amma you are getting it wrong........
Sahana comes there .........
Sandhya : I am getting you wrong, pray tell me how
Meena: Aunty you are not getting it........ If he married another person neither he nor me or his fiancee would be happy...........
Sandhya: But if you do it this way alteast you are happy...........what were you doing all these days.................*sigh*............ Look at this girl(sahana)........She is just doing it for her mother......... and for me.......just becoz i asked................. just becoz her mother asked.................. and you on the other hand................not only failed me but made a mockery of her, not to mention all the values i have given you.....................
Netra yells: You are doing this on purpose you know very well that your son will not marry my daughter if you walk out why are you taking your 18 yrs old revenge on us now
All look at netra........: Oh please what double standard, werenot the same gal who helped my so called sister elope ....................
Sandhya: Well if you call letting ppl know and walking away from the door called elopement, then sure i did....... and if i remember Anjana was not about to get married in an hour....
Netra: Andha odu gaali ki neega vakalatha.......... Well she would have been married to somebody more respectable............ rather than shaming us with her ways..................
Sahana was a bit confused..........
Anjana comes there..............: akka!!.................
Sahana : What are you doing here.......... You should go inside...........
Anjana: No what is going on .......why is all this yelling.............sandhya what is the problem
Netra: evo un ponnu thanaa......... naa sollaren yenna problem nu........... its your daugter and your friend.............my daughter loves sunder and he loves her..........but your dear friend is lecturing him about values and morals ..........when she was ur biggest supporter ......goddess of love.............
Santhosh: Akka please.........Let it be.............
Netra: Oh santhosh........Look at the way she is talking to my daughter ............. She was the one who corrupted our sister and was responsible for dad's stroke and today when she is standing at the same point she is quoting rules on morality and values..........
Sandhya: Enough of the talk.............
Netra: Yen cannot listen to the truth............
Anjana: Akka please yen ...........
Netra: yaardi unnaku akka......... haan.........nangellam evelo sonnum ......onnavadhu kaytiya.........eppo paru yaaru ellam thani maramaa neekarai............
Sahana : She is not alone she has got me and sandhya aunty, and please watch your tone ............
Netra: Eppadi than valakardha....( is the way to talk to elders).....
Anjana looked tired.........
Sahana : Enough dont fight........Eppo yenna you want your daughter to get married..................I am fine with that............... Amma lets go from here.......................
They both leave, as sandhya is leaving with them.........
Anjana : You should stay ( breathing heavily).......... its your sons marriage.........
Sandhya : How can i leave............
Anjana : No stay till themarriage..............
Sahana : aunty stay.........I will call you later..............
Sandhya : Well wat are we waiting for, somebody get the bride ready............
Sunder tries to talk to his mum, he was not sure if she was ok with it, but she just excused herself with a phone call..........
Marriage gets peformed..................................
the bride and groom come to take ashirwaad from everybody.................
Sandhya doesnot say anything........ She just hands out a bunch of papers................: Here i have changed the protperty to your name and sakthi's name... I hope you guys wont have any problem...........if there is you can contact my lawyer......for clarification..................
Sunder looked confused : But why are u doing this............
Sandhya : becoz i am leaving sunder, my work here is done...........
sunder : What are you saying amma, where will you go................
Sandhya : To my daughter.......................
Sunder : You are choosing sahana over me and sakthi...................
Sandhya : Yes......... I am choosing her over you boys................ Well i do hope Mr.Sunder you have a wonderful life aghead............
Sandhya gets a call.............. : Yes i am on my way.............. yes.................
Note: Anjana aka anju is Sahana's mum who is also netra and santhosh's sister........( god can it get any more confusing)
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Posted: 17 years ago
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First of all, thanks for finally continuing this story 🤗 . Ho, 😲 you too?? Well, looks like our PM is not a waste after all 😉 😆

Sahana Hariharan 😆 😆 very familiar 😛

Totally interesting chapters basanti. I enjoyed it alot. Now netra is waiting for meli to read this 😈 😍

Oh, and im leaving here full on confusion I have to read these chapters back again
Edited by netra_rama - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
#49
so anju who is sakthi??? sunder's bro

marriage is performed atlast

poor sahana😭

gr8 going👏

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Posted: 17 years ago
#50
yes nallu he is his brother.........

nets me waiting for meli to read the chapter............ its a punishment.....i mean none of the character resemeble any living or dead person....naa
Edited by basanthi - 17 years ago

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