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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: basanthi

Chellams thanks for you wonderful comments............ Meli, FYI, i am saving the name sahana for a special love story of sahana and father of 3 😆😉.... 🤣🤣🤣 i knew there was a reason for not using the name sahana 😆

Sunder: I mean you can meet a guy anywhere?? You know in the street??emple?.disco?? pausing??. In the elevator??🤣🤣 Elevator?? 😆😆Smart gal

Sunder: Array yaar I want to thank you naa??😡 kindal laa.. using the word naa. Its netra's trademark gal😡😆😆

Sunder: I am almost 10 yrs older than you??I am a pakka vegetarian on 30 feb??.. I am very popular among woman?.. I love other? kids??nd most important of all??He pulls her dawani out????making her collide with him???..I am not a gentlemen when it comes to u???( blame meli..its her lollu idea of hotness 😕)?? Meli😡, and here im thinking you as a nice small young gal😆😆

basanti, hopefully payya does not came here to read all this...😉. Thanks. Story flow is good. 👏 Keep up the good job naa

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: Hosanna


Aiyoh I am too young to read all this.......wait till my parents are not around ...... 😆 😆 😆 Unggaleke too much aa teriyelai😆😆

Basanthi.....Basanthi......orree luvvvv!!!!

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Chapter 4

His head was descending down as she realized………… what was happening………. She pushes him out………

Meena: What the hell are you doing? You are pathetic …….. Give my davani back……………… snatches it from him……

Sunder just stood there shocked at his behavior…… : What were u thinking dude……kissing the gal in your friends house………. Good one……………….. get killed………..

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Next day……..

Everybody was getting ready to get into the car to leave………………

Meena did not want to face sunder……. Letting a sigh of relief……..she got into the car……………….. car starts to move…..to her shock…….she realizes that she is sitting right beside the devil………….

Sunder gives her a dazzling smile……… and looks on…………

Meena: Mama…………….. Mama…………. How long will it take for us to get there….

Santhosh : Well 3 hours………….

Meena: Mama please naa……can you sit beside me………its so long since I have slept on your shoulder…….

Santhosh is taken aback……..: well I thought u were too old for me………

Meena: But mama I am your papa……….. I am never too old to be loved…….. makes a sad puppy face………….

Santhosh : Ok ok no face…….I am coming right there…….Sunder…..can you come to the front please……..

Sunder glares at meena……: Sure ………and moves back………………..

Happily meena sleeps through out the way……….

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Getting out of the car all the others hurry leaving sunder and meena………. Meena finding Sunder next to her……starts walking faster………but being tall he catches up…….

Sunder: Madam…….oh hello…….wait up……..

Meena walks faster infact runs….to catch up with Santhosh……..😆

Sunder just pulls her and gets her aside from the family…………………

Sunder: Hmm yenna……(what) if you pretend that I don't exist doesnot mean you can forget what happened between us yesterday……….

Sunder continues : you know ur amma said that this is a very good muhurtham……….All you have to say is yes…….and I will marry you right away……….

Meena's eyes widen and she is like what……..

Sunder: Array we can come back next year on the same day with our kid………. If you want we can even keep your father's name for the kid………..

Meena is 😲

Sunder: You know I have never been this desperate to kiss a woman……… but you are so different…so beautiful………it hurts……………

Meena looks into his eyes ( bad move )……….then jerks out : If you think I am gonna fall for your words then think again………..I know your kinds………. You are such a jerk…….. you are my mama's friend and you have no shame and flirting with me …….what if I tell my mama……….you know he will kill u……….

Sunder is 😡……..

Meena: Don't you have any conscience……….how do you even face yourself………….doing this to your own friend who trusted you and let you stay in his home………….You are cheap jerk………..you would even sleep with your own sister……………..

Sunder slaps…….meena…………….: yenna di yedhu somm erundha…….nee paathla estathuku paysarai……….. Ennaku unna podichiruku…… yennamo nethiki naa unna rape pannamadhiri payasarai…….nee yum than unkai yaa epadi ( mimicking her action of contact)………payriya peesa vandhuta……… nee yen pariye miss unniversa…….. unnamadhiri 1000 payru yennaku kadaipaadi……………

(I have kept quiet doesn't mean that you can talk whatever you want…….. did I rape u yesterday………… you were more into the kiss……hell it wasn't even a kiss…………What do you think of yourself………Miss universe………. Haan…….. I have seen 1000 of gals like you……….I just cannot believe you have such filthy thinking……… )

Angry sunder walks away leaving a sore Meena…………

It was a huge temple…….too much crowd…….as all of them sad down to eat lunch………..

There are a bunch of guys……… watching meena…………… Sunder who is passing by hears them talk dirty about meena………. He wants to tear them limb to limb……they are graphically admiring her physical attributes……….controlling his anger……….. He yells : Bracelet………..

Immediately meena adjusts herself as he goes in to talking about bracelets with Netra………

After a while everybody rests and goes around to see the temple……… as they are gathering out………. They realize meena is missing……………….

Sunder…….was the first one to realize she was missing………. He went around looking for here…………… sweating………… he was almost shaking……….Just then………he finds the same bunch of guys trying to abuse meena………… before she could tell anything……… he jumps in like a hero and does a bit of dishoom dishoom……….😆

Sunder yells : Are you a small child………why cannot you get the simple point that we are here with everybody and when everybody leaves you follow them not go around causing tension and grief to other ppl…………….

Meena: Hello I do whatever I please…….what is it to you……..haan…………….Who asked you to come and fight like a hero…….Now I have to answer my amma nd all others……… and they would not allow me to go alone

Sunder: What…..All you are worried about is going out……..What if something would have happened to u………

Meena: well nothing happened naa………..

Sunder: Yes that is becoz I came right on time

Meena: Even if you were not there on time I would have managed……….. why are you even angry with them…………They too are just like you……… this is what you wanted too isn't it……………so when others want the same from me…………you have such double standards……….

Sunder: I just stopped thinking when you were not seen……I had horrible thoughts that you might be in danger………. I died there……….. and then when almost kill myself to save you and all I get is being called hypocrite.. Thank you so much………. For letting me know what you really think…………..

He walks away…………………….

I am sorry it is a boring part......will try to windup this boring story soon.............

Regards

Anju

P.S ambi and Nallu will post comments 2morrow.......its too late now.........

Edited by basanthi - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
#24
boring ellam illai anju, ippa dhaan soodu pidikudhu story.....modhal irundha thaan kadhalil inimai koodum...........i like it yaar...waiting anxiously 4 u'r next episode dear.
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Posted: 17 years ago
#25
Boring, what which one naa??? I dun find any honey. Story if perfect and really, the slap, oh well she deserve it naa....

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Edited by netra_rama - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
#26
very good update 👏 👏 👏

i liked the way both the character talk & its not at all boring , hero & heroine different from chocolate ones thats really nice 😉
Edited by nallu - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
#27

Anju, the story is unfurling pretty well.......the frustration of young love as in Meena's case and the cool caddish yet confusing emotions of Sunder.....

Reading stories by Giri, Nallu, Ambi and Anju are better than watching serials!
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Posted: 17 years ago
#28

wow...2 more chapts is up....mels will catch it up later on tonight 😳

akka...check out for the short story contest on GA....something for u naa😳

Edited by meli - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
#29

I am so confused over this Sunder guy...he acts like a jerk infront her by pulling out her dhavani etc but then when others try to harm her...he panics 😕

I hope Meenu wont fall for him, but teach him a lesson...but knowing u...she will do that 😆

your cracks me up with your side comments...but why always drag me into it 😆

ladies....anju di always use age gap between hero and heroine cause she is facinated by Jai Walia (call him for my thaatha 😆 ) and Bani from Kasamh Se..those who dont watch it or heard about it...its about a 40+ guy marry a 18-20 years old girl and their love saga 🤢 🤣 right a, anju akka?? 😉

waiting for the next chapt 😳

PS! akka....look at my newest crush.....isnt he cute and hot😳...its all cause of u😡...u got me into him😳...not that I complain😉

Edited by meli - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: meli

I am so confused over this Sunder guy...he acts like a jerk infront her by pulling out her dhavani etc but then when others try to harm her...he panics 😕

I hope Meenu wont fall for him, but teach him a lesson...but knowing u...she will do that 😆

sigh........ well i dont know................. maybe she will mabye she wont........knowing me i know that i know nothing of the story myself 😆

your cracks me up with your side comments...but why always drag me into it 😆

my sweet......becoz i am ur saand and you are my chipkali.........who else will i drag here.......... i mean since you are the drag queen.........and reason i come to this forum........and my sweet kutty papa.......i always drag u........if you say this is drag wait until sahana makes an entry........then u will be behind me with thodapam 😆😉

ladies....anju di always use age gap between hero and heroine cause she is facinated by Jai Walia (call him for my thaatha 😆 ) and Bani from Kasamh Se..those who dont watch it or heard about it...its about a 40+ guy marry a 18-20 years old girl and their love saga 🤢 🤣 right a, anju akka?? 😉

Right....... i am sure i was the one who pmed about the cat fight between 2 patis about the thatha......... u call him thatha and u have secret crush on him 🤢.......the age difference is becoz i have been reading a lot of johanna lindsey novel lately............and i simply love it............ they are historical romance..........and they are always between these groups.........thats all.................

waiting for the next chapt 😳

I am finishing it i think by next chapter........wait for a shocker 😃

PS! akka....look at my newest crush.....isnt he cute and hot😳...its all cause of u😡...u got me into him😳...not that I complain😉

awwwwww I love prem too...........u know................ he is hot.......and his voice.......OMG is to die for ........i dont like that heer......she is always 😭 BTW heard laksmi is going to end...........yahoo..........shaniyan ozinjudhu..........😆

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