Priyamudan Soorya - New fiction - Page 3

Thanks again for your emails. Let me be frank, I am not comfortable sending you my picture....it has been just a day since talked and why so soon. Seeing a picture will create some kind of opinion that might not necessarily be true. Picture speaks thousands words....true but those thousand words might be totally different from what the real soul is.

Good charaterization. What is so good about your writing is at the introduction the character of your players is being described well.

Buddy a small request could you tell us which, actors are playing which characters.

Good story Madhu. Keep up the good work yar... and thanks 😉 😊

thank you madhu..you play out the characters well...

Thanks again for all your comments.

Regarding the characters, i leave it up to you readers to come with the actors....that way i will know what kind of characterization i am leading you in to.

Nice game ha?

Madhu

Great going Madhu - The die hard romantic
nature of yours is well reflected. With reg
to actors, all the present serial actors have
become stale and have a shadow lurking behind them.
How about some movie actors?? My vote is:
Sham - Sree - the rest ... will think and come back.

Brilliant idea. Put Priviraj on. Or Jayam Ravi for thre girls. Shes loves him.

You nailed it Usha.....The person i had in mind is none other than Prithviraj...Prakash raj might be a good choice but he is older than the character Sri

Wow.. now why was I thinking that Soorya is the name of a male character in this story?
Did it strike that way for any one else?

CHapter 3

Krish had agreed to meet soorya at 6 PM for a chat through the messenger. After a long time he could actually feel the excitement in heart. He placed his laptop and a cup of coffee in his office desk and sat back in his oversized office chair. His messenger chimed indicating that he had received a message.....

Soorya: Hello Krish are you there?
Krish: Hey ..hi soorya, I am here ofcourse. How are you.
Soorya: Doing good, thank you! Hey sorry about the picture...it just seemed too early.
Krish: No no, that's ok. I understand. So how is school?
Soorya: Going good, have one more semester to go, I work at school too..i teach computer lab and its been crazy.
So Krish, tell me about you.
Krish: Tell you....i wrote everything...and my profile has it all.
Soorya: well that's more of a fact sheet....is it not?
Krish: Ok ...what do you want to know
Soorya: tell me why you are chatting with me and why you had a profile in that website.
Krish: To find friends who think like me. You know soorya ..there are many things that one feels and they cant tell it even to their closest buddies or parents or wife.......its just with everyone getting so materialistic..its hard to explain what we really feel.
Soorya: So what exactly do you feel? Can I assume that you are here for a life partner?
Krish: Yeah right...like I can tell it in one chat. Life partner..maybe, maybe not. But finding a life partner is not my motive. a soul mate is not necessarily linked with love and marriage.It could just be a mental , spiritual relationship and possibilities are it could leave to a life partnership....of course provided it's a girl. OK now, you tell me why you are here?
Soorya : Simple... I am here just for fun. I cant think as deep as you but I just decide at the moment what is right and wrong and move on!


And thus their conversation went on for almost an hour and a half. By the end of the conversation each had quite an opinion on the other. According to Krish, Soorya was a cool easy going and talented person who has had nothing but a perfect life being the middle child of an educated upper class couple. He felt she was a vibrant rejuvenating personality who could make others smile, had no barriers and could open up to anyone and everyone. The pessimistic guy he was....he prayed that all this was real and he would be able to meet her soon. But her character resemblance with sangeetha did not fail to cross his mind........

On the other end of the city soorya was strolling in her college campus. Interesting guy! She thought as she walked towards the engineering building. She figured that Krish was a quiet, shy and a total introvert and just the opposite of her. She figured that he had a very small friendship circle and he doted his sister and his parents. Nothing overly excited him or upset him....she also had a strange feeling that he was a bit self oriented and proud. Her thoughts were interrupted by a phone call from her aunt with whom she was staying.

She was the middle of the three kids born to a doctor dad and teacher mom. She was extremely attached to her elder brother Arun and much to the envy of their younger sister Akila. She was elder to Akila by just 11 months and they had overheard their mom confessing that Akila was "an accident". Soorya was the most responsible child in the family according to her parents who always came out with good grades. Soorya had no problem getting admission to college park university and she was as excited as her mama & family with whom she was currently staying. She was excited to have found a new friend now and she found Krish to be an extremely interesting character!