Navakirangal (Serial Fiction) Continuing.

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Hey everyone😊.

Iam coming back with another of my own creatable serail.😊

It is going to be a combination of all the serial everyone is watching. I am show women can stand up strong as men then being tortured. There is going to be many Twist coming in this serial. I wont stop writing this serial then the last one i did.😛😃

Pokkri Thambi

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Posted: 18 years ago
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coming soon near you with the first episode 😉
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Posted: 18 years ago
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i cant wait for the first chapter thambi.
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Go Thambi Go!!!

Sorry, I missed the earlier one. Can you remind me, whenever you have posted a chapter please. Thanks.

Sometimes, I intend to skip some thread when I am extremely busy.
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Go thambi carry on with ur superb creativity serial.we all love to see ur serial soon cant wait.come on take your own time and make it live ,sweet,rocking.
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Thursday is the day i am actually post the first Episode 😉 . Put your legs and hands and tight as a serial thriller serial is coming 😛
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Posted: 18 years ago
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oh ho thriller serials coming pokkiri carry on nice move and sure we will keep the legs and hands tight ha ha ah ah aha,nice move and nice starter???
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Cant wait for that payya...send me a Pm when u have posted it 😉
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Episode 001

Madurai

The temple bell rings in the Madurai Meenaskhi Temple and everyone is eagerly waiting for the Chithra Chariot to come in view. Just as it happens a Jeep arrives at moment with a woman in it. Everyone was yelling out in happiness "Vannakam Ma" at particularly the women. A sigh of relief was in the face of the women as she looked around the whole country. The priest from inside the chariot saw her and shouted "Parvthi Devi Ma Vango Ma ugada kail thera illango". Parvthi started walking doing the road past a herd of 10 people yelling "Amma venthata allam santhosham. Before holding the long snake she prayed inside saying "Everything should be happy and as well as my family. Just as she stopped to start and walk and hand randomly come out from nowhere and it said. "Amma". To her surprise it was a girl that she hasn't ever seen. The girl kept going on saying "It's me Surya your own daughter". Just then a big smile came across Parvthi face and said "is that you Surya grown tall and matured I…..just can't believe it's you. Both hugged and hold there hands together and pulled that the enormous Chithrai Chariot. Many people were there just as the Chariot came to its final stop and the giant garland on it fell right on Parvthi. Parvthi felt really blessed that the Meenaskshi ambal is going to be beside her. Deepa and Parvthi stood for there final and gazed of into the country. Just as they were going to leave a women was in a rage came up to Parvthi and said "I am poor would you spare some change". Something within Parvthi said "I have seen her somewhere and if she's my own sister". The women slowly looked up at Parvthi which really scared her and looked from left to right. With a Sudden Stop saw into the eyes of Parvthi saw who she was. Parvthi said "Who are you and what do you want if money I will give please leave as my daughter is getting scared. Just then that lady should "Parvthi it's me your mother Saratha". Parvthi was puzzled for a second last she saw her mother she was in Chennai at Srini Uncles house for vacation. That was when it struck her Parvthi and realized it was her own mother. But the sad thing was disturbing both Parvthi and Deepa was "How in the world can she a RICH Lady End of the street where there is allot of our family member". Saratha looked different and eventually fainted because of the poverty she faced. Deepa immediately threw some water on her face and with an immediate reaction she woke up and started crying. Parvthi consoled her mother saying "Don't worry Amma I am back and ill change everything for good!". They three went into the jeep and left their own house which was like a palace for them with some smile.

Back in a dark room a mad man was rocking back in forth in his chair looking at a photo. "For many ears I have searched for her and now she has returned and she is going to be mine. The light flickered and came a young handsome fellow calling "Appa what are you doing in her by yourself and why are always glued to that picture. In return his replay was "Dharani me never failed in life until this girl came and wrecked everything my life and my love". "Now she lives like Queen of England and has returned back to Madurai her own town". With a smirk on this face Dharani said "she is going to have an unpleasant welcome and shocked to see each one of her family begging the streets because of what she did to me". "This is who she is my son". An familiar lady was posing with a smile and it was not other then "Parvthi"……………….Freeze






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Edited by pokkri26 - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Nice thambi ,the story beginning itself is very much appreciated ,and still u can add lots of comedies also inbtn ur serial in this .Nice to see madurai and meenakshi amman temple in that start and keep it up thambi.

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