Navakirangal (Serial Fiction) Continuing. - Page 4

today only i read it bro nice start 👏 👏 👏

Hey pokkiri thambi what happened to the second episode ? Still having some problem with that ? Eagarly waiting for ur post payya.

Hey Folks

Whatever long period of time i am going to start posting story. I couldn't stand waiting of not posting anything here. The much of encouragement i got so to continue was the main target so starting today on wards you will get a chance to read my serial have reading and as usual post comments😃.

pokkri😊

Comedian



(Vadivelu) he is going to be old brother of everyone in the good side

Episode 002

Parvthi's picture was in the hands of Dharani. "The day she overshadowed me when I said I love to you fell will never forget what she did to me" Dharani said. He looked at his son who was like I knew he was going to say that. Deepak said "you always have been looking at this photo don't you have a life other then looking at this moment like come on what is with you and her". Dharani gave a striking to his son. "Kanna you don't know about this girl she is not ordinary women she has Bathrakli within in her… when it comes out God Help that person". Deepak grew really fed up with what he was hearing and went up and tore the picture into pieces bit by bit annoyed. "Appa you have been telling the exact same thing the day I was born Forgot God's sake forget this women and live life". Dharani turned into flames and slapped Deepak. The slap so hard and Loud and Deepak flew into the ground hitting the door moaning in pain. Deepak says "Appa are you mental what the heck was that for, just for one photo tore I have torn allot of that women picture……. Now I get is a Slap!!!!!!". Dharani ran up to Deepak and held him up and apologized to him for showing his anger over him. Dharani says " Sorry Deepak I couldn't help it that women makes my blood boil 50'c, just forget about and lets go and eat our dinner". Son and Father give a moment of relive and went to the dinning room to eat the dinner Deepak's Mother(Chinka) cooked. Chinka comes with the food and asks "What was the big sound I heard from upstairs". Deepak and Dharani gives look and both say at say randomly " WE WERE PLAYING HIDING GO SEE". Both give a laugh and as well as Chinka and ate there food. While washing hand Dharani looks at the mirror and sees his evil side " Parvthi welcome back I have some unfinished business to be settled". Nearby Deepak hears this and is shocked to hear it

Parvthi arrives home with Deepa and Saratha. The house looked like a mansion rooms everywhere It reminded Parvthi of her Castle with windows every single where. Parvthi took her first step inside the palace and out ran a black Cat. Saratha tells Parvthi

"This is sign of bad things are going to happen Parvthi Va lets go somewhere else". Parvthi just ignored her old style mother and entered the house. From Deep inside a the house a sound was heard "Raa Raa Raa Raa😆😆😆". Parvthi and Saratha gave a scared look but Deepa just gave a laugh. Parvthi went to where the noise was and found a room looked up she opened it slowly inside and said "Yar Ithu Nigna Yar😕". A Deepa harsh voice comes out of no where in the room " Nan Then di Chandramukhi I have came to bite you🤣🤣". Pravthi says "Anna don't be stupid come out I know it's you😆". From behind her A jingling sound came closer and closer to her and then striked "Raa Raa Vadi Parvthi Raaa podi loosue". A tall dark figure dressed up like Chandramukhi was right infront of her. Parvthi with one hand slap Chandramukhi😆 "Anna Anna you face looks like a gorilla😆. Vadivelu "A Chi I was just having fun and you slap me🤣" Vadivelu falls on the ground but lands on by accidenlty burning wood🤣🤣🤣 that was getting to used for cooking. Vadivelu feels something " Yakka what is that burning smell ". Parvthi says " You haven't changed a bit look what you are siting on🤣". Vadivelu looks at see his But on fair and sreams "ayio enna Kapathango enna kapathango enda osara pothu yakka stop staring help ahhhhhhhhhhhh🤣🤣🤣". Deepa comes with a bucket filled with cool water and throws😆😆😆 it onto Vadivelu who just looks like he can from planet fire🤣. Deepa takes a log from the ground and says " Mamma you need to turn back to your self so this is for you my present😆😆🤣" . Deepa takes the big log and hits the Vadivelu who twirls around🤣 of a second and faints. Parvthi goes and gets ready and comes back and says " I wan to see a friend of mine and leaves. Vadivelu gets up all bleeding and bandaged and looks at himseslf and she AH😆". Deepa and Saratha are laughing there heads off……….freeze

well done da kanna - And who do u have in mind
for the role of Chinka?? if I may, I have a
suggestion - Aishwarya - daughter of yesteryear
actress Lakshmi - provided u have a big role for
Chinka - she is a talented actress and can match
Prakash Raj in acting - recently saw a movie, forgot
the name - she comes only at the end as a pregnant
woman and helps her hubby in tracing his enemy - the
way she jumped out of bed unmindful of her
pregnancy and the way she spoke in a funny slang
was excellent - I just remember only that part in
the whole film!! Rest did not register, even
the name of the movie!!!Vadivelu as the bro of
Paru??? mmm good - a serious Paru and a joker Vedivelu -
good combo 👏 👏 Ok this time around make sure
to continue soon - I had to read the 1st chapter to recollect!!!

Originally posted by: rojapoooo

wVadivelu as the bro of
Paru??? mmm good - a serious Paru and a joker Vedivelu -
good combo 👏 👏 Ok this time around make sure
to continue soon - I had to read the 1st chapter to recollect!!!

will do My Queen. I cant disobey so will continue😃. Thank akka

Just wonder how is my Comedy anywhere i need to improve or soo if i do you would tell me😛. I would love to learn

Vow!!! very nice little boy. Vadivelu scenes I imagined infront of my eyes. thats gr8. well done 👏

do the next post da kanna, as Roja akka said, I need to read ur first post to recall the characters.

Great going brother and the pictures just cracked me more 👏 👏
😆 😆 😆

Good one tamby, I really enjoyed the comedy. Proud that tamby has great talents.

Pokkri thambi: Very good beginning. Madurai and meenakshi temple is making me feel nostalgic. malarum ninaivugaL. 😭 😭 this is aanandhak kanneer from my memories. :)
Cast selection is super. All are great actors/ actresses.
We need comedy in serials very badly. I am glad that you added comedy. I enjoyed the vadivelu scene very much. I could picturise the whole scene. You will make a very good serial director coz you know what not to add in your serials by reading the opinions of many people in the forum. :) Good luck to you thambi. Once you become a famous serial director, do not forget these IF friends. :) We will be proud to say that pokkri, the famous director is our own dear thambi. :)
Waiting to read more. Great job, bro. 👏 👏 👏