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Posted: 18 years ago
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Thank you for your comments and here's my next chapter:

Chapter 8

Meanwhile, Prem was at Clapham still carrying Jenny on his back. All the girls were looking at him with jealously presuming if there boyfriends can do this for us.

One girl whispered, "That girl is such a lucky cow to have a bloke doing this for her."

Jenny was enjoying the elephant ride Prem has offered her to do. Even in her entire life no one would have done this for me. However, Prem back was hurting ice broken rocks and moaning inside that he should have not offered this.

After one hour they reach to the Pentagon club. This clubhouse was by far the best club; it had the best facilities, best DJs, best music's and certainly the best dance hall to boogie around. They all raced to the dance hall. The music blasted with mixture of songs like I wanna love you by Akon. This song was Prem's favourite as he danced closely with Jenny and ended up embarking a passionate kiss for many minutes. To their amusement many people were watching this kiss as it lightened the dance hall.

The DJ shouted out, "WELL WELL WELL! I CAN SEE SOME LOVE IN THE AIR!" Everyone started singling along the DJs tune. Poor Prem and Jenny ran out of the club and continued kissing at the corner of the club.

Whilst they were kissing, some bad boys came and teased Jenny and Prem. At first talk through things civilly telling, "Listen fellas! I want you to stop this right now."

One gangster member asks, "What will you do if you don't?"

"Now, you won't be able to face." Prem replies. Then the gang members show gratitude between them and push Prem onto the floor. Suddenly, he loses his control and a fight outbreaks and Jenny tries to stop him from a fight but no use as she was pushed onto the floor and fainted. The fight becomes out of control even the club members try stopping this fight but it was no use. As Prem has lost his control and was fighting viscously as if a gladiator was fighting his enemy. His eyeball was striking red like thick blood and blood came through his head.

A few minutes later, sirens are hovering across the streets of the road along with ambulances and park onto the road. They march to the scene of the incident and arrest Prem whereas, the gang escape. Poor Jenny ran behind the police and she explains the incident what happened and they let him free giving him a warning that there shall be no incident what so ever. Otherwise, I will arrest you on what ever conditions.

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Edited by usha_pooja - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
#22

I HAVE DONE ANOTHER CHAPTER TO GET THE STORY MOVING. HERE IT GOES:

Chapter 9

Prem thanks Jenny for rescuing his life as he's brother would of have been ashamed to see me in this state. However, she reveals she's not bothered to commit a relationship with him as she already has a boyfriend called Dave and I used you for just a time pass and make my boyfriend jealous. Due to a recent argument we had separated but I cannot get over him.

Poor Prem was heartbroken and devastated to hear this as he really felt in love with a woman for the first time. But, then congrates her on her upcoming love and left in tears rolling down his cheeks.

Meanwhile, Charu and Prakash's were seated opposite each other staring at each other's eyes constantly and they were silent throughout their journey back home until, they were about to go to their respective apartments. Charu called him inside as she wanted to speak to him something extremely important and

Prakash comes inside. They enter into the living room and they sit down closely to each other.

"What do you want to tell me?" questions Prakash

"I don't know how to start this." Smiles Charu and Prakash flickers with her long broomstick hair.

"Go on and tell me." Smiles Prakash

"I'm in love with you. Ever since I saw you the first time. That bump on my head happened when I was dreaming about you."

Prakash then spills the beans, "Yaar! I too also love you! That is why I came to this apartment opposite your one."

"Really!" Screams Charu and hugs him saying I love you loads, "But then how did you know where I lived."

"Actually, remember the first time I meet you." Smiled Prakash, he whispered into her ears and she nodded, "Well, I first saw you a year ago when you were doing a psychology presentation for the students. I was much flattened. I still remember the clothes you wore a nice pink blouse and black trousers. From then onwards I followed behind you wherever you been, that's why how I found out that the apartment opposite yours was on sale. I was really nervous to approach you as I wondered if you yell at me. Even Prem taught I was mad when I wrote your name several times in a notebook. He would wind me to an extent."

Charu was stunned and froze smiling with him for minutes and said, "I don't believe you a teacher falling with me. How fascinating. I taught you were a geek who never falls in love."

"Now now now… I ain't a geek but a sweet gentleman."

Sarcastically tells Prakash, "Well, as this is our true love we must take this slowly in order to have a successful life." She nods as her cheeky boy said and pinches his cheeks. Yet another cat and mouse game happens between them as they chase around the apartments. Suddenly, Prem comes home in bandages on his forehead and looks at them as they have found there match. Both Charu and Prakash stand there frozen looking at the state at Prem.

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Edited by usha_pooja - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Usha very well written. Thanks. I really enjoyed reading it.
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Posted: 18 years ago
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oh...so many chapters and many things has happend..well done yaar!! 👏 👏
I felt bad for Prem who was heartbroken but he will get over it 😆 nice to see the loverbirds in love and confessing their love 😳

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Posted: 18 years ago
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wow usha! so many chapters! i loved every bit of it. awww.. this prakash & charu are too cute.😳😳 prem fell in love for the first time? he is such a flirt, god knows how many times he fell in 'love for the first time' with women.😆😆 lols! anyways, hope he finds his soulmate soon!😉

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Posted: 18 years ago
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I hope he does Leena let's hope and thank you for your lovely comments. Oh yeah! This fan ficiton bits of them have happened in reality with someone i know. Here's my next chapter:

Chapter 10

Prem was taken inside his house Prakash sits down giving an angry look after Prem tells him all about the incident. Charu meanwhile, gives coffee cups to them and advises her beau, "Listen, you need to just take a chill pill. As Prem is lucky not to be arrested by the police."

"Arrested!" shouts Prakash, "I really wished he has. As on several occasions I told him not to go off the rails. But, he doesn't take my advice so seriously. Charu, what should I do?"

"Well, my advice is to get him some help and as a psychiatrist I will try and give him the full support he needs. Remember the day, you told me you will come for help in the coming future. Prakash nods, "Well darling this is the right time to help." Prem looks at her when calling him darling and is wondering something fishy is going on.

"I hope this works. As he needs to become a changed man for a start and succeed as a model. If not then his life will be at risk and then no one won't come and help you." Prakash explains to them and questions Prem, "Are you ready to become a changed man." Prem nods and the pair are delighted.

"Before, that we need to check if you have any diseases as you been having so many relationships. That can put yourself into risk." Charu advises easing off with breeze if her hair just touched her face. Both the brothers agree with this to put a full stop into this mess. She explains about counselling and leaves.

A few hours later whilst they were having their supper Dosa with chutney curry, Prem hesitantly asks, "I don't how to start this but I want to get this out of my mind. It's been bugging me today."

"What?" asks Prakash

"Well…" Prem starts

Prakash becomes annoyed, "Just tell me what you want to ask. Otherwise, I will be listening to your well's."

"OKAY! What's cooking with you and that ticket?" Prem questions

Prakash confused, "Which ticket?"

"Well, that ticket don't you know whom I talking about." Prem explains

"Man, seriously I don't understand what you chatting about." Prakash answers in a waffled way.

"Great! I have a fool who stuck his head into a world of Maths. You are such a creep. It's CHARU. Now you know whom Im talking about."

"Emmm Emmm!" nods Prakash, "Why are you asking?"

Prem explains, "Well, the way you behave with each other there's something fishy and unusual for me to believe especially you."

"What now are you starting to talk about my Paro." Argues Prakash

"Hold your horses! Is that the Sharada you been writing in your diary and notebook for the past year." Asks a stunned Prem and geek nods. "Oh my God! Oh my God! I cannot believe you have found love but with this freak." Prem complains

Prakash defends, "My Paro ain't a freak but an intelligent, lovely and sweet hearted young lady. She's my dream girl."

"OKAY! OKAY! IM KIDDING AS IF I TALK ABOUT THIS FURTHER THEN YOU GONNA THROW PLATES AT ME. SO IM ESCAPING." Prem sarcastically tells and Prakash stuffs him with dosas and Chutney curry poured onto his head.

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Edited by usha_pooja - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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My next chapter installment:

Chapter 11

A few weeks later, Prem's counselling sessions are going terrific as his university work showed a difference. He was more punctual to his lessons; teachers are giving him good reviews and spent less time flirting with girls. On top of that he started going to fashion shows and even performed there as he had the best catwalk. Meanwhile, Charu and Prakash were getting more and more time together getting to know each other. They frequently went to each other's houses and workplaces during their break. Sometimes they would meet on the river side chatting and eying each other.

Then, one Monday evening after their respective jobs Prakash took Charu hand in hand to the Crane river side in Twickenham. They sat down on one of the beaches near the river Charu questioned, "What's so special about this place?"

"When I was studying at university. I come here occasionally as there was something special about this place that sparkled me here especially for love." Explains Prakash as he placed her onto his lap and she was biting his ear.

They were talking for over an hour, ticking each other and playing around until both of them kept quiet… slowly she got up but her hand was held tightly and Prakash's lips were slowly moving to Charu's lips her hand touched on his shoulders and his hand were rubbing onto her chubby thighs and sneakily moved to her cheeks. They embanked the kiss they were waiting for many months. A kiss which moved them onto the reality world and they stared into each other a few minutes later "Did you just kiss me?" asked a meek Charu.

He continued kissing her without a reply for many minutes. He kissed from her forehead, to her eyes which, were glistening into the deep night sky, his glasses were rubbing onto her soft whipping cream face, onto her bare neck right down to her shoulders. Until, they notice a small audience looking at them and one small kid came to them asking, "What are you guys doing?"

Charu got angry and took her handbag and chased the kids around the river yelling, "Mind your business and next time you come here Im going to send you back into the North Pole with the penguins and polar bears."

Prakash was filming all of this onto his mobile phone and the people were looking at her as if she needs to be admitted to a psychiatrist. A few minutes later, she noticed her man just filmed all of this onto his mobile phone. She got extremely angry and chased him around the whole river side for over half an hour demanding the video to be erased. However, he refused to erase the video clipping and more frustrated she got and chased him around the river. Until, there was a banana skin lying onto the floor and Charu slipped onto the floor. "That's what happens if you chase over." Prakash teased her.

"OUCH MY FOOT. PICK ME UP. PICK ME UP." Demands a bossy Charu

"Well, should I?" questions Prakash, "After all you deserve this all chasing me and those poor incident kids around the place."

The kids were laughing so much shouting you deserve this and more. Charu shouts, "Watch when I come down here I turn you guys into a sausage."

"You kids don't want to be mess around. As she's going to turn into a kali." Jokes Prakash

She gets more furious and streams are coming out of her ears, her face turns red hot chilly peppers.

Prem comes up and laughs at the pair, "Yo! Anna and Anni, you must audition for a CBBC show which can be called the Charu and Prakash show. It can be a new version of Tom and Jerry. Why don't you pick up the princess before she gets angry?"

They pick her up and she gets furious and before they go to the kids they escape the place. Prem explains, "I came here ever since you started romancing each other and it was my plan to bring these kids and wind you up. Anni I never knew you had a high temper and sir I never knew you can romance so well."

Prakash grabs Prem, "So this is your plan. I must mention I never knew your anni can turn so angry and has now turned her self into a complete fool."

Charu is embarrassed and decides to chase Prem but, "Anni, don't chase me otherwise, in tomorrow paper's this chase will be as the headlines."

Her head lands on Prakash's shoulder and he hugs her firmly and whispers to Prem, "You like this ticket?"

"Ticket!" screams Charu and kicks him onto his stomach, "I ain't a ticket you penguin, pigeon."

"In fact you're a buffalo or even an elephant." Moans Prakash

"Even better to the buffalo race matches. It will suit her. But Anni will make you a perfect match since, you're a work freak she can control you. The problem is your gonna end up in hospital so often." Adds Prem with a twist.

They all laugh but Charu is embarrassed about this revaluation.

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Edited by usha_pooja - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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lols! hilarious chapters usha! really very funny. "Ticket"..🤣🤣🤣 awww... prakash kissed charu, so sweet!😳😳 and i like the way you wrote chubby thighs instead of saying big thighs or something derogatory like that.😃

Edited by jigglypuff726 - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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It was an awesome chapter buddy. I really like you sense of humour. The ticket? That was funny. 😆 😆 Lovebirds first kiss was cute and Prem taking it slowly, he will probably meet his soul mate soon. 😳 Keep it up buddy. 😉
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Posted: 18 years ago
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THANKS EVERYONE FOR YR COMMENTS. IM REALLY SORRY THE DELAY AS YESTERDAY I WAS BUSY WITH MY BIOLOGY COURSEWORK. HERES MY NEXT CHAPTER:

Chapter 12

The next morning, Prakash was at his lesson teaching his mathematics lesson to the students about geometry until, the receptionist comes up to him, "Prakash, the girl who chased you around Brixton station last week is here."

One student teases him, "Sir is she your girlfriend?"

Another student, "How long have you been dating?"

"Why didn't you tell us that your seeing a girl." Complains another student, "We can spice up your love life."

"Yo teacher! What's the chick's name? Is she pretty. Is she like that woman from Pride and Prejudice?" Questions another noisy student

Prakash remains silent but turns embarrassed when another student confides, "Sir, I saw you kissing that lady the other day by the riverside." Everyone starts making noises especially the girls when they hiss at him asking, "If he's a good kisser."

Then in a sudden twist he tells them, "That's for me to know and for you to get on with the tasks I have given you." He then leaves to meet Charu.

Meanwhile at class a student goes to the desk and asks the girl, "Hey! Are you serious you saw him kissing the other day?"

"Yeah! It was romantic I never knew he can get into such liaison." Answers the other girl,

"Then, I saw her chasing some kids it was hilarious and he was filming it, she felt and he said some random comment which, ended up him being kicked on the stomach."

"YOU'RE SERIOUS! I TAUGHT HE WILL GO FOR SOME ARRANGED MARRIAGE COS HE'S A WORK FREAK AND A GOODY TWO SHOES." Mentions the noisy student.

"Girl, we know one side of him but, we just realised another side of him. Strange never knew men like him are into romance." Mentions this girl, "I must admit he sounds pretty romantic and any girl will be lucky to go on a romantic date. I really wish I did."

"Really don't tell me you had a crush on him." Jokes the noisy girl

"Hell no! He's a teacher and Im a student and I have a boyfriend." Tells this girl.

"Well well well… someone is interested of my love life." Jokes Prakash, "You know I heard what you were speaking. Lucky she wasn't here."

"Why?" asks the embarrassed student

Prakash laughs, "She's a wild Scorpio! She will give you a headache but, then she's a nice natured woman."

"Wow!" exclaims the entire student, "Sir she can make you a less teacher like." Jokes one student.

"I could imagine her being here. She will be delighted to see a lively class." Smiles Prakash and they all are excited to hear this compliment. "Well, that's enough of my love life and let's gets on with the geometry work." They all get the work completed.

Later, at midnight Prem returns back from his fashion show at Central London. Whilst, walking into the station waiting for the train back home. A girl with her briefcase is being chased by some gang. Prem is walking about with his project on his hand and accidentally the girl falls on top of him.

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COULD ALL THE SILENT READERS PLEASE IF U DONT MIND MAKE A COMMENT OR A SMALL THANKS. THEREFORE, IT CAN GIVE ME MORE CONFIDENCE TO WRITE MORE CHAPTERS.

Edited by usha_pooja - 18 years ago

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