A romance to remember!!! - Page 2

thanks everyone for their comments, Im preciated by them. Here's my next chapter:

New character:

Prem = Deepak

Chapter 5

Next day, Prakash has a difficult sleep after shifting from their council house into the same apartment as Charu. His mischief and annoying brother Prem gives him undeserved wake up alarm. It's not hot water but, a bottle of tomato ketchup sauce squirted onto his face.

Prem sweetly smiles, "Good morning my dear; work freak brother!"

"Morning! WHY DID YOU POUR KETCHUP SAUCE ON ME!!!!!!" Growls Prakash like a dinosaur.

"Well….your sleep was too much torture as you kept on preparing for your boring maths lessons. Can't you think about my future anni as I want her to cook me food and I had enough of eating your burnt food." Whines Prem like a little boy.

Prakash tells, "There will be an anni for you coming one day. For the meanwhile let me clean my face cos it smells of rotten tomato ketchup. I hate ketchup. YUCK!"

Prem is very mischief boy. He and Prakash were brought up by their grandparents as their parents died from a dangerous car crash when Prem was a year old. Currently, he's doing his undergraduate degree in art and design in Kingston University. And dreams of becoming a successful model. Both of the brothers are thick like wood and best of buddies and they are there for each other in any situations.

Sadly, their personalities ain't similar despite they are close. Since, Prem had many girlfriends, used them for short term relationship and numerous one night stands. This is known to Prakash and has advised him in several occasions however, it goes through one station to the next.

Today's Saturday and both the brothers are sitting down and munching on their breakfast until a doorbell rings. A little argument happens between them who will open the door until Prakash decides to open the door. As he opens the door slowly, he's amused and shell shocked to see Charu but then laughs at the bump she had received on her head. She was dressed in blue boots, blue leggings and long half sleeved top and felt excited as her man is living here from now on. Also, she glared onto his Gucci glasses as it suited him a lot and his blue shirt with a nice hair cut.

"Prakash, what's so funny!" Yells Charu

Prakash laughs and tells, "What happened to your bump? It seems you have been hitted by a tennis ball."

Charu mutters inside, "Well you coming into my dream last night."

"Well, what happened?" questions Prakash

Charu lies, "I got chased by a dog and then I fell down."

"DOG!!" Prem exclaims as he comes to the front door, "Man, this girl should audition to a comedy show. She will make a good one."

Prakash tells his mischief brother to chill and enquires are you ok despite telling the truth it was amusing funny and calls Charu inside.

Prem is introduced to her and she's introduced to him. Sadly, she wasn't pleased to hear that he had a foolish, immature brother. All three of them are having a good chat and Charu decides they should go out somewhere today. They all agree to do so!

Comments and suggestations are welcomed

wow! great chapters usha! i loved the funny quirky way that you write your story.😃 a unique & cute story, i can't wait for your next chapter. charu is an adorable character. her clumsiness & daydreams remind me a lot of myself.😆😆😆

Thank you guys, for your lovely comments. Its nice you have enjoyed this chapter. Leena never you had similar characteristics like Charu LOL. This coming chapter is a short and simple one here it is and enjoy comments and suggestations are welcomed:

Chapter 6

They all decided to go to Brixton but Charu wasn't happy to go there as it's a dangerous place. Prem was excited so, he can meet up the girls at the night clubs but Prakash convinced her there have a wide variety of shops. Instead, her favourite place is Southall Broadway as it has lovely selections of Indian clothing. Upon Prem hearing this he sarcastically mentions, "LITTLE INDIA! THERE'S NOTHING EXPECT FOR THAT TUTOR ROSE NIGHT CLUB WHICH, THERE WILL BE LOTS OF BHANGRA MUSIC. I HATE THEM EWWWWWWW"

Charu becomes annoyed but then for Prakash's shake she decides to come to Brixton. They all decide to take the train there hence; it's easier and quicker to get there just like the Euro star.

Whilst, on the Victoria line heading to Brixton, Prem was chatting up a girl called Jenny who was sitting on his lap. Charu was giving dirty looks at Prem and Prakash was talking like a non-stop radio to her however, her mind was on Prem thinking, "How the hell this Prakash can have an immature brother."

"Charu, Charu, hello!!!!" called Prakash

"Yes!!!!!" Charu moaned

Prakash questioned, "Why are you looking like this at my brother."

"Well…." Charu started but was interrupted when Prem wanted to get off at Vauxhall and gave Jenny a piggy back that, was wearing inappropriate clothes. This was watched by Charu who just stared at this pathetic boy. Her face stormed with thunderstorms to see them go.

interesting chapter usha! looks to me like charu's dream man isn't the sweet prakash but the flirty prem.😉 i can't wait to read your next chapters. your story's really fun to read yaar, unlike mine which is becoming a bore.😆😆😆

Originally posted by: jigglypuff726

interesting chapter usha! looks to me like charu's dream man isn't the sweet prakash but the flirty prem.😉 i can't wait to read your next chapters. your story's really fun to read yaar, unlike mine which is becoming a bore.😆😆😆

Hey Jiggly,

your story is not boring, its quite interesting. You all are young and so talented and never underestimate yourself... we all really enjoy reading all your stories...👏 👏 👏

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Originally posted by: jigglypuff726

interesting chapter usha! looks to me like charu's dream man isn't the sweet prakash but the flirty prem.😉 i can't wait to read your next chapters. your story's really fun to read yaar, unlike mine which is becoming a bore.😆😆😆

Leena dear, very interesting point but, i shall explain what i mean. Well, Charu was digusted to look at Prem cos she never knew this sweet Prakash could have this filrty brother. She initally taught that, Prem will be a decent fellow but no!!!!

Leena your stories aint boring but super duper. Like serial said everyone has their own talents dear.

thx everyone for your super duper comments. Im appreciated. Thx Serial for the convicing comment and Leena i hope you have understood what i mean now. Here's my latest chapter:

Chapter 7

Charu came closer to Prakash, her long fingernails touched on his knee and before she laid her head onto his shoulders. He got up and foolishly bumped her head onto the seat and Prakash busted out laughing along with the other passengers on the carriage.

Charu felt ever so embarrassed as her cheeks went very red and got up with her handbag and chased him out of the train station; all the passengers were looking at them and the police officer told his colleague "Don't these two people make a lovely couple."

"Well, infact they should join the police force." The other said.

Charu managed to grab him and gave him punches and kicks however; Prakash grabbed her hand and held her tightly around him. She was enjoying that moment smiling to her with joy and smelt his Lynx body spray which was extremely strong. Then, said to her heart, "I wish I can proclaim my love to you soon."

Meanwhile, Prakash giggled, "Well, you want to beat me dee." Luckily, on the nick of time she sprinted like an athlete all the way through the station but then got the telling off by the ticket checkers for behaving like little kids. Both of them were embarrassed looking at each other as other passengers were whispering at their foolishness and stared at them. An old lady came to Charu and said, "My dear! I can see sparkle on your eyes. That gentleman looks handsome just like Romeo. Go for him as he looks like a lucky fish to catch. If was younger I would of got this fish."

Charu blushed as a red rose just blossomed during a summer season and looked at him who was standing there cleaning his glasses and staring at Charu wondering if she has gone nutcrackers.

A few hours later, both Charu and Prakash have done their shopping and landed them selves into a Thai restaurant and tucked themselves into some noodles. Both were eating but Charu soup landed onto the table Prakash teased her, "Well, you remind me of my cousin Surya who eats so inappropriately."

"Please Prakash, don't start with this non-sense. As I had enough of this today." Charu moaned however, inside her heart she was enjoying the fun, all of the teasing, eying and romantic moments blossomed in her heart. Will my Devdas realise my love? She glances at his lovely cute smile.

After there scummy lunch, they were walking around the streets of Brixton until a voice called out his name. Prakash turned back to see it's one of his students who has come to say hello to him. They were chatting causally and Charu was looking with jealously. Until, this student was introduced to her and said, "Is she your girlfriend?"

Prakash replied, "I haven't decided but she my ideal women as I don't know I had dreams about this pretty lady."

"You look like a sizing couple with loads of chemistry." Replied the student and left.

Both of them looked at each other and smiled!!!!!

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