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Posted: 18 years ago
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THIS IS MY NEXT CHAPTER:

Chapter 13

Geeta = Preethi

"WOAH! You're all right!" Prem asks in shock when he holds the girl.

The girl answers, "Well, I don't have time to answer as I'm getting chased by some people."

"OK! I HELP YOU OUT." Explains Prem

The guys come closer to the girl and they play about with her until Prem gives that person a punch and is warned, "Don't even dare touch her."

"What will happen if I do touch her? Who are you to ask that?" one of guys answers

"Im her husband!" Prem drops them a bombshell. The guys are shocked to hear that and they apologise for doing this and escapes before anything worse happens.

"Why did you tell them Im your husband?" argues the girl

Prem explains, "There was no other choice but to tell this as they won't play about with you. OKAY! What is your name?"

"Geeta"

"Nice name." Smiles Prem, "OKAY! Tell me why you are with a briefcase?"

"Actually, I don't have a place to live since, my previous house owners told me to move out of the house." Explains Geeta, "As they have been caught by the councils as they were disrupting the neighbours."

Prem tells, "Oh poor you! I and my brother went through this experience when living in a rented house. Well, you come with me and I will make arrangements."

"Thanks! Im attending Kingston University studying biomedical science 1st year." Geeta tells

"Wow! Wow!" gasps Prem in shock, "Looks like you are most definitely welcomed to our area as the university is near to our apartment."

Prem and Geeta both get on the train to Prem's house. They were seated next to each other getting to know each other. Geeta was fascinated to know Prem wants to become a model and he's stunned she's wants to become a doctor as he never made a friend through the science field.

Meanwhile, Prakash is waiting by the door for Prem to come back as it's almost 3am in the morning. Charu opens the door to find Prakash outside the door, wearing her pink pyjamas comes outside. She then plants a kiss at his lips and asked, "What are you doing at this time of night?"

"I'm waiting for Prem. He hasn't turned up yet." Tells a concerned Prakash,

"Don't worry Prem is not a small boy but a big young man. Who's able to face life." Charu hugs Prakash whilst telling him.

Then, Prem comes bringing Geeta along and stands there watching their romance. He pinches Prakash he then moans to Charu not to pinch him. She tells him that I ain't pinching him but next time I will. Prem yet again pinch him and he warns her not to pinch him but, then she moans she didn't. Geeta is laughing at the nuisance. Then, they all realise its Prem and realise he's with a girl.

COMMENTS AND SUGGESTATIONS ARE WELCOMED

Edited by usha_pooja - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
#32
HI Usha

Just finished reading all the chapters from start to finish in ore moochu! CHo chweet....you have a very good sense of humour. I wish Geeta and Prem fall in love soon...BTW who is Prem, prakash and Charu. I dont watchj saratha...so i am lost.
Good luck on your upcoming chapters.
Madhu
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Posted: 18 years ago
#33

Originally posted by: madumithas

HI Usha

Just finished reading all the chapters from start to finish in ore moochu! CHo chweet....you have a very good sense of humour. I wish Geeta and Prem fall in love soon...BTW who is Prem, prakash and Charu. I dont watchj saratha...so i am lost.
Good luck on your upcoming chapters.
Madhu

Well, Madhu:

Prem is none other your friend Deepak

Saratha is Deepa Venkat she came in serials like Surya, Kolangal and lots more

Prakash is Vishwa. His role is unforgetable in Metti oli.

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Posted: 18 years ago
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wow! 2 chapters? what a treat! great job usha!👏👏 i loved your 2nd chapter. the part where prem meets geeta.. aww.. cho cute!😳😳😳

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Just went throught the chapters--Very nice and you have taken lots of efforts to write some wonderful things--when I read about sending someone to North pole to give company to penguins and polar bears, I remembered your similar threat to send someone else in a rocket and blast her off out of this world--anyway you do have lots of imagination!

Just one small comment on the story content--may be you can go little slow on various events happening and give some more time to description rather--I just felt the events in the story are happening too fast!
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Dear Usha........ just like Mahdu, started to read this from first page onwards. I liked it. It was really good, and funny and romantic. It was nice.

A advice though, just like Dasa wrote, it is going way too fast. So a little of bit expansion on the incidences would be nice.

Thankx
Edited by Caryn - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
#37
Just finished reading your two latest chapters. Like Leena said, Prem meeting Geetha was very cute. 😳 And the students teasing Prakash was funny 😆 , cause it remind what we did last year. We also used to tease our workshop leader last semester. 😉
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Posted: 18 years ago
#38
Usha,
You are busy too today? 😭 😭 Its ok..take your time...
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Posted: 18 years ago
#39

Originally posted by: serial123

Usha,
You are busy too today? 😭 😭 Its ok..take your time...

Yerp buddy far too busy so didnt have time to do my chapters. Science teachers has dropped a bombshell on me 😭 all courseworks must be due in next week 😭 😭 😭

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Oh! thats ok Usha. First finish your Science assignments... Take your time... We will wait...

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